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Luther Large
07-17-2005, 03:57 AM
battles i bring
with stylistic schemes
in full length
strong and ultimatley skillful to greens strength
mc's styles from gorge i still smoke more
clowned you and yours
i got more head from the state than mount rushmore
yo i leave heads dead and fold'em like bed spreads
kick open doors
i'd say consider the realest mc but that's only droppin dead metaphors
and i dont do that especially with them cracks on the wax
but watch my filanges cuz these fingers way too happy for triggas jack
breakin down forts as i stalk gees
wars i thwart with emcees
my wordplay strate unheard of like a hetrosexual dude sportin caprees
all that i see is gettin green
even if it means puttin a kid in a hearse
and if my mother got money stashed i'm snatchin from her purse
so let me know what you think
everybody in the world gotta eat but green 63 neva settles for chinks

just somethin short i made up real quick let me know what you think
if you need me to explain something i'll try my best

Sicka than aidZ
07-17-2005, 05:05 AM
Fuck, I Have Like 1 Years Worth, Wu Corp,methical,ins.net......^thats Cool

Luther Large
09-09-2005, 04:24 PM
check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/ stash a back up in my ankle plus a razor inside of my mouth b4 i go out i gotta go cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to save my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/

just a quick sumthin i made up on the spot tell me what you think and if i should finish????

it should be noted that i was listening to last dayz by onyx while typing....peace and feedback please

aint that great but i feel like doin it

Luther Large
09-09-2005, 05:20 PM
anybody?????????

Sicka than aidZ
09-09-2005, 05:30 PM
that shits cool man...dope

Luther Large
09-09-2005, 05:35 PM
thanx man....i prolly edit it and maybe add more

Sicka than aidZ
09-09-2005, 05:44 PM
check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/



Cool ^ transition from rhyming vest,best to drwn out mouth, the flow is cool

cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to protect my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/

^ that would sound dope on a track
peace

Luther Large
09-09-2005, 06:48 PM
i added about 2 bars at the end

Luther Large
09-09-2005, 08:56 PM
any1 else????????

Luther Large
09-10-2005, 10:34 AM
feedback?????



i dont want this goin to the back yet

TeknicelStylez
09-10-2005, 11:40 AM
/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/
Hot closing shit is real ill

/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/
I didnt notice the multis in this till i spit it, you got that off.

Luther Large
09-10-2005, 11:52 AM
thanx man i might add another verse or 2 to the same beat....i wanna get a damn mic for audio

Luther Large
09-10-2005, 03:11 PM
any1 else

jallainINS
09-10-2005, 04:29 PM
i was feelin that for sure. it felt so easy for me to rap. like the flow was so easy to find without even hearin you do it. i liked your transition like sicka said before. i like to do that in my raps too, but you did it better then i have.

Luther Large
09-10-2005, 07:07 PM
appreciate it holmes...any1 else

krazi m.i.c.
09-12-2005, 01:52 PM
good stuff. u got skillz

Luther Large
09-12-2005, 06:39 PM
good replies krazi....anybody else?????

Luther Large
09-23-2005, 10:05 AM
i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked out peaceful crooked police/character searchin frantically still stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/now it's 200 pounds of cadavers the coroners facin/murder cases/and the physical basis is shell cases/labratory's tryna put crooks inside of there places/plastic bagged faces with they whole torsos laced up/

ayo beef in red attracts pork in blue/







arite i finished a ruff draft of my 1st verse.......and i am starting my next with the beef and pork line.........what ya'll think about the verse and it's additions......

feed appreciated........

Grim Reapa
09-23-2005, 10:47 AM
nice start make it longer good punches LL good stuff work on it


go check out mine called,

"tha visionarie part1"

Luther Large
09-23-2005, 07:22 PM
thanx g.....any else can give me input?????

tha god concept
09-23-2005, 07:40 PM
yo that was sum fresh shit luther

i was feelin that shit

big ups son , u did ya thing on that verse


peep my shit in temple of darts gimme sum feed back

peace god ~1~

Luther Large
09-23-2005, 07:44 PM
aight i'll check it out later god.......any1 else?

Luther Large
09-24-2005, 06:46 PM
any1 else..........should i finish???????

Luther Large
09-26-2005, 09:10 AM
feed?????

Dae Ja Nae
09-26-2005, 11:31 AM
i need ya'll to read this and tell me your thoughts on it.......its short as hell......but i'll only finish and post it if ya'll think i should




analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked up currupt peaceful crooked police/purp searchin frantically stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/




just sumthin i started writin about.......a shoot out on my old block a while back.....


i aint done.....i just started it right now........should i continue or scrap the idea?????
I'm lovin' it so far ... the multies are off the hook ... stop teasing us though ... hurry up and drop the rest. Luv your style.

Peace

Luther Large
09-27-2005, 09:07 AM
much luv dae....i'm tryna get it done i just added to finish a ruff draft of my 1st verse...and i only have 1 line starting my second........



hope ya'll still like it though?

