View Full Version : Check my New Freestyle Rap Video

10-14-2006, 02:15 PM


10-14-2006, 02:32 PM
are you for real?

10-14-2006, 02:38 PM
what u mean?

10-14-2006, 06:35 PM

10-14-2006, 06:36 PM
i thought u had a busted nose

10-14-2006, 06:58 PM
WTF? sorry J-Cee but no I don't think so.

10-14-2006, 07:28 PM
At least he is trying. Cant say that about others. keep doin ur thang JC. If its ment to be then it will all fall into place. You know its bad when you hear overwhelming negative feedback. You only get a few haters. ur doin ok. When it gets totally quiet , you have something. When everybody thinks its dope then they are not concerned about you. they are infatuated with where you will go and whom you will meet. The world is cold thats why you gotta come with the heat.


10-15-2006, 02:06 AM
WTF? sorry J-Cee but no I don't think so.

what the fuk is that suppose to mean..it cracks me up when ppl who cant even freestyle make negative comments..try it homie...

10-15-2006, 02:18 AM
this isn't a bad freestyle at all...i don't know what people expect. this isn't fuckin rapcity. herbs. keep it up man, the audio quality is the only problem.

10-15-2006, 02:20 AM
thanks brotha..yeh its done on a mobile phone and transferred to the computer..thats why the audio..but its all good.I was tryin somethin different at the start with the fast shit..then was switchin up accents n shit..should just stick to 1 thing.

10-15-2006, 02:22 AM
whatever, it's a freestyle. the only way you can get better is by switching up and see what works best. don't sweat it.

PS that was my comment i left on the vid

10-15-2006, 02:24 AM
true..peace 4 tha comments.

10-15-2006, 02:29 AM
that shit made me cry at the end.

10-15-2006, 02:45 AM

10-15-2006, 07:07 AM
Well, at least you can roll your R's well.

10-15-2006, 08:36 AM
what the fuk is that suppose to mean..it cracks me up when ppl who cant even freestyle make negative comments..try it homie...

Ok J-Cee you want me to go into detail? ok then, first I will say that I don't rhyme but one thing I do know about is flow and lyrics.
Alot of my friends are mc's some are even signed to labels, I'm the guy they come too when they want views on their lyrics in fact I have one of my friends albums which he has asked me to review because he respects my opinion.

First up if your gonna showcase yourself at least put it on good quality audio, I barely heard a word you said, secondly you where going on like some american which just screamed wannabe, I would comment on the lyrics more but because I couldn't hear them well I'll just say that from what I heard I don't think thats you, you should just be yourself, you're clearly not a gangsta so don't act like you are ok?

And for the record check your previous thread when you posted up your freestyle the first time, so im not a "hater" or anything else you want to label me because you can't take negative critism.

10-15-2006, 08:54 AM
yes i can take critisicm..jsut u didnt explain it like u did now in your previous posts.
What part of the freestyle was acting gangsta though?it was me,cause i was jsut spitting shit..without a act or nothing..iw as just switching up my voice for something different.Next time ill try and do it on something with better quality