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PLO-Stylez
12-17-2006, 08:31 PM
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=F1304C024D2FA9D9

Not much considering I have been messing with Fl Studio for about 4 hours now. But it is the first I ever made.
I got the idea for it from Xzibits track Concentrate

Any criticism is it missing anything, or leave it

GameOfDeath
12-17-2006, 08:56 PM
Basic beat construction I think you should start simple kick, snare, kick, snare and then add in a melody not be playing around with toms like this. The tempo seems a little too fast too. You should ask yourself who would want to rap over it.

PLO-Stylez
12-17-2006, 08:58 PM
I'll make some changes and re-up it later thx

PLO-Stylez
12-17-2006, 10:05 PM
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=5DDEA3245909A640

I slowed it down added some kick with the toms and havent quite found a good enough melody but so far its lookin better