Luther Large
09-27-2005, 06:52 PM
Uppin on feed ya'll

martyr
09-27-2005, 10:48 PM
...you need me to read this -- and there fore i need you to pause, delete the thread, and stop writing altogether...

Luther Large
09-28-2005, 05:51 AM
calm down chief if you wanna say you dont like it do so...............but dont try and start a homo ass e-beef

Luther Large
09-29-2005, 12:43 PM
???????

Luther Large
10-03-2005, 12:08 PM
supreme challanges hittin, extortin foes/, heavy dosage of blows/goin to war sportin our court clothes/and us pros we still get managed and hold/i eat souls and be feedin off bodies grabbin on they gold/cattle catchin second hand cancer from gunsmoke/battles stay gung-ho/never 1 dumb joke/illegal carriers smash and bust the sound barriers open/fightin in projects my streets bound but only 1 areas chosen/frozen faces is tasteless/catalysts harassed like an A-list/you better be smart enuff to put the umbrella up when it's rainin/battles'll start sprayin and that's all that i'm sayin/


this is a verse i'm ghost writing for my boy.........the track is called "The mentality of warfare"

tell me what you think so far........leave strong feedback...........i know it aint that long but it's not supposed to be we r tryna fit 4 people in.....

(I'm writing it to the gravediggaz-unexplained beat)

feedback please.........

Luther Large
10-03-2005, 04:19 PM
http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW (http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW)..........

when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....

uppin for feedback


(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)

Undead Ninja
10-03-2005, 11:45 PM
yeah you can write this shit but you can't fucking respond to our fucking freestyle battle motherfucker type your shit quick you've already lost ne wayz stop wastin my time!

Luther Large
10-04-2005, 05:51 AM
uppin for feedback ya'll???????

tha god concept
10-04-2005, 06:05 AM
yo man that shits ILL homie.....nyce werdplay

ur killin it son

yo peep my thread and gimme sum feed back 2 homie

and merk that undead ninja herb

6what131
10-04-2005, 01:01 PM
its good but i think you can work on it and it could be better

TUCO
10-04-2005, 06:11 PM
http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW (http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW)..........

when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....

uppin for feedback


(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)
no homo

TUCO
10-04-2005, 06:14 PM
supreme challanges hittin, extortin foes/, heavy dosage of blows/goin to war sportin our court clothes/and us pros we still get managed and hold/i eat souls and be feedin off bodies grabbin on they gold/cattle catchin second hand cancer from gunsmoke/battles stay gung-ho/never 1 dumb joke/illegal carriers smash and bust the sound barriers open/fightin in projects my streets bound but only 1 areas chosen/frozen faces is tasteless/catalysts harassed like an A-list/you better be smart enuff to put the umbrella up when it's rainin/battles'll start sprayin and that's all that i'm sayin/


this is a verse i'm ghost writing for my boy.........the track is called "The mentality of warfare"

tell me what you think so far........leave strong feedback...........i know it aint that long but it's not supposed to be we r tryna fit 4 people in.....

(I'm writing it to the gravediggaz-unexplained beat)

feedback please.........
NO HOMO!

Luther Large
10-05-2005, 12:14 PM
^^^shit man even tho i'm kinda ticked.......that shit was mad funny.......

uppin

(it'll be different soon once i edit it)

TUCO
10-05-2005, 08:52 PM
hahahaha no doubt man
im not at ALL hating on ya shit dude......just whenever im bored i like to read shit and point out "pause" lines
its fun :D

Dae Ja Nae
10-06-2005, 06:12 PM
Nice shit LL ... yeah it's short, but it's on point.

Peace

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-07-2005, 09:41 AM
http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW (http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2THN8UXMTXS7A316P2XDUTKAGW)..........

when reading this verse.......do it out loud over this beat.....it sounds much better that way....

uppin for feedback


(wish i had the instrumentals all i got is the song)
that verse was flames son keep it movin son

Luther Large
10-07-2005, 02:19 PM
thanx ya'll any1 else?

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 01:02 PM
lights cameras and action photographed the assassin
verbals overtake the world to get a 3rd of the rations

overdosage of anastetics, see ammo and paramedics
calastetics for cammos and special dimensions sections only at its best during damagin presence aswerin questions price expensive like pentions caressin the senses due to depression of detention and preventive detention selective sessions re elected defendants sentenced to spark up and start up the tension armed with projectile inventions sellin drugs at park benches

i know it's short but just give me a rating please like 1 through 10


...........i'd appreciate it(i'll probly add later)


peace

theratkid
10-11-2005, 01:20 PM
Yeah that's pretty hot, right there. The last few lines especially. I'd say 7/10

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 01:23 PM
thanx man.........uppin

Luther Large
10-11-2005, 06:10 PM
uppin?

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 06:36 AM
any!?

SurreaL
10-12-2005, 06:38 AM
reminded me of heavy mental, even though it was sohrt, it was really cool, peace. 7.5/10

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 04:14 PM
thanx man any1 else can feed?

