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12-24-2006, 03:22 AM
Third eye open
Sniper Scopin
Whats provoken
Words spoken
Leave 'em choken
w/ Windpipes closin
Firehosin the Unchosen
Moral errosion
& Actions exposin
Who posin for the picture
Of cursed scriptures
I won't do the damage
I'll wait for God to hit'cha
Wif'da karmatic cycles
That rival all rivals
No chance of survial
Souls dead on arrival
Legacy shittin on ya title
And earthly riches
Got the switches
And alotta stiches
For greedy bitches
who don't know which is
Love of money
Or love for your neighbor.

Father N Dangerous
12-24-2006, 03:38 AM
word eric nice quick drop? good shit i am feeling it, nice and agile flow, all made sense, never had to double back and think about it, nice content very nice read keep dat shti up stay up keep blessin

12-24-2006, 03:44 AM
yeah I just put this together real quick like, thanks for the feed mayne, much appreciated

12-24-2006, 03:47 AM
I reigned in on the earth
at the end of the fall
Cold November drenching
that could potentially spray on you all
I got a sick sense of humor
And some gigantic balls
I'll go parachuting off a bridge
Thats only fifteen feet tall
Break my foot and then
walk without a crutch
It's not that I''m stupid
I just love the pain that much
Well that ,
and the lack of a medical plan
I stock enough weed
To be my own medicine man
I can't be faded
I'm like a noon in July
I hear the tough talk homie
But lets face it, Ju lie
You don't gotta have the guns
Just to get you some respect
You can grab that shit
Just by coverin your homies neck
Now chiggitty check what happened?
All I hear is talk
About how them guns get to clappin
And I ain't yappin
Like that shit don't really happen
But real killas don't talk
They just get to the action
So whats up with all that shit you crackin?
This ain't an audition dawg,
There ain't no need for the actin
There's murderous factions
Thats snappin at any beef in the streets
Your marshmellow lifestyle
Can't compete with concrete

wrote this when I got home from work today, just messin around w/ a different kinda style, inspired to a certain extent by LHX's thread (keep droppin those jewels X if you peeps this)

12-24-2006, 01:08 PM
first one would sound nice in audio... second one was pretty dope too... "nuff weed to be my own medicine man..lol

01-11-2007, 01:43 AM
Constant progressions
My confession leave guessin
Like twenty one questions
New directions Old reflections
Been tight'em mid-sections
From the laughs or the love
Sometimes I swirl in with both
Friends and Family,
I hold 'em both close
Cuz when it's closed out,
What you did, gonna be the issues
So much talent but was it misused?
Mind subdued from reality construed
...........................Walkin confused?
Better get it together homie
Or were all gonna loose
We just might choose
TO fuse a path to revolution
Make moves by the massives
For massive solutions
The Power exist cuz of a corrupt insititution
A house cleaning is the ultimate solutions
Add two admendments & resurrect the constitution
So we can return to the quality of the true man
Holla at me, I raise my fist where I stand

01-11-2007, 06:03 PM
These are a good, quick little read. Some thoughtful content in there. I like reading this sort of structure. If flows smoothly and moves along nicely. Good stuff.

01-11-2007, 09:04 PM
thanks for the feed homie, respect

01-23-2007, 01:43 AM
My eyes closed
While my mind compose prose
Thats only limited by the world I know
Suppose if foes was only those
that didn't know Who
I really fuckin was
High is my essence, people in my pressence
Catch a buzz
Seed of the earth
I spread roots and show love
I'm out here on the level in the streets
Hand shakes and whatitdo to everyone I greet
Cause the people, Are my peeps
We're gonna Have to Come together
If we wanna gather heat

02-01-2007, 08:09 PM
Crafted universes in a mental retreat
Sexual verses, pack it in and apply heat
My head explodes, she's crafty with the brain
Muhfucka mayne, I love my mary jane
Haha what you thought I was here to get sick with you bitches?
Sup' you kina' fragile get hit quick wif da explosin' kinda snitches?
For the riches but I mob with the poor
Metaphor galore 'nother venture of Troy McClure
Lure in fishes on wishes of ya favorite verb, more
They want war, then lets settle the score
What we for?
Is it better jobs, and more weed?
Is baby mouths we don't have to stress to feed?
A better place for our seed? A world without greed?
A place that understands the common human need?
One day we gonna unify as one
But why not now? Don't nothing move but the earth and the sun

Bigot Hitman
02-01-2007, 08:45 PM
sun doesn't move, nice verse though

02-01-2007, 08:57 PM
haha, I'm not so sure about that one^, stationary as far as we're concerned but I'm sure the sun revolves around the center of the MilkWay

Bigot Hitman
02-01-2007, 09:10 PM
naw the sun really doesn't move at all dun

02-01-2007, 09:12 PM
actually he is right, as far as we kno it dont but it may be revolving around a bigger something

02-01-2007, 09:14 PM
got me curious man, I'm have to research it. Observation tells me that nothing stands completely still. I was just thinkin the revolution would be so completely fuckin huge that we'd never notice it kinda-thing.

