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oDoUoSoKo
11-26-2006, 05:14 PM
ive been scoping around and i figured lemme challenge this dude, lets go

2 rounds-16 lines each verse- i go first the first round and u first the second....accept?

Eversick666
11-26-2006, 06:47 PM
Ya Sure Man Ive Been Lookin For A Equal Battle But Whatever Letz Do Ninja

oDoUoSoKo
11-26-2006, 07:32 PM
absolutley, ya raps are booty it takes whole audiences to clap and shoot me
ur a fraudulent cuchi who at death will be glad u knew me
rappins a fad for u actor stop play'n charades
you gave satan ya soul in exchange for aids
so being eversick understandable, meet the clever spick
who'll make sure that again u'll never spit like severed dicks
now get ya shit together u aint touchin the moon knight
ur a snitch arentcha ill orange'ya like freddy nundieht (Mr. Orange)
Gesundhiet, my lyrical Desert Eaze Sneeze Frequentley
666 strikes make it look like uve been stung by bees recentley
hung like tree ornaments on christmas eve, i
put death to goths who're better off rockin levi's
instead of those black baggy Hammer joints copped in the local thrift
which u payed dead prez for by his dick makin ya vocals shift
i hope ur gift this year is a miracle cuz SHIT THIS SPICK WON
and u kno u got ur name from stuttering when sayin DUSK YOU SICKSICKSICK SON!!

ur turn

Eversick666
11-26-2006, 07:53 PM
Dusk Ull Get Crushed To Dust,then Ill Snort U Up
Prolly Take Cocks Bigger Than An Elephant Tusk
Should Have Named Yaself Dawn Instead, Cause U Remind Me Of A Slut,
In Ya Little World The Night U Bring,i Use To Cover Up..
While U In The Mirror Singin ''i Fell Like A Woman'' Powdering Ya Face
With Momyz Cover Up....buddy What,i Leave U Sawed Off,stab Woundz To Leave Ya
Body Vacant In Fragments,leave U Under The Dirt To Disperse Most Of The Stagnace,
Or Have My Uk Click Feast On The Stomachs Like Haggus,got My Man In Vegas,
White And Dangerous,american Heat, God Concept In Bc Lockin The Streets,
Ddd In T Dot Supportin The Creeps,im The Dark Son Here,thats Controllin The Thieves,
At A Quater To 3 We,rush Out The Jeeps And Into Ya Home, To Take All Of The Sweets,
Gag Ya Momz In Her Room While She Havin A Sleep,ya Brothers Been Beat,
And Ya Sister Now Just Belongs To Me,so Buzzed Its Hard To See,im Hard To Beat
So Knunkle Up Dusky Truss Me I Fucken Scar Mcz.........

Eversick666
11-26-2006, 08:14 PM
and this is my first time battlen cause no one wanted to step
id show u respect but the rules say daggers flyin to the heart
and the chest,remarkin ya death,you spit out the wordz
eversick im sorry for underestimateing a threat,your sicker with
wordz,666 incenerate the thoughts in ya head,till the dusk is over just another
day that ive spent,hatered i'll vent exposing the truth that ure not as nice
as u said,my rhymes off the top of the head,roast boasting mcz into shreads
then put em to bed,while u right now at this moment, createin a prefab on notepad
at the lab,juss rush though these lines like i was on acid tabs,id smack ya dad
but he prolly skipped out after he saw what life he had......was mad and left
leavin u a bastard fag,ill seal ya fate with a plastic bag,toes were taged 1 SPICK
that should have stuck with the taco stand......
muchachoz land on they fucken neck afer i drop em fam,juss ask ya man
he tell u storys that hes heard around,like "sa dont fuck with him he kill
from town to town......

oDoUoSoKo
11-26-2006, 08:15 PM
now i guess u cood spit tomoro ur nex verse, good round

Eversick666
11-26-2006, 08:23 PM
ok finish tomorrow any votes or feed someone get in hear and vote

Da Dishonourable Don
11-26-2006, 10:14 PM
yo i'm a vote when this battle is officially done, right now i think EVERSICK is takin it, he came with both verses quick fast, and u can tell he's just typing as he goes, that's what a freestyle is, off the top shit, Dusk came nice with his first verse, but right now ES has the edge, I'll be back for voting lata!