Father N Dangerous
10-12-2005, 05:08 PM
i got ya back man! it was tight as fuck! stay up 8/10

RaE
10-12-2005, 05:27 PM
Peace king...this reminds me of one of those pieces where you ask yourself..."and you say all that to say what???"....vocab was ill, but what's the message. Sometimes a clutter of words such as this can loose feeling and sound like you are just babbling at the mouth...no disrespect, because I know what you're doing...but, "a man gaines nor expresses his knowledge through fancy wordings and 'evasive' phrases...but simple gestures."~Not knocking this or anything...it was a nice read, but think about that next time...try to put more heart and tone down on the mind a bit....Wun, Peace.

....oh yea, almost forgot....6/10, solid. 1ne.

Luther Large
10-12-2005, 05:30 PM
thanx white

and rae i know what you mean man.........but what i was expressing was livin life in the hood and i was kinda comparing it with war and politics..........nah mean

but thanx for the replies tho

Luther Large
10-13-2005, 04:39 PM
?????

InvincibleArmor79
10-13-2005, 11:42 PM
it was good, mang... i give ya 7... would be a better read if it was constructed line for line instead of in a paragraph, but dont think im hatin...

denaturat
10-14-2005, 03:40 PM
Definitely has the feel of heavy mental. I'd say very creative and abstract, but at times awkward, for example what is a re elected defendant? Also, I find that when cats throw too many rhymes close together it sounds a bit strained, and instead of the writer injecting the rhyme with intended and very specific meaning, the words may digress from that precise meaning. But having said that, you come from the heart, and that is art. That's my bit. Peace.

Luther Large
10-14-2005, 04:23 PM
^^ thanx alot my man i really appreciate the feedback its just sumthin i wanted to do at the time


when i said "re elected defendant" what i meant was catchin a case twice

like i said i was kind of comparring it with polotics....

a defendant is the person being accused in court and the term re elected means to be back in office

so what i was talkin about in that line was..............................basically goin back to court for the second time as a defendant

.....i really do appreciate ya'll leavin feedback though thanks

denaturat
10-14-2005, 07:29 PM
I see what you're saying. Post some more on this threat, bro. Keep it coming.

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 03:48 AM
i dunno dog.. nice vocabulary and all.... but "structuring" your words into actual verses is 'half the battle'... like GI Joe.. lol... u kno.. jus looks like random rambles....... i even tryed readin it to a beat and i just got lost.... i dunno if your writing to backround music.. but if not.. u should.. might help.. no offense to yu.. cuz i see alotta potential in what yu posted... but yu need to not jus ramble off... and start tryin to iron out ur message some...

nevertheless... you still managed to come with some interesting words so... roll with that.. develope it into something better

aite.. peace

imitation is suicide
11-15-2005, 01:54 PM
its all about the skills

Luther Large
03-07-2006, 11:35 AM
From the systems prison to the freedom of streets/
i let it be known by talkin to jesus through my personal priest/
and emerge from the filth fully bathed and unscathed by the streets/
lethal evils i've managed kept my distance from a peaceful appearance/
hopefully i'll soon earn some respect for my perserverance/
protected with the usual guns and gaurded with knives/
i'm never unjustly although murder is a crucial part of my life/
i used to earn profit anyway possible keepin from broke/
while my mind was vined with coke seeds and weed smoke/
surrounded by poverty and my mind still seems to be rich/
but in the end that can't get me wealth so my body still sins/
it seems as if religion is outdated/
cuz the only laws and restrictions i followed i created/

Dominant gods and godesses oddysies promise garbage is farthest from who this artist is/



....this is a piece i'm working on and right now it is very scattered and not well put together yet but i'll be finished in a week or two....remember this is not really what it will look like when i'm done so b4 you diss it consider that........

but besides that do ya'll think i got somethin here?

Luther Large
03-07-2006, 08:38 PM
any1

Luther Large
03-09-2006, 04:34 PM
uppin

Luther Large
03-10-2006, 10:40 AM
pencils and papers fataly turn to vapors and break up/
when conncected bout street credit to raise the stakes up/
i'm something like a made man hangin with kingpins/
i juke the federal placements and slang with a pen/
chillin in the basement spittin embracin my (written) favorites/
it's hard to remain tasteless when my breath traces a certain fragrance/

you got heaven and hell,the top and the bottom/
but there aint no in between cuz in between iz the bottom/i want it all

It don't make cents sellin dimes and 8balls to get a pretty penny
(deli) the point of the game is to gain fame through infamy
chemistry, blows ya mind kings symphony sing
pockets empty left 4 dead ill take whateva it bring

layed up (stuck) on my death bed but still knockin boots
we create chemistry in(side) the labaratory to clock loot

money is tight cuz i dont even have loose change

Insane in the brain plus there inner thoughts are foolish/
went against the grain with a tool they brought a pistol to shoot with/