Bigot Hitman
02-01-2007, 09:26 PM
^I think we would have found out if the whole solar system is moving around as one, while revloving around the sun, no matter how slow it may be happening.

02-01-2007, 09:39 PM
Tight man, nice lines, like the way you structered them

02-03-2007, 12:33 AM
Nice verses man. Always an interesting read. I like the poetical style.

02-13-2007, 09:10 PM
Throw a pebble, trip the reprecussions
Top notch production no discussions
Introduce a mindstate that works
Grabbin cash and flippin birds to jerks
Stomp the territory and introduce ya' set
Elevate the mindset take it off like a jet
Slicker ways to duck from the cops
Pushing merchandise instead of the rock
Or even better, cash thru legal measures
Put the money to work and apply pressure
To infected institutions for real resolutions
Power of the masses, the soul solution
And the cure for our sickness
That the fathers passed down for their children to witness

02-23-2007, 06:14 AM
really no better than the next man
Just open to how we're standing in quicksand
No plans, just collectively sinking
Into thought patterns without objectively thinkin
About the water we drinkin
steadily comin outta the faucet
Quicker than hypocrite preachers jumpin out the closet
Spewing hatred to watch the audience applause it
Every Sunday the devil goes to work atta church
Invoke Lurch to watch the congregation go beserk
And if its not the pulpit, its the billboard scenes
Or the product pushed from your favorite magazine
Mentally injected to rush out n' get what you dont have
Like it was oh-7 for the Dallas Mavs
Livin in fear, expecting nothing but the doom
While at the drive thru in a hurry to consume
What's really gonna kill'em
High cholesteral and the fear that they feelin
And they fillin up all the time
Whether they catch the news at six or nine
Put it together and someones gettin fucked
They blastin bullets but no one got the sense to duck

02-23-2007, 06:47 AM
Sit back late night
Watch the end of a blunt ignite
And take flight
In the pictures of my mind
Remind myself that the souls never confined
I recline
And reminiss on past times
As a kid growin up
From playin guns in the bushes
And getting chiggers on my nuts
To my brothers keg parties
As a young'un sneakin cups
My memory's clear going back to three years old
Old soul once again watchin the story unfold
I've been gettin fucked up and loving this life
In between the heartaches and the strife
Its the family and the friends
There to help me make it
Organize, the world is ours
so lets take it

02-23-2007, 08:28 PM
i been on the nostalgia tip too lately

03-07-2007, 12:10 PM
Space cadet vet with the rocket jets
And a set of x-ray lenses
Our nature's horrendous
So I bend this to arc the light
N' catch insight on flight
History repeats but we don't rock it right
Beastly nature, reptilian nomenclature
Who hate cha? State ya' name
And your associations
Wiretap you cross nations
Who's the enemy we facin?
Replacin fam, inserted androids
That avoid confrontations
And the evil we constantly facin
Replacin unity for paper chasin

Liquid Lines
03-12-2007, 04:42 AM
Sit back late night
Watch the end of a blunt ignite
And take flight
In the pictures of my mi....

Liked thid entire verse, thats good. feel like ya bars could be longer though

03-13-2007, 02:47 AM
^yeah, no doubt, I'm definetly capable of longer pieces lol, appreciate the feed homie

03-13-2007, 03:37 AM
Enter the collosus,
span of the metropolis,
cancerous movement stopless
The story unfolds on the spine of toll roads
Billion dollars pockets from the land they sold
Hold till the times just right
Till its big boxes that span till the end of sight
Cash vultures that devour the culture
Replace it with corperate sculptures
I'm pressurized like their water fountains
Under stress from the pressure mountin
I can feel it squeezin like the sunbeams thru the smog of the evening
Ol' timers greivin from the days gone past
But life will teach you that the present don't last
Even in its persistence
Jagged rocks smoothed out at the water's insistence
And resistence ceases to make sense
When it takes mad dollars just to pay rent
Time spent and split over three different ways
Stay at the hobby hopin to make it outta the maze
Cheif constantly to hang my head inna haze
Eyes ablaze, workin and prayin for better days
The whole world's crazed and cowers in fear
But the cars that roll by tell me the devil's more near
than anyone wants to hear
So I steer clear of the path to ignornance
And keep a steady eye on the beast I rage against