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JackOfHearts
01-04-2007, 04:58 PM
long time since iv done this......

10 bars
best of 5
no hate/d-r/crew votes
no bitin etc

.....!

hollywoodrealty
01-05-2007, 07:35 AM
this cat aint no prince, he's more like a princess
try and battle me when your winless, you must be a product of incest
your lame at best, drill a hole into your bird chest
fucken worthless, u better duck, here comes the slugfest
u cant spit shit, but i kick shit like a pair of boots
and id kick you off an airplane without a parachute
you aint poetik, your more like princes pathetic
puberty missed you, and when girls kiss you, u get a headache
dont bug me, bcuz i got the pestiside
when i spray it down, i lay you down, who's next to die
who's next to fry, have a seat in the electric chair
im not shaving your head, i like the smell of burnt hair
or maybe you'd rather get a lethal injection
pins and needles, needles and pins start the infection
da syringe pushes da fluid into ur bloodstream, u start to scream
this aint a dream, the nightmare is part of my scheme
you take your last breathe before your eyes roll back
you felt the wrath of the butcher's hellish death trap
stop talken shit, and get up out of my face
nobody likes u, not even Tom from my space

JackOfHearts
01-08-2007, 03:07 PM
dodging with swagger your flying daggers- my words so sharp they cut through stammers
Verbal hammers, lyrical mammoth stomping the fuck out of a hysterical maggot

Twisted reality for hollywood faggot- enjoying killing u like i enjoy my smoking habits
Pin point lyrics catching rabbits- snatching at your pride and slicing them in pieces like peeling cabbage

fuck it lets start......

snatch your memories and stick them in a bewildered nightmare- scare the shit out of you as you wet your nightwear
Stare at your life through other people- and see how your not so fucking letheal

sad nerd with star trek figures- hiding in a computer galaky, things that makes you bigger
just give me one swig of liquor to fuck u up quicker- slaughter u, take your doner for my liquor hit liver

i dont even kno you but ive seen your posts- i can see you for a loser like the busters saw ghosts
spit roast is the only way you'l spit hot- standing on fire is the only way you could be hip hop

JackOfHearts
01-08-2007, 03:08 PM
pschh well played m8, votes up?

hollywoodrealty
01-08-2007, 06:24 PM
damn prince, i was getting worried about u.......glad u came through with your verse, now lets get some votes..............

hollywoodrealty
01-09-2007, 08:04 PM
?

Bigot Hitman
01-10-2007, 06:24 PM
I'ma vote on this thread, but one of yaw return the favor on my battle. (i'm not saying vote for me, i'm just saying cast a vote period.

Bigot Hitman
01-10-2007, 06:39 PM
this cat aint no prince, he's more like a princess
try and battle me when your winless, you must be a product of incest
(good opener)
your lame at best, drill a hole into your bird chest
fucken worthless, u better duck, here comes the slugfest
(average punch)
u cant spit shit, but i kick shit like a pair of boots
and id kick you off an airplane without a parachute
(better punch- nice multi)
you aint poetik, your more like princes pathetic
puberty missed you, and when girls kiss you, u get a headache
(weird punch-lacked true sense)
dont bug me, bcuz i got the pestiside
when i spray it down, i lay you down, who's next to die
(better punch- nice muliti on this 1 too)
who's next to fry, have a seat in the electric chair
im not shaving your head, i like the smell of burnt hair
(best punch so far)
or maybe you'd rather get a lethal injection
pins and needles, needles and pins start the infection
(average, not really a punch)
da syringe pushes da fluid into ur bloodstream, u start to scream
this aint a dream, the nightmare is part of my scheme
(good puch)
you take your last breathe before your eyes roll back
you felt the wrath of the butcher's hellish death trap
(average punch)
stop talken shit, and get up out of my face
nobody likes u, not even Tom from my space
( descent closer)

overall descent verse, could have been more aggressive though

dodging with swagger your flying daggers- my words so sharp they cut through stammers
Verbal hammers, lyrical mammoth stomping the fuck out of a hysterical maggot
Twisted reality for hollywood faggot- enjoying killing u like i enjoy my smoking habits
Pin point lyrics catching rabbits- snatching at your pride and slicing them in pieces like peeling cabbage

(Ok sequence, full of descent punches)

fuck it lets start......

snatch your memories and stick them in a bewildered nightmare- scare the shit out of you as you wet your nightwear
Stare at your life through other people- and see how your not so fucking letheal
(strong punches)
sad nerd with star trek figures- hiding in a computer galaky, things that makes you bigger
just give me one swig of liquor to fuck u up quicker- slaughter u, take your doner for my liquor hit liver
(good punch)
i dont even kno you but ive seen your posts- i can see you for a loser like the busters saw ghosts
spit roast is the only way you'l spit hot- standing on fire is the only way you could be hip hop
(real good closer)


I think prince poetik took this battle, he came more aggressive and his punches landed harder. Hollywood came with a good flow but weaker punches.

Vote-prince poetik

Fuck
01-10-2007, 08:56 PM
flow//realty
pnchs//tie
vcb//poetik
wrdply//realty
crtvty//realty

i give it to realty, dope flow, poetik did his thing too but realty...my first battle....lol

hollywoodrealty
01-11-2007, 08:11 AM
thanks to dead president and fuck for voting, its even at one a piece, lets keep the ball rolling

JackOfHearts
01-11-2007, 08:17 AM
yeh cheers people, il return favour and vote one of your battles later! nice battle reality

hollywoodrealty
01-12-2007, 12:15 AM
up this.......

