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martyr
10-31-2006, 09:17 PM
i know people who

push crack in a meth phase to get paid, jux cats for they neck chains
hood rats on that text game are sex crazed, kush blacks on the x brains
like the Roman's i'm goal driven for riches as i open an Olde English
as i'm exposing the whole midrift of bitches who hope for a pole finish

all i got is me and the beat, booty's huge knocking knees with a freak
Gucci shoes, shopping sprees i'm dropping G's on her feet
weather it's the movies or church, it's boobies in shirts and booties in skirts
the coochie is worked, my doobies and certs in her Dooney and Burke

my coke in her ass, cause i like how it smells when i snort it
she's stroking my sack, cause she likes how she felt so important
bending over, showing me the back of a broad with her ass in a thong,
then she gags on my balls like she's smoking grass in a bong

as i'm hanging back with dudes who feed the block like wade to shaq
cats with basic raps who need to stop and take a nap
this is gangsta rap, as i rep stellar and blaze a track
my amazing past is a best seller in paper back

my biography bumps, i got a hard knock life
i'd get in psychology slumps when i was the bar hop type
now i'm you're idol kid, you don't want it when the rifle spits
all you can do is pass and run like you're micheal vick

i'm shifty as fuck, gritty and gully spitting for what?
i know cats who like to fight but i won't stop till every one in this city gets stuck
there isn't anything else, this is enough

J.T.S.
11-03-2006, 11:09 AM
i know people who

push crack in a meth phase to get paid, jux cats for they neck chains
hood rats on that text game are sex crazed, kush blacks on the x brains
like the Roman's i'm goal driven for riches as i open an Olde English
as i'm exposing the whole midrift of bitches who hope for a pole finish

all i got is me and the beat, booty's huge knocking knees with a freak
Gucci shoes, shopping sprees i'm dropping G's on her feet
weather it's the movies or church, it's boobies in shirts and booties in skirts
the coochie is worked, my doobies and certs in her Dooney and Burke

my coke in her ass, cause i like how it smells when i snort it
she's stroking my sack, cause she likes how she felt so important
bending over, showing me the back of a broad with her ass in a thong,
then she gags on my balls like she's smoking grass in a bong

as i'm hanging back with dudes who feed the block like wade to shaq
cats with basic raps who need to stop and take a nap
this is gangsta rap, as i rep stellar and blaze a track
my amazing past is a best seller in paper back

my biography bumps, i got a hard knock life
i'd get in psychology slumps when i was the bar hop type
now i'm you're idol kid, you don't want it when the rifle spits
all you can do is pass and run like you're micheal vick

i'm shifty as fuck, gritty and gully spitting for what?
i know cats who like to fight but i won't stop till every one in this city gets stuck
there isn't anything else, this is enough

Whole piece was t.k.o. Mar good to see you back on here with craziness like this you should be droppin' gold bangers!

Bigot Hitman
11-03-2006, 02:25 PM
I see the schemes, i like this piece it flows real good

noel411
11-05-2006, 12:19 AM
This caught my eye as I haven't seen you post here in ages. I wasn't really into it. Didn't seem like you. Usually I find your lyrics interesting, but this was kinda throwaway. Tight and heavy on the rhyme schemes as I know you tend to be, just missed with the content on this one imo. Second last bar seemed to throw the flow off badly too, but I don't believe one can adequately comment on the flow of a piece by reading it. It might flow perfectly with the beat and your flow for all I know. I can't really imagine this lyrical style adapting well to your sound in audio, but I'd be interested to hear.

Anyway, good to see something new from you. Keep doing your thing.

ArcherPriest
11-05-2006, 12:36 AM
I liked this one aite...writing aspects are top game fo sho... a couple lines i wadnt feelin so much as far as the lyrics go... but the whole scheme and transition between lines was real good

Sicka than aidZ
11-05-2006, 01:28 AM
Whole piece was t.k.o. Mar good to see you back on here with craziness like this you should be droppin' gold bangers!
yeah martyr fuckin burned em

Lil' Ruger
11-05-2006, 01:29 AM
i thought it was pretty good. nuff said but nothing that stood out just basically flowed.

Sicka than aidZ
11-05-2006, 02:10 AM
its hot, arch'z right about what he said about rhyme aspectz. it'z da style dat getz u all da bitchez

martyr
11-09-2006, 09:42 PM
...ey thanks to all who've replied... this is different than i normally spit, but sometimes this is what i do...

ElusiveFugitive
11-09-2006, 09:53 PM
what up Martyr, its good to see you blessin' the temple.

Like some of the other dudes have mentioned, this is a somewhat different style compared to some of your previous works. The content on this joint is grimey and very tangible. I would like to see you play with this perspective a little bit more

Your multis and rhyme scheme transitions are flawlessly fluid as always, so technically very sound.

Keep the ink flowin'

ONE LOVE
Elusive

VernakuLa
11-10-2006, 09:35 AM
This caught my eye as I haven't seen you post here in ages. I wasn't really into it. Didn't seem like you. Usually I find your lyrics interesting, but this was kinda throwaway. Tight and heavy on the rhyme schemes as I know you tend to be, just missed with the content on this one imo. Second last bar seemed to throw the flow off badly too, but I don't believe one can adequately comment on the flow of a piece by reading it. It might flow perfectly with the beat and your flow for all I know. I can't really imagine this lyrical style adapting well to your sound in audio, but I'd be interested to hear.

Anyway, good to see something new from you. Keep doing your thing.
NO L"SSSSSSSSSSS

noel411
11-12-2006, 05:32 PM
NO L"SSSSSSSSSSS
Whatup lil' homie? What the deal is?