View Full Version : The Butcher introduces The Hands of Time
11-02-2006, 08:26 AM
click the link and tell me what you think................
11-03-2006, 06:53 AM
can i get some feedback on this
11-05-2006, 03:49 PM
sometimes no news is good news, but someone tell me your oppinion on this.
11-06-2006, 07:25 AM
11-08-2006, 07:33 PM
11-09-2006, 02:04 PM
I like the sound. Liking the drums. All the S sounds are distorted. Narrative is hot. Your lyrics match the beat nicely. Like the concept with all the stories on the hours in the first verse. Not feeling the second and third that much. You should mix this better. I think you should scratch the chorus.
11-11-2006, 01:00 PM
yo thanks for the feed back, ya im worken on a better 2nd verse for the song so it matches better. I like the chorus bcuz my original idea came from the old classic song classic song "rock around the clock" but thanks for the feed back, and ya the distortion, i cant help it, writing is my pasion, the recording part i could use help on, peace, drop some more feedback out there
Good theme. Beat coulda bang'd harder. When I say theme , I mean the way you set up the clock stuff. As for the lyrics, I've seen you write better shit. Just being honest. I'm not one at the moment that should talk about inflection but if you had better projection you might see your art in a whole new direction. You want feed and I gave it.
11-16-2006, 05:58 PM
thanks for the message, i know im getting honesty from u, anyone else got feed
11-17-2006, 03:42 AM
thats what i'm talking about.
i like this shit - the first verse was murder.
best part of the track.
holla back fam.
11-18-2006, 01:26 PM
yo sunny thanks for the positive feedback, im glad the 1st verse was felt, bcuz the last verse was just some shit to fill in the empty space, ill probably work on a 2nd verse taht will better fit the first, anyways thanks for the comments, peace
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