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TSA
07-16-2005, 10:58 AM
The clique let the criminology spit
Couldn't acknowledge me if you had a manual or blueprint to study with,
colleges split, and twist wigs with scripts of politics,
To send your oblangda in mirages demolish or sabotage,
silent killer pa, your sonar couldn't follow my knowledge,
fuck a taliban and focus on the hostages of wallets,
pockets packing paper rockets stock markets sell and cock it,
pull the trigger B, and kill his dignity with solid profits,
robbin bulls eye inside your mind with poison darts and picking lockets,
as I'm walk grimey alleys shadowboxing with my thoughts and,
the raw shit I'll kick in 06 to cause the topping, of your province,
law enforcemet stalk the chours cause they know my talk is lawless,
nouns are robbin pockets, verbs turn into anarchists, still ironic how
my sonic governs over rap artists scrap the thoughts of europeans
spark the flawless thoughts of marcus,
Garvey, educating colors starting with the darkest,
Mentally dead man walking cause Fortune 500 vultures flocking,




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Don'tFucWitThaJesus Kid

Sicka than aidZ
07-16-2005, 12:04 PM
I UNNO, pretty damn good, give u a 7,.,......not much tips on it, it was short, you'd most likely come out well if u used it to battle, or if u battled like that......good job man.....ill let someone else tell u how to make it better. peace

GuardianOne
07-19-2005, 12:53 AM
Yah it was a nice verse, i suppose you where busting.

Peace
PS:Keep posting