View Full Version : new track*********** Ashtray******

01-09-2007, 08:39 AM
here is the 1st of 3 songs ill drop this week, click the link and hit me with feedback........


01-09-2007, 11:28 AM
ohhh that hook is damn sick. That hook nigga , that hook. The verses was built well. the second one was better than the first verse. The beat is butter.

Only thing is that some words were rushed out. The rhyming words. idk how else to explain it. It really isnt that big of a deal.

Good job on this one. Now I wanna hear the second one.


01-09-2007, 08:02 PM
the god has spoken....but yo, thanks for the words, and by the way, i always appreciate your feedback, good or bad, u directly affected me to try harder and improve, peace, keep droppen some feedback

01-09-2007, 09:00 PM
no problem man. Nobody did it for me when I came around And I figure its cuz I need to just give more insight toward others and not myself all the time. I try to be without self because it is said that thats how you tap into the raw energy. That crazy energy that produces miracles or awsomeness or tight shit. Whatever you call it. You know.

01-10-2007, 08:49 PM
re- up

01-11-2007, 08:08 PM
re up agin, drop some comments plz

01-12-2007, 07:03 PM
can i get some feedback

01-20-2007, 06:23 AM