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Lost Sun
12-05-2006, 11:13 AM
Sup everyone.....this is my first script I've posted here in a while...check it out and let me know what you think....


I sip venom on the rocks….spit acid on canvas…
My stanzas depict images of a Titan’s clashes…
Mercy’s absence from my heart led to grotesque actions…
One swift stroke of the pen’ll dissect factions…
Slipped the Reaper’s grasp…though I had near brushes…
So I’m cautious, watching the enemie’s unspoken discussions…
Eyes say it all so I hear the beast’s silent roars…
Plus in the art of war I’m Van Gogh with swords…
Rather Michealangelo and conflict is the Sistine Chapel…
My portfolio increases as I send sixteen at you…
Murder mosaics of my foes decaying…
Corpses, rigormortis, the burgundy pavement…
Gallery of tragedy, I’m like Warhol in the Factory…
Weapons are drawn just to cause more casualties…
My calvary…only consists of four horses….
All moving at the speed of darkness…
We focus on moving targets like still pictures…
Read Revelations, thought I’d fulfill the scriptures…
Mold my soldiers like terra cotta, artillery tears ya armor…
And fuck karma, I rose from the lava as a larva…


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J.T.S.
12-05-2006, 12:16 PM
tight drop you have sum deep lyrics real thought provoking!

Dae Ja Nae
12-05-2006, 12:35 PM
Sup everyone.....this is my first script I've posted here in a while...check it out and let me know what you think....


I sip venom on the rocks….spit acid on canvas…
My stanzas depict images of a Titan’s clashes…
Mercy’s absence from my heart led to grotesque actions…
One swift stroke of the pen’ll dissect factions…
Slipped the Reaper’s grasp…though I had near brushes…
So I’m cautious, watching the enemie’s unspoken discussions…
Eyes say it all so I hear the beast’s silent roars…
Plus in the art of war I’m Van Gogh with swords… (now, that was hott!!)
Rather Michealangelo and conflict is the Sistine Chapel…
My portfolio increases as I send sixteen at you…
Murder mosaics of my foes decaying…
Corpses, rigormortis, the burgundy pavement…
Gallery of tragedy, I’m like Warhol in the Factory…
Weapons are drawn just to cause more casualties…
My calvary…only consists of four horses….
All moving at the speed of darkness…
We focus on moving targets like still pictures…
Read Revelations, thought I’d fulfill the scriptures…
Mold my soldiers like terra cotta, artillery tears ya armor…
And fuck karma, I rose from the lava as a larva…


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I'm lovin' it ... keep 'em comin'

Peace

Lost Sun
12-06-2006, 12:19 PM
thanks for the feedback

noel411
12-08-2006, 04:58 AM
That was a pretty good drop, fam. I rather enjoyed it. Read nicely and had a pretty use of references. Keep 'em coming.

Lost Sun
12-23-2007, 09:51 PM
upping

BornPower
12-27-2007, 11:38 AM
real serious! loved it