Bigot Hitman
01-12-2007, 10:33 AM
This is why the battle field fell off, nobody votes

hollywoodrealty
01-14-2007, 11:16 AM
votes anyone?

oDoUoSoKo
01-14-2007, 01:19 PM
sorry, lemme vote

flow-hr
vcb-pp
crtvty-hr
pnchs-pp
wrdply-hr

hollywood finally gets my vote...eloels...nice battle you guys.

JackOfHearts
01-14-2007, 02:49 PM
cheers for the vote.....2-1 to hollywood, if u get nxt vote uve won!

JackOfHearts
01-16-2007, 02:22 PM
yup.....

hollywoodrealty
01-17-2007, 11:16 PM
cAN WE GET some help in closing out this battle, take a minute and drop a vote, peace

hollywoodrealty
01-20-2007, 06:24 AM
?

Bigot Hitman
01-20-2007, 11:43 AM
I would if i could vote twice. This is the reason the battlefield is dead, no voters.

hollywoodrealty
01-20-2007, 05:39 PM
i wouldnt want u to vote twice, u voted against me the 1st time, lol i just want someone different to vote, i paid my dues and i have voted on over 100 battles in my 2 years on this site, some of u others out there jump in and drop some votes, peace

Bigot Hitman
01-20-2007, 07:02 PM
^^what i did was gave people thorough feedback on their verses in the temple of darts, in exchange for a unbiased vote.

JackOfHearts
01-20-2007, 08:40 PM
urgh sum ppl r selfish with votes and shit!

hollywoodrealty
01-21-2007, 02:35 PM
negroid, i was just trying to be funny when i said i wouldnt want u to vote twice, bcuz u voted agaisnt me, hahaha get it, haha, anyways people drop some votes yo

Bigot Hitman
01-21-2007, 04:41 PM
I know u were

hollywoodrealty
01-23-2007, 09:08 AM
ill give someone a dollar if they can drop a vote in here, ill buy u a double cheeseburger off the dollar menu, whatever u want, just drop a vote

hollywoodrealty
01-26-2007, 07:57 PM
ill give someone 2 dollars if they can drop a vote, or ill buy them a double cheeseburger, and a happy meal if u vote

hollywoodrealty
01-29-2007, 07:23 AM
somebody out there fucken vote plz, this thread is open for way to long, its 2 votes for hollywood and 1 vote for poetik, lets vote out there so we can close this out

Bigot Hitman
01-29-2007, 04:03 PM
I vote hollywood becuz he had bigger words

hollywoodrealty
01-29-2007, 06:28 PM
haha i had bigger words, thanks but u already voted for poetic, so we cant count that vote, somebody, who hasnt voted yet, please drop a vote, thanks

hollywoodrealty
02-04-2007, 07:48 AM
on the real, lets close out this battle, its 2-1 in my favor, somebody out there help close this out, peace

hollywoodrealty
02-06-2007, 06:17 PM
V.o.t.e.

JackOfHearts
02-11-2007, 10:55 AM
this battle is void, if this isn't sortd by tuesday

hollywoodrealty
02-11-2007, 04:57 PM
ya id have to agree my friend, we'll give it 2 more days

JackOfHearts
02-12-2007, 02:32 PM
gud man, well least we tuned up our skills lol

hollywoodrealty
02-12-2007, 07:48 PM
ok this is the last day for u people out there to vote, otherwise this battle is cancelled and void, its 2-1 in favor of me, 1st to 3 votes wins, will anyone save this battle from becoming extinct?

JackOfHearts
02-14-2007, 08:13 AM
battle void. shame cant help but feel punches wer wasted.

hollywoodrealty
02-15-2007, 06:35 AM
how pathetic, so many views on this thread and all we can squeez out is 3 vote, its a fucken shame, but thats for the battle princepoetic, u defenently held yours down, peace

MX1
03-04-2007, 08:04 PM
flow-hollywood
vocab-poetik
creativity-poetik
punches-poetik
wordplay-hollywood

good battle, but i think poetik took this one...

peace and 1luv

MX1
03-04-2007, 08:06 PM
votes too late? damn, thats retarded...sorry wish i could have voted earlier...this shit is pathetic, my bad, i'll vote for sure on another one...

peace and 1luv

hollywoodrealty
03-05-2007, 07:43 AM
haha mx1, its all good, even if your vote would of counted, it wouldnt of closed out the battle, would of jsut made it 2-2, and who knows how many momths would pass until we get the last and deciding vote, so we closed this out as a draw, peace

JackOfHearts
03-05-2007, 03:37 PM
thanx for the vote bud, 2-2, next vote wins

MX1
03-05-2007, 09:53 PM
haha yuh know u wuld be lucky to close this shit in months, the way people vote on this

hollywoodrealty
03-10-2007, 03:50 PM
yo princepoetic, i thought u said "battle void. shame cant help but feel punches wer wasted."


what happened to that?

JackOfHearts
03-10-2007, 05:36 PM
oh yeh man soz i forgot, yeh battle is void.

-------------VOID------------

Mattlocka
03-10-2007, 06:10 PM
So no more vote Iam late.

JackOfHearts
03-11-2007, 03:29 PM
battle over pal