Pick up the pen to tell the tale the page is spacious/
spit the verbal basis my face value is ageless/
end either shot or got us locked up in cages/
i'm gettin closer to heaven cuz my life is hellacious/



i (swear) i feel like sellin my soul to the devil to get my past back
but this direction is destiny and change can't be (touched black) (fucked with)

you dont want it with me my games tight/
step to this i toss up your wife in "broads" daylight/

Police report our names were engraved in scriptures
we draw pistols on all our victims with intentions to paint a picture
i clear the static in my cabbage
in a failed attempt to break the habbit
insane, i went against the grain....with an automatic



when he created it/
fuck it ive been deleted by suposed to be saviors/

dwellin in hell i puffed l's to help my mind clear/
and used grafitti on the bathroom walls to scratch down ideas/

plus it appears out in the streets the use of my linguistics is feared


fear of glocks and lead from peers who got deaded in capers this all in my head so i made it look better on paper


my pencils embraces many pages
and when the elders tryda tell me sumthin i yelled preach to sumbdy else/
cuz when i was truant from school i was out teachin myself/

i'm fed up with the bull cuz there aint shit on my plate/
life is filled with contridictions till i spit it on tape


i flaunted my skills to clock dollar bills

illin in the coke spot crushin up white wit custis and my cuzin
who beat a life sentence twice

when i bust skills midgets is duckin


Police report our names were engraved in scriptures
we draw pistols on all our victims with intentions to paint a picture
born the baddest i "i could rock a knot with just static" it's a bad habit
insane, i went against the grain packin an automatic







go against the grain with an automatic



ya'll tried to trace my steps but i erased'em (wit a pistol) (on tha dl)




exploded like propane with profane names helped to (but in a way also hurted to) mold my brain/
a thousand dollars astonished (astounded) the (my) foundin fathers/
while my friends slangin the basics/ aimin to get his cake up/
bakin there base while racin to get there papes up/
but i cant do no time cuz i'm already doin it/
i snatch the heart of an ace and club it to death/
fuckin with cocaine and conductin the soul train/

so i guess it's my turn to wake'em up from inside of there hell so i scratch the wall and wind up with chalkboard (stuck) under my fingernails


Yo you aint real u just run at the mouth why?/
the only heat u blast is when it's freezin outside/
ya'll need to give it up and quit fakin the funk/
just stop rappin only thing you spittin is dunce/
sendin a mixed message to youth fuckin there brains up/
the ignorances got'em callin all women bitches/
the message is wicked/
were all blessed with a vision/
but when that vision is blurred son the profession is twisted/
so wise up and dont blame shit on who the president is/
if u havent made an effort and tried to change the life of are kids/

i blast through the mass of scuffled unmuffled bastards
this be the hope for the future so do the math
i'm true to cash also true to the mass
but so many now is brainwashed bad so who to ask?
i walk the path and propose toasts holdin the hourglass
knowledge in raps is hidden i spit it right thru this mask
plus science has the vision for this system to fit my 3rd eye

My rep on the streets is hell son cuz i'm a fuckin demon/
known 4 rapin cuties when i leave'em spittin blood and semen/
guts leakin with a blast from the tech cuz i'm insane black/
last faggot to run his mouth got tied up to the train tracks/
spray the mac *chkka blow* i blow ya brains back/
front on this kid i hit ya dome with hollows/
known 4 takin more lifes than bitches who swallow

lethal since a seed my mother died when my father fucked her



pull out a pistol from my farmers gettin paid is my aim/
but as long as ive lived ive forbidden others to do the same/
sustain the familys matters and maintain health/
i'd be blessed to have a son and name him after myself/
hell this stress got me mad vexed (im) fed UP with the bull/
latley, there's too much shit on my plate see but not enuff food/
my pockets are thin son son of a bitch ive gone bankrupt/
forced to get a job while (im) tryin to escape the handcuffs/
this lands ruff 4 a prophet i try and find a way 2 stop it/
walkin the streets as the sound of change plagues my pockets/

time is money and money is time so we clock loot




and for the record everythin in this here post is just random shit i jott down nothin here is premeditated

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-10-2006, 02:02 PM
Keep up the nice reads

Luther Large
03-29-2006, 04:09 PM
i blast through the mass of scuffled unmuffled bastards
this be the hope for the future so do the math
i'm true to cash also true to the mass
but so many now is brainwashed bad so who to ask?
i walk the path and propose toasts holdin the hourglass
knowledge in raps is hidden i spit it right thru this mask
plus rythym has the vision for this system to fit my 3rd eye
rippin scriptures is listed the vision is from the birds eye

The scene is at the block we spread knowledge and build like tetris
sharks try to catch our vision with precision EYE burned ya retnas
villains free there fists and lay down pistols to get consensus
my mans caught up in the crippled abyss of debts and pensions


yall tryna get on top with dope beats but shitty lyrics and a lame chorus
i leave ya brain porous yall faggots otta be sprayed i cant believe ya'll act like gays and still get payed 4 it

for years yall been frontin now u'll be forced to stop it
it's time to make ya'll pay.....so gimme wats in ya pockets

i hail from a street were peaceful people be shunned
with a deagle beat'em illegal it's febel what evils done
born a free man on free land but still haunted by inner demons
born with a brain just got a fucked up cerebrum

Grab the tre pound i'm still fuckin with crimes/
i got lust for these diamonds so im bustin off mines/
off the chain plus i stuff the gun in ya eyes/
but *sun* i can't set(-tle) so it's a must that i rise/



i burned ya retnas

4 a pretty penny the point of the game is to gain fame through infamy

when i started this i just let it flow what ever words came to mind i jotted down and made an idea of it i'll finish it later but what ya'll think so far?

