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Lyric
12-23-2006, 11:03 AM
Iím da last true swordsman at a young age of 16,
Donít call me a young jack Iím an Ace that doesnít like to be paired with da king or queen,
I never loved da clubs and never had da diamonds I kept da heart cuz thatís where I keep rhymin,
Gambled on many things and once on my life until I saw da bluff and how it was all just a hype,
That is when I checked and folded but in reality my mind had been unfolded took my chips and cashed out,
Gave half my earnings to a nearby village who was in da middle of a drought,
Still with half my chips but a head full of new knowledge I decided to create a sacred college,
My first student was a man just a year older than me,
He was held down in life by da pavement and concrete but he desired to be free,
I told him not to fight it but to be come one with it and come out,
He sat down and meditated for seven days straight and on the eighth there was a blackout,
It was amazing he could now control da street not only with sheer brute force,
But with knowledge and awareness his first move he sent shockwaves that had a collision course,
To the ones that had bonded him to da street and gave him this curse,
I told him take that power and have it immersed,
In knowledge then pick up da sword and strike with a verse,
His mind was now enlightened and those who are ignorant were frightened,
We walk da land always with da sword in hand,
One day out of food we met da devil,
He said work for me but what he did not know we were at a higher level,
He asked us to run an errand and when we returned there would be a great meal,
But before we could eat we had to sign a deal,
Too starved to think we signed and he thought our fate was sealed,
We ate and then slept for our next journey but I awoke with a sense that something was burning,
Their I saw ghouls and beast I looked at my hands and I looked like da human torch to say da least,
I had a symbol on my head in Japanese characters that meant fire,
We ran and tried to escape but da devil jumped quickly in our way,
The man who I never learned his name leaped rapidly,
He created a diversion with a dramatic scene,
All da ghouls and goblins rushed to their masters aid,
Before I saw him struck down he said to me my debt has been repaid.

Lyric
12-23-2006, 11:31 AM
I Know My Skillz Iz Kinda Whack But Thats Why Im Postin Them Now Because I Wanna Get Better.

Father N Dangerous
12-23-2006, 12:01 PM
Iím da last true swordsman at a young age of 16,
Donít call me a young jack Iím an Ace that doesnít like to be paired with da king or queen,
I never loved da clubs and never had da diamonds I kept da heart cuz thatís where I keep rhymin,
Gambled on many things and once on my life until I saw da bluff and how it was all just a hype,
That is when I checked and folded but in reality my mind had been unfolded took my chips and cashed out,
Gave half my earnings to a nearby village who was in da middle of a drought,
Still with half my chips but a head full of new knowledge I decided to create a sacred college,
My first student was a man just a year older than me,
He was held down in life by da pavement and concrete but he desired to be free,
I told him not to fight it but to be come one with it and come out,
He sat down and meditated for seven days straight and on the eighth there was a blackout,
It was amazing he could now control da street not only with sheer brute force,
But with knowledge and awareness his first move he sent shockwaves that had a collision course,
To the ones that had bonded him to da street and gave him this curse,
I told him take that power and have it immersed,
In knowledge then pick up da sword and strike with a verse,
His mind was now enlightened and those who are ignorant were frightened,
We walk da land always with da sword in hand,
One day out of food we met da devil,
He said work for me but what he did not know we were at a higher level,
He asked us to run an errand and when we returned there would be a great meal,
But before we could eat we had to sign a deal,
Too starved to think we signed and he thought our fate was sealed,
We ate and then slept for our next journey but I awoke with a sense that something was burning,
Their I saw ghouls and beast I looked at my hands and I looked like da human torch to say da least,
I had a symbol on my head in Japanese characters that meant fire,
We ran and tried to escape but da devil jumped quickly in our way,
The man who I never learned his name leaped rapidly,
He created a diversion with a dramatic scene,
All da ghouls and goblins rushed to their masters aid,
Before I saw him struck down he said to me my debt has been repaid.


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