Lil' Ruger
11-26-2006, 10:23 PM
^^^co-sign

Eversick666
11-27-2006, 04:44 PM
?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????? no more over night fuckin waiting this is wack DUSK u needed to post last night man o well post so the votes can be taken i wanna see a outcome here

oDoUoSoKo
11-27-2006, 06:20 PM
whoah feind...i work ok? now hol on and lemme cum up wit a quick verse

oDoUoSoKo
11-27-2006, 06:47 PM
be the cop on my avatar, as i abuse mc's
and kick ass with punchlines, ill use my feet like i dont have a car
splatter bars towards ur fecal matter gathered in mere seconds
in fear better disappear or chew a spear's head in the queer section
its clear ur gettin up there prepare to be the moon god's sacrificial
lamb, fuck air breathe polluted sand as ur raped by a nun's vengeful plans
to get back at the man whos satanic hands disgraced her
back to the knights nature speakin sophistication like frasier
PSYKE rape your site with 666 bladed spikes aimed to strike
ur frame in spite of shame i suffered, death befriends you today/tonight
say goodnight and welcome cursed dreams sick and thristy rippin ur seams
as a verse is dispersed to turn ur birth reversed in the 613
since critiscism is spit as wisdom is shifted with ignorance
due to quick incisions and dick'n sisters (nuns) which is jus dense
then ill leave it be because of "traits" as blatent as quickness
and proceed to see that IM actually the agent of sickness....


w/e vote ...get it over with,,,,

Eversick666
11-27-2006, 08:59 PM
whoah feind...i work ok? now hol on and lemme cum up wit a quick verse


one i ant a fiend and two you ant the only one workin dicknose so dont set beef u cant digest...

oDoUoSoKo
11-27-2006, 09:04 PM
theres no beef buddy, but u have no right to rush anyone, jus cuz u decided to drop both verses yesterday dont mean i had to do the same.



VOTE

Eversick666
11-27-2006, 09:10 PM
no but i feel more comfortable knowing the battles fresh i dont got beef but dont be callen me no fiend man

oDoUoSoKo
11-27-2006, 09:15 PM
hmmm.























































fiend.votes.eloels.?

relax man ive jus been busy hence the me not having battled in ages.

oDoUoSoKo
11-27-2006, 09:16 PM
oh and no worries with my verse being thought up over night or something, my verse wood have been 12/10 if so.

Eversick666
11-27-2006, 11:01 PM
Votes Please

Lil' Ruger
11-28-2006, 01:37 AM
hmmmm this is hard because dusks first verse was okay and both of eversicks were pretty dope but that last verse by dusk was crazy.....now both of ya'll my boys.....but imma have to go wit eversick simply because he was consistent but it was MAD close and hard to decide i have actually been here at my keyboard for ten minutes thinking....

TIGHT BATTLE

vote - eversick666

Da Dishonourable Don
11-28-2006, 01:44 AM
aight this is what I thought,

vocab=ES
flow=ES
creativity=dusk
wordplay=ES
punches=dusk

even though Dusk came nice with his second along with his first verse, I feel Eversick was just takin' it to him more personally, in other words though Dusk came more lyrical with it, but it's all about agression in this one, plus it's ES's first battle, not bad!

vote=Eversick

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 03:04 AM
Need More Votes

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 05:12 PM
More Votes Come On Here

tha god concept
11-28-2006, 08:07 PM
yo this shit was pretty even imo...

but since this is eversicks first battle and he dropped so nice i gotta give it to him.

dope battle 2 both mc's

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 08:18 PM
votes 3 for me none for dusk come on people we need at least 5 or 6

VillainousV
11-28-2006, 09:00 PM
Vocab=Eversick
Flow=Dusk
Creativity=Dusk
Wordplay=Eversick
Punches=Eversick

It wuz a close battle, no doubt yo. I gotta go wit Eversick tho, cuz it was a consistent string of disses, PLUS he had a theme behind a lot of his lines, instead of just throwin punches after a few words, not connectin em. VERY good battle tho. word lyfe.
VOTE= Eversick666

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:03 PM
reminds me of back in the day, i guess favortism is a bit annoying on the other side, oh well keep battlin and make ur way up there 666.

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:08 PM
i would battle someone else now but its pointless, seeing as how ill lose whether im good or not, this site is veeerrry shifty with their lime light rappers, not to say eversick didnt come nice or didnt do good or diddnt win, but...w/e eversick ull see soon.1

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 09:19 PM
man there is no dickrider votes man so dont take this as a hard loss i think i took it for sure man u juss dident come as hot man it happends,and as far as u sayin u top 5 i dont think so ether so maybe its juss u i dont got no beef but we can have 50 people vote an i still think i won so done thanks for the battle will have to battle again

Lil' Ruger
11-28-2006, 09:21 PM
dusk seriously stop crying i lose battles all the time and i dont cry....maybe i just interpreted what you said wrong but you seem to cocky for your own good.