Luther Large
03-29-2006, 09:05 PM
i blast through the mass of scuffled unmuffled bastards
this be the hope for the future so do the math
i'm true to cash also true to the mass
but so many now is brainwashed bad so who to ask?
i walk the path and propose toasts holdin the hourglass
knowledge in raps is hidden i spit it right thru this mask
plus science has the vision for this system to fit my 3rd eye


got us confused in the dome/
they say crackhouse and i say home/


when i started this i just let it flow what ever words came to mind i jotted down and made an idea of it i'll finish it later but what ya'll think so far?

feed?????

Sirkulayshun
03-30-2006, 01:28 AM
u gat a real nice flo and your choice of words are tight!, keep it up...soundz good so far.....look up my thread an tell me what u think

Luther Large
04-06-2006, 01:48 PM
The coldest breeds oldest seed was holdin heat/
to stop the nosebleed i pro-cede and get a closer seat/
witness # 2's a dope phiene smokin leaf/
lickin shots at bomb droppers who packs a pistol benath his armor/
shit ya farmers, battles like this'll get your heart throbbin/
and blown off ya feet like front row seats at a rock concert/


Kids'll kill to start from the bottom and get ahead/
pull out a biscuit and blast it to crack noggin like a fuckin egg/
brothers born evil in a litter of two shit on you/
they wip out picks that'll stick pretty figures like glitter glue/
police report there names were engraved in scriptures/
they draw pistols on other kids with intentions to paint a picture/

we draw pistols and trace over victims faces

every inch that i grow i get closer to heaven/
just think that makes me the only mothafucka to ever shrink/

i was listening to gza's 4th chamber while doing this it gave me the urge
i aint done yet but i need feedback

so what ya'll think so far?????

Luther Large
04-06-2006, 07:07 PM
The coldest breeds oldest seed was holdin heat/
to stop the nosebleed i pro-cede and get a closer seat/
witness # 2's a dope phiene smokin leaf/
lickin shots at bomb droppers who packs a pistol benath his armor/
shit ya farmers, battles like this'll get your heart throbbin/
and blown off ya feet like front row seats at a rock concert/


Kids'll kill to start from the bottom and get ahead/
pull out a biscuit and blast it to crack a noggin like a chicken egg/
brothers born evil in a litter of two shit on you/
they wip out picks that'll stick pretty figures like glitter glue/
police reports there names were engraved in scriptures/
they draw pistols with intentions to paint a picture/

i was listening to gza's 4th chamber while doing this


any1 got comments for this paticular piece here???

Luther Large
04-07-2006, 09:47 PM
feed???????

Luther Large
04-08-2006, 03:20 PM
feed????????

Luther Large
04-08-2006, 10:06 PM
The coldest breeds oldest seed was holdin heat/
to stop the nosebleed i pro-cede and get a closer seat/
witness # 2's a dope phiene smokin leaf/
lickin shots at bomb droppers who packs a pistol benath his armor/
shit ya farmers, battles like this'll get your heart throbbin/
and blown off ya feet like front row seats at a rock concert/


Kids'll kill to start from the bottom and get ahead/
pull out a biscuit and blast it to crack noggin like a fuckin egg/
brothers born evil in a litter of two shit on you/
they wip out picks that'll stick pretty figures like glitter glue/
police report there names were engraved in scriptures/
they draw pistols on other kids with intentions to paint a picture/

^^^FEED??????....pleez

Luther Large
04-14-2006, 02:06 PM
Always 1 step ahead I gain knowledge as i grow older
still to kill two birds with one stone i throw boulders
i told ya if aint got heat we give it the cold shoulder
shit is real my team got arms and hammers to bake'em like soda

fightin me dont make sense cuz ya wont gain profit
actually it makes a little cents just wont make dollars


step on my toes b4 i get 1 foot in the door

(this is just sum random shit im puttin down so i dont 4get)

Luther Large
04-16-2006, 07:29 PM
Yo this prodigy study god degrees to flee from the sun
buildin up prophecies on why all my peoples phiene 4 a crumb
swords'll cease you like mideval it's feeble what evils done
and amigo i hold a deagle for weasels who wanna front

son the best of this stress gets me vexed (im) fed UP with the bull
cuz theres too much shit on my plate see and not enuff food

alot of mc's just run they mouths till they get stopped in there tracks

Locust
04-17-2006, 02:48 PM
nice verses, you got a good flow..
check my thread if you got time

