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dego10304
12-04-2006, 03:31 PM
I'm mad lifted.... And tight at how wack hip-hop is right now. So let me know what you think about this. The flow might sound off, but i make it work.

Some people have an emotional connection to beats
Layin down drum tracks in which melodies leak
Other People believe it's just a spreading infection
But I take it to my heart like I take a lethal injection
Perfection, is what most of these producers lack
It aint about the money that stacks or bootys that clap
It's about a music passion, not all this wack fashion
I said this all before, now why can't you fathom
What goes on in my head, while I'm writing a verse
Look, I'm spittin 16 and I didn't have to curse
Can't you see Hip-Hop is officially dead
I'm here to multiply like Jesus did the fish and the bread
I lost my train of thought and I got four more to go
So i'm just gunna REP the only world I know
Like HOVA I was born in the exact same BORO
BROOKLYN, ya'll know we still THORO

Bigot Hitman
12-04-2006, 04:31 PM
Hiphop ain't dead it just aint as main stream as it used to be. U don't really get ur point across in this piece through the lines.

Lost Sun
12-05-2006, 08:53 AM
This was alright man....i see where you were going but I agree w/ DP you didn't really execute it as well as you could have....

Can't you see Hip-Hop is officially dead
I'm here to multiply like Jesus did the fish and the bread

^^that was a hot line......I like that one.....

I didn't think your flow was hard to follow at all actually.....it went pretty smooth to me.....i like the topic but i didn't think you ended the piece strong at all.....I'll try to check some of your other posts out...keep dropping

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