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:28 PM
than u did^

a. i was joking
b. eversick.....you get ur rookie chops but no more because im staying quiet about this battle knowing ur rhymes werent very thought out, they were off the top! they were so wildly structured!omg how exciting!!!!as far as personals go...u said dusk a few times than rambled on about raping my mom....c'mon dude
c. i AM top 5

0-4 eversick666 wins

good night.

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:30 PM
ps. cocky i am not, otherwise i would have said i AM the best on the site which isnt true, im jus saying wucorp users go thru phases...ull win 9 or so than lose the rest and quit, dont worry ill vote for you.

SHRAP
11-28-2006, 09:43 PM
dusk must be slippin, even his dickrider voted against him, he lost a battle before i could even come in here laugh at his verses and vote against him :lmao:

at least i came in time 2 see him type that hes top 5 :lmao:

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:45 PM
dusk must be slippin, even his dickrider voted against him, he lost a battle before i could even come in here laugh at his verses and vote against him :lmao:

at least i came in time 2 see him type that hes top 5 :lmao:

told yall...


...oh and, prove me wrong shrap.

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 09:49 PM
juss rush though these lines like i was on acid tabs,id smack ya dad
but he prolly skipped out after he saw what life he had......was mad and left
leavin u a bastard fag,ill seal ya fate with a plastic bag,toes were taged 1 SPICK
that should have stuck with the taco stand......

man there is no rambleing juss pure disses this to me is what took it

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 09:52 PM
this is a RAP battle man, not a diss contest, theres no good rhymes there, where the balance b/w good disses and good rhymes, but now the users want disses and random phrases...oh boy.

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 09:57 PM
WTF???? when u battle u tear the other mc appart no question and as for no good rhymes PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA blow me till dawn comes dusk u filthy fucken hater

SHRAP
11-28-2006, 09:57 PM
u proved yourself wrong but i aint gonna go look for that fuckin wack ass line i posted in my sig, that shit had me crackin up for a week u really are garbage

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 10:01 PM
WTF???? when u battle u tear the other mc appart no question and as for no good rhymes PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA blow me till dawn comes dusk u filthy fucken hater

and u did this because 3 small white kids voted in ur favor?

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 10:04 PM
3 small white kidz ??????? VV is black and 19,DDD is 26,concept would fist fuck your mom so he qualifyed for anything,the only kid on the post that voted wass pimptastic and he like u more than me so wtf u tryin to get at here man??

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 10:06 PM
Welcome To The Days Of Our Lives Starring Leading Actress Dusk

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 10:11 PM
lol u arent better than me because 3 or 4 people think u are man, take it easy! have u celebrated beating me yet? shit.

SHRAP
11-28-2006, 10:14 PM
wait pimptastic is white? he said he was black like 40 times i think he even used the n word :lmao:

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 10:19 PM
ya i thinks hes balck and who really cares about nigger i have black friends i call nigger hell i even have white friends i call nigger so whatever adn DUSK i never said i was better than u i juss said the battle i was better so u take it easy...end this before it go's to the classic thread

oDoUoSoKo
11-28-2006, 10:19 PM
btw there is nothing wrong wtih white and im sorry i made it seem so, but people like this guy^(shrap)^ ruin it for you all.

SHRAP
11-28-2006, 10:34 PM
btw there is nothing wrong wtih white and im sorry i made it seem so, but people like this guy^(shrap)^ ruin it for you all.

ruin what? im not a wack internet rapper that put mad effort into an internet battling career and still suck at battling

i tell u what i tell your predecessor intellekt, 50 bucks says im more puerto rican than u, gettin vaginal over losing internet battles = white boy that live in the suburbs that jus watched 8 mile for the first time type shit

Eversick666
11-28-2006, 10:53 PM
ruin what? im not a wack internet rapper that put mad effort into an internet battling career and still suck at battling

i tell u what i tell your predecessor intellekt, 50 bucks says im more puerto rican than u, gettin vaginal over losing internet battles = white boy that live in the suburbs that jus watched 8 mile for the first time type shit



wow i couldent have said it better....this thread is too funny

Lil' Ruger
11-29-2006, 12:24 AM
i'm not white....i'm light skinned though....dusk i have lost all respect for you...but my battle name is still reign so fuck that....i got beat by undissputed horribly but did i cry like a whiney bitch and act out????no!

just quit while some think of you as okay.