Luther Large
04-17-2006, 06:12 PM
yeah ill check ur thread in a little bit


this just sum short ruff draft shit i dont wanna 4get so dont mind it

I sold my soul to Satan but I'm payin the price
fuck prayin I swear 2 God I feel like takin his life

Ayo time is money and money is time thats why he "clocks" loot
his alarm went off
nothin to lose they hit the snooze and ran up in his room while knockin boots
butt-naked and barefoot not ready to be interagated
always 1 to think aHEAD until the day he gets decapatated

yo this prodigy study god degrees to flee from the sun
buildin prophecies on why all my peoples phiene 4 a crumb
swords'll cease you like medieval it's feeble what evils done
it got amigos holdin deagles 4 weasles who roll with diesle guns
so

sleep on me and u wont wake up


I sold my soul to satan, but i'm payin the price
this shit is hard i swear to god i feel like takin ur life
it aint right i smoke sess just to cope with the stress
aim for the viens my heart beats i grab ahold of my chest


I took a damn loss laid up in a church with my hands crossed

stressed outta his mind he got his brains blown out


stressed out prayin to sumbody, aint god though
breathin i believe in the demons who wanna take my soul

i'll be the 1st of my mothers children who amounts to sumthin






move like a snake in the grass

pain in the ass







i shoot the breez circlelin cyphers snipers hit wit precison from twin towers identical smiths blast the cylinder spins on lions whov been cowards

sick syllables spit like the six cylinder spinnin


ya snooze ya lose...ya mothafuckin life

Luther Large
04-26-2006, 01:45 PM
Buckin again son, we droppin a gem livin in sin
witness this rebirth when i fuck with the pen
we at again, bottom line i rob my friends to pay rent
but i refuse to drop a dime cuz i save every cent
time is money , money is time well...ya times up
make sure i rob u blind wont see my face in the lineups
these streets is depleted i a heater
irellevant sell shit makin money in every element
ahead of the feds peddelin i settle 4 mainly benjamins
son i'm tellin u 100's my range
it's all about the money and aint none of this change
pull out a heater from my farmer jeans and aim to get paid
raidin the scene 4 green while u get shot in ya face
and when i get to hell..........i'll probly rob the place



this is my verse on a collab with this kid im doin to gangstarrs all 4 the cash beat

it's far from finished this is just a ruff draft imma change a few things up

but tell me what u think so far..........feed??

proph3t
04-27-2006, 03:43 PM
not bad man, i liked a few of your lines

"irellevant sell shit makin money in every element"

keep it up; id like to see it finished

Luther Large
04-28-2006, 03:05 PM
son i swear 2 god u think ya hard untill i tear u apart
u talk a good 1 but in the end u dont know where 2 start
perfected the art of arson, i dont speak with my father
drop a bomb on the atlantic I blow'em outta the water
fire starter, still with the heat while u sit in the stands
and i can smell the fear probly cuz u shitted ya pants
spit in my hands,sweet dreams seems u slept on a genius
ya average rapper wanna hate me cuz im better than he is
it's true we the top 2 lyricists all in the biz
ya'll fake rappers aint lickin shots if u swallowed my jizz
enter this chamber and the game'll be leavin you here
u got need 2 fear cuz breeze be the reason 4 prayer
now ayo david b4 u hop on this joint
be sure to stab the pad with a pen so we stay on point


my team thru u an L but u kept it a secret
kept it a secret ready 2 toast breakin bread to get figures
sellin dimes we small time but the rep only gets bigger




"give u a run for ya money"

Luther Large
05-01-2006, 08:00 PM
yo this prodigy study god degrees to flee from the sun
buildin up prophecies on why all my peoples phiene 4 a crumb
these swords'll cease you like medieval it's feeble what evils done
it got amigos holdin deagles 4 weasles who roll with diesle guns
so grab ya peace up and meet us we'll leave the streets reachin
thesis is completed (while) you cheaters'll see us undefeated
the seed of phoebus is heated i hold my own
and ive grown, i go for (the) gold 2 take ahold of my throne
my brain has learned hate by takin stakes to the bone
it's my fait i erase the hate and raise the stakes with the chrome
i see coroners cleanin and phienes on the corner schemin
think ive escaped hell but i can tell that i'm dreamin

i need to switch the game get cream my brothers insane
if ya wanna walk around safe ya gotta tuck in ya chain
growin up in the same broke exchangin bottles 4 change
we see what haunts all r folks but we still follow the same (system)
and once it sinks in our brains were bound to fall down the drain (with'em)

it seems the american dream is like livin a nightmare


i'll grow old on my own ive learned hate by takin stakes in the bone



the mold i'm breakin god forsaken my soul (cuz) i sold it to satan

Luther Large
05-03-2006, 01:50 PM
version 1:

