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NASTY NAK
12-31-2006, 05:37 AM
[Verse 1]
Though Iím lazy as hell, my words are incredibly able
To smash solid steel blocks, or even level a table
Iím myÖ enemiesí savior; my mind is mixed with a weapon
Hell, my thoughts alone kill off planets in a fifth of a second
Iím itchiní to test itÖ so please donít tempt me to merk you
Cuz your pleas do not faze me, like my enemies words duke
When my verse spews, it endangers civilians
Have the world death toll then placed in the millions
Iím abrasive to childrenÖstealing candy from babies
Causing explosions whenever people claim that Iím crazy
Smashing these faggy heroes with zero depth of my power
Body count only increases in deaths by the hour
Incredibly sour, I stay curled in awkward places
Plotting vengeance and sometimes, world domination
Iím an abomination, My father never hugged me man
So I grew up scheming on how to mug ya gramps

CHORUS X 4
Iím the alien villain, not knownÖscaring your children
Not seen in the books, cuz my my hooks is impairing ya vision


second verse will come mad short, feed on the first and the chorus

NASTY NAK
12-31-2006, 09:11 AM
jus btw, i really didn't do my skill justice on this shit, its some fuckshit to be recorded

noel411
01-01-2007, 04:01 AM
This is really fucken bad. I'd delete it and forget I ever wrote it if I were you...Fucken horrible.

ArcherPriest
01-01-2007, 03:14 PM
hahaa^ .. writing aspects were good, jus the lyrics weren't .. maybe focus less on rhyming the last three words of each line, and focus more on what your sayin... if you commit to a certain format it limits what your able to say.. you end up usin words jus cuz they rhyme.. makin the verse pointless

NASTY NAK
01-02-2007, 01:14 AM
hahaa^ .. writing aspects were good, jus the lyrics weren't .. maybe focus less on rhyming the last three words of each line, and focus more on what your sayin... if you commit to a certain format it limits what your able to say.. you end up usin words jus cuz they rhyme.. makin the verse pointless

thanks king, u know ur a really cool cat man