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 07:34 PM
ruin what? im not a wack internet rapper that put mad effort into an internet battling career and still suck at battling

i tell u what i tell your predecessor intellekt, 50 bucks says im more puerto rican than u, gettin vaginal over losing internet battles = white boy that live in the suburbs that jus watched 8 mile for the first time type shit


1. WTF? your more puerto rican than me YOU HAVE TO BE KIDDING ME? suppose this did make sense it would be totally bogus seeing as how im not the one going to almost all of the threads i might have even glanced at to criticize, and not ur not a wack internet rapper that puts mad effort into a battling career, ur a wack rapper who puts mad effort into critiqing MY battles ( :cheerlie:) and still suck at rapping. if this was the case id be battling everyday and drinking egg yolks and shit.

2. eversick your a good rapper, i have nothing against you, you won this battle, i leave it at that.

3. knox....shut the fuck up, you lost respect for me because i was whining? you obviously have no career in text battling if u cant read...I SAID I WAS JOKING DICKHEAD anything afterwards was just replying to shrap or 666's remarks...damn ur narrowminded, and i KNOW YOU ALL THINK I SUCK and couldnt give a shit less man so ill go "cry some more" since it seems to turn u fucking flames on.

Eversick666
11-29-2006, 07:39 PM
1. WTF? your more puerto rican than me YOU HAVE TO BE KIDDING ME? suppose this did make sense it would be totally bogus seeing as how im not the one going to almost all of the threads i might have even glanced at to criticize, and not ur not a wack internet rapper that puts mad effort into a battling career, ur a wack rapper who puts mad effort into critiqing MY battles ( :cheerlie:) and still suck at rapping. if this was the case id be battling everyday and drinking egg yolks and shit.

2. eversick your a good rapper, i have nothing against you, you won this battle, i leave it at that.

3. knox....shut the fuck up, you lost respect for me because i was whining? you obviously have no career in text battling if u cant read...I SAID I WAS JOKING DICKHEAD anything afterwards was just replying to shrap or 666's remarks...damn ur narrowminded, and i KNOW YOU ALL THINK I SUCK and couldnt give a shit less man so ill go "cry some more" since it seems to turn u fucking flames on.





thx man good battle ill be lookin forward to the next one......peace and stay up man..

SHRAP
11-29-2006, 07:39 PM
how i put mad effort into critiquing your battles fag, i didnt even read your verses in this hows that for effort :lmao:

u dumbass fuckin hater, how can u even call me a wack rapper when u are putting such shit lyrics on the internet, wack punchlines and stretching words around just 2 get multis and shit, that shits disgusting its not lyrics bitch :lmao: im not even a rapper, rapping is not somethin u get 2 practice a lot when u on the street tryna keep a low profile but i could put a better 16 than u on anything and i can put that on my moms man :lmao:

u claim brooklyn and u dont do what i do so u should have plenty opportunity 2 battle but instead of out there u on here tag team internet battlin wit 13 year olds and that tells any1 anything they need 2 know bout u

plus u tried 2 start beef wit me for no reason, i never post anything 2 u and u come into some thread jumpin on the bandwagon of lil hoes tryna diss me. i could understand if u had jokes but u jus keep sayin some corny ass shit plus u want me 2 battle u, its clear that u been tryin 2 goad me u fucking wack ass internet rapper

go lose a battle to somebody else, quit typing my name u weak ass bitch, i will never give u the satisfaction of goin bar 2 bar with u cuz u will never be worth it u hatin ass punk

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 07:45 PM
^^^you see what u jus did right now? contridicted yourself, you say you dont critique me but u jus did so...ya and if u dont come to my battle threads to critique me then ur a fag for jus comin cuz my names on it.

SHRAP
11-29-2006, 07:57 PM
i didnt say i didnt critique u, u said i put effort into critiquing u :lmao: i have 2 eyes and however many bars worth of your raps available 4 me 2 read courtesy of this forum, thats all i need 2 tell u are wack bitch

how u gonna call me a fag, i aint the 1 that goes into random threads 2 type your stupid ass name and make gay jokes about u, u really need 2 learn when 2 hang it up cuz now u just makin yourself look stupid

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 08:22 PM
i didnt say i didnt critique u, u said i put effort into critiquing u :lmao: i have 2 eyes and however many bars worth of your raps available 4 me 2 read courtesy of this forum, thats all i need 2 tell u are wack bitch

how u gonna call me a fag, i aint the 1 that goes into random threads 2 type your stupid ass name and make gay jokes about u, u really need 2 learn when 2 hang it up cuz now u just makin urself look stupid

:? yes u are.

SHRAP
11-29-2006, 08:31 PM
where did i make a gay joke about u besides the post where i made a poll if u are a fag

u made a rap line about jizzing on me and wrote somethin bout somebody shitting on my chest u homo

who the fuck types a comment about somebody shittin on another mans chest thats gay as fuck lil bitch

tha god concept
11-29-2006, 08:49 PM
i wanna see shrap vs dusk in a battle to end this bullshit bickering

????

SHRAP
11-29-2006, 09:02 PM
yeah well i wanna do a porno wit regina hall and make it an award winning commercial for jello pudding, everybody gotta have a dream right

tha god concept
11-29-2006, 09:11 PM
why wont ya battle tho??....

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 09:12 PM
U Made A Thread About Me In Which U Wrote A Short Story Describing How I "broke Your Heart" Fag.

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 09:13 PM
why wont ya battle tho??....
ask him.#(

SHRAP
11-29-2006, 10:13 PM
i told him why i wont battle him, he a geek and a clown and there he goes writing gay shit again, fuckin queer

Da Dishonourable Don
11-29-2006, 10:21 PM
i would battle someone else now but its pointless, seeing as how ill lose whether im good or not, this site is veeerrry shifty with their lime light rappers, not to say eversick didnt come nice or didnt do good or diddnt win, but...w/e eversick ull see soon.1


I hate that shit, I don't think anyone should vote against you for their personal reasons, a true humble dude will not go against the grain when it comes to the truth, I think Dusk is a dope writer, he got mad verses, if y'all ain't feeling him personally, well that's fine, but don't just automatically vote against him 'cause you don't like him, that's weak, I don't do that dickrider vote shit, and noone else should either, show the better man his due, that's all I have to say about voting, in this case I feel Dusk was the more lyrical, but ES was takin' it to him more aggressively, sometimes being the more lyrical doesn't cut it in a battle, but being aggressive and mad lyrical at the same time is the illest combo, anyways I said more than I had to, have a nice day mothafuckas!

oDoUoSoKo
11-29-2006, 10:42 PM
god bless, bom for life dog.

Sicka than aidZ
11-30-2006, 01:25 AM
holy fuck

Eversick666
11-30-2006, 01:52 AM
holy fuck


PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA A

YA I KNOW EH WTF

Lil' Ruger
11-30-2006, 04:05 AM
U Made A Thread About Me In Which U Wrote A Short Story Describing How I "broke Your Heart" Fag.

pwnt nice job.

ArcherPriest
12-05-2006, 11:45 AM
i jus read thru this battle, (up to where Shrap came in, I aint tryin to read all yalls bullshit)....and I must say to DUSK... ur a cryin lil' bitch yo.. fuckin sore ass loser.. always makin excuses n shit... take your loss like a man... you got beat.. eversick freestyled straight over ya writtens and you dont want to admit it.. nuff said..... Its no wonder they wont let you mod man,.. u full of bitch excuses and secondary accounts .....

oDoUoSoKo
12-07-2006, 01:41 PM
i jus read thru this battle, (up to where Shrap came in, I aint tryin to read all yalls bullshit)....and I must say to DUSK... ur a cryin lil' bitch yo.. fuckin sore ass loser.. always makin excuses n shit... take your loss like a man... you got beat.. eversick freestyled straight over ya writtens and you dont want to admit it.. nuff said..... Its no wonder they wont let you mod man,.. u full of bitch excuses and secondary accounts .....
lol than u didnt do enuff reading fairy fuckin pussy bastard:loser:

u dont have to be so mad that i didnt battle u via audio fuckin asshair...

if im such a fuckin crybaby/loser of this battle....y didn u pm eversick than? :frusty:

Lil' Ruger
12-08-2006, 09:59 AM
this thread is fuckin classic.

oDoUoSoKo
12-08-2006, 11:13 PM
agreed^^

Lil' Ruger
12-08-2006, 11:21 PM
36 and those non payin attention mods are bastads....alot of threads are classic but there not...

oDoUoSoKo
12-08-2006, 11:23 PM
and they dont make me mod because of suspicion....fuckers.