I robbed this bank, waived my piece, and got the keys to the safe
but this hoe pressed the alarm i shot that bitch in the face
now i'm wanted in every state, and dont know how i'll pay rent
but if you droppin a dime on me i'll have to claim every cent
got kicked outta the 9th grade 4 pointin glocks at these scholars
(my motto is) time is money and money is time so we clock dollars
record longer than your arms we neva safe livin a crooks life
this villain'll rob u blind so u wont tell the jakes what he looks like
(a bit) irrelevant sellin shit makin money in every element
ahead of the feds (i'm) peddelin settled in heaven with benjamins
this cat said he was broke but i know he was liyin
so i put a damn hole in his head and told him to be open minded
this genius is gettin heated I break out the gun and I pop it
and when i get to hell i'll tell the devil to run his pockets

version 2:

he robbed this bank, waived his piece, and got the keys 2 the safe
but sum hoe tried 2 (make an) escape, he clocked that bitch in the face
now hes wanted in every state, with g's he flee from his rest
on a high speed chase tryna breathe (see) he holdin his chest
wont hesitate 2 raise the stakes when it comes down 2 payin his rent
if u droppin a dime on him he's bound 2 claim every cent
ive been seein him bad catch cases and still dealin 4 cash
he'd make sure he's robbin u blind instead wearin that mask
time is money and money so his team clocked dollars
got kicked outta the 9th grade for aimin glocks at his scholars
irellevant sellin shit (son B) makin money in every element
ahead of the feds peddelin (he) settled in heaven with benjamins
stuck up this cat who said he was broke "yo i know that you lyin"
he put a hole in his head and told him to be open minded
seein him gettin heated he whip out the gun and he pop it
when he gets to hell he'll tell the devil 2 run his pockets
but little did he know that death drew nearer
the only man to blame is the 1 who stands in the mirror

arite yo i'm doin this collab with my boy to premiers "All 4 tha cash" beat vote 4 which 1 u think is better cuz i'm tryna decide myself and sum input would be nice


peace.....

Luther Large
05-04-2006, 06:17 PM
My mentality leaves my dome and roams free with the stars/
take ahold of my throne at home and patch up previous scars/
Leaders stumbled upon wealth and found there crowns in the dirt/
I'm out to settle the score once I touch down on the earth/
open my mouth and spread the word spitten visual pictures/
the gods heard it and converted (the spit) (it) into biblical scriptures/
In attempt at killin 2 birds with 1 stone we toss boulders
it'll take more than glocks to lock the jaws of a soldier/
Continue to track the facts i travel back through time/
thoughts cut from the blade of an axe i must be outta my mind/

look up in the sky the goal of my scroll profoundly described/
Satan tried to take ahold of my soul while (he was) clad in disguise/

its a fact that bein backstabbed's heartfelt in the chest piece

still makin a killin with dollar bills ive paid my respects



No stoppin this knot when the pen and the brain connect
everytime i drop science i battle rappers who (wanna) change the subject

Luther Large
05-05-2006, 02:24 PM
swing bats with the impact of a round to the chestpiece
next man to try and test us'll rest in peace
no question, it takes a lesson 2 express what i teach
1st lesson in life neva practice what others preach
with unlimited skill ive killed snakes and built like tetris
incisions break up the vision with precision eye burned the retna
imprisoned by the end of days, rusty blades cause tetnis
sleep with my 44 cuz the war in the streets is endless
hunted, by friday night your days of freedom are numbered
feelin relieved, razor blades in my cheeks'll give me comfort

White_Mouse
05-05-2006, 05:49 PM
dang that stuff is GOOD. I hope to elevate to your status in couple years.

*bows before idol of Luther(o bless me so that i will receive but a fraction of thy lyricism) *
LOL

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
05-06-2006, 09:02 AM
"by friday night your days of freedom are numbered" - this line looks cool to me ;) By the way - I liked "Love 4 tha Cash". Really - some good lines there also! I've read all 3 versions - version 1 is the best (I think) - "(my motto is) time is money and money is time so we clock dollars" (good moto). But the version 2 is "the observer view" This is very smart and effective ;) Keep up - I really like your lines. It's like "Water fallin' down from the Source, MC Source" :D

Luther Large
05-07-2006, 04:35 PM
^^thanx to both ya'll who left sum real feedback it's appreciated glad 2 see ya'll are feelin it

heres sumthin else i'm workin on 4 another collab called "Armageddon"

"Swingin bats with the impact of a round 2 the chestpiece
next man to try and test us'll rest in piece
We've all been caught needin stitches
rock phienin, bleedin,and cleanin dishes
siezed by heavy breathin, and dreams of sleepin with fishes
these premenition's insane, game'll visciously reign
best express it thru compisition on visions of who get slained
So keep it real, else receive anthrax in the mail
decrease the peace, fuck police, but seek to keep outta jail
Smokin rocks, folded plots to presidents gettin shot
Ol'dirty, L, and Big revise the image of Pac
I'm not the boastin kinded, swollen sided fuck bein the most admired
Chrome'll blow ya domepiece in two, leavin you open minded
Hard to follow, cash in soda bottles to see tommorrow
Armed wit knifes, take lifes like bitches who swallow
As it's all been provin, collect dollars and keep it movin
Fuck killin two birds wit 1 stone we just shoot'em

fuck bitches we just use'm

CHORUS----(you got) heaven and hell,the top and the bottom/
but there aint no in between cuz in between iz the bottom/i want it all

This aint a game I'm playin target practice until i'm burnin ashes
the close minded'll wind up in closed caskets
hard to see through, visualizin the fears of people
cuz shootin needles and deagles is evil, but each is equal
And to each his own, street code depicted in poems
believe it pains to see a name written in stone

Live for my brother no longer with us


You better hope you see some luck or procede to bein a sittin duck
The anti-christ (type), use bible paper to roll my (his) weed up









I spitfire but fuck a pontiac
fuckin bitches thats on crack




If gods a witness, he'll get shot at from close distance
apart from business, live for my brother no longer with us
1 love.. to people really not livin but breathin business becuz
the greed is in us, gettin green but then we die and for what
With cops chasin pants fallin and hearts racin (quick)
i stop to take'em but damn i planned on escapin this shit


When guns are drawn and shot bodies get traced up in chalk

It aint all lovely, (see(n) hatin when situations g(e)t ugly
debatin but speculatin these pussies procede to fuck me
but yo, I'm keepin company smokin weed'll be bluntin me
funny see, savin quarters in order to see some currency
so



It aint all lovely, (see(n) hatin when situations g(e)t ugly
debatin but speculatin these pussies procede to fuck me
but yo, I'm keepin company smokin weed'll be bluntin me crazy,
(i'm) savin quarters in order to see some currency latley
and even as i speak i'm startin to preach
cuz i'm usually (used to) raidin streets wit razor blades in my cheek
grew up poverty stricken, but (i) managed to hold the weight
and now anythin over ten'd make my dick stand str8






sharpenin tooth brushes





anythin over 10'll make my dick stand str8


still a child shootin super soakers

still a kid but instead of water guns i'm shootin real ones












1 love to those above dedicated to makin business
insist on livin life, sold addictions to smokin pipe

always in it to get a cut it's live or die by the knife
(who) fear the cold hearted, turn the rest to dearly departed
unless ya bodygaurded, gats'll blast at practicin targets
while guns sling I strive just to say one thing
There's one life, one love, so there can only ever be one King





1 king
fuck me








while u slam tracks ya man recieve anthrax in the mail
angered you feel the danger so u pass him the heat
keep a weapon for armageddon stashed in the passengers seat
as all citizens die they fate awates at the gate
swallow ur pride the flavors blatant so u savor the taste
bein hunted it's done son your days of freedom are numbered
relieved, razor blades in my cheeks'll give a feelin of comfort
on the real all hail the steel cuz they fear what i clutch
your mans'll vanish into thin air like the smoke from a dutch
it'll take a hole thru my polo for my soul to be touched yo
armageddon is comin soon and i dont know who to trust
should i stay and help the wounded or do i blow thru the cut
goin insane it seems these demons got ahold of my brain
robbers claimin they stuck up prophets but they pullin my chain
havin a fit talkin shit cuz they full with the same
not so nice i roll like dice i break the ice so precise
walkin the streets with a piece G the heat'll recoil
to put you 6 feet deep as you sleep in the soil
we ill, to kill 2 birds with 1 stone we throw boulders
it'll take more than glocks to lock the jaws of a soldier"

sum comments 4 this pleez????

Luther Large
05-07-2006, 08:43 PM
My intellect intercept the vexed to cause some respect
wars i hurdle verbs'll hurt you verbals slaughter your best
what i'm sayin is who u fazin with those fraudulent threats
courts adjourned u serve my words and earn a sword 2 the neck
study lessons, count my blessins, and invest in the real
please, the last mc to test me stayed back cuz he failed
blast the steel, talkin about u better be ready to get ya cap peeled
cuz ya'll battled the frail and acted ill to get mass appeal
fake commercial rappers it's still due to yo ryhmes
at it again armed with a pen to kill sum studio time
we raise the stakes (up) get ya cake up son we beatin'em major
plenty pages'll get laced up i dont need an eraser
savior, glide across my ryhmebook cuz lead's a ustensil
jive, as long as i'm alive your number 2 with a pencil
detrimental, neva gentle I break thru to the (mental) (brain)
forced to spit the verbal intercourse and fuck what u say

out, fuck what you say and get the dick out ya mouth

wipe my ass with ya lyrics as we shit on your ryhmes


trife, i'm stuck doin life with my lab as the prison

Luther Large
05-09-2006, 03:36 PM
They try to take us down they hope we drown in the cesspool
shit is real, i break bread before my last meal
they cast iron and blast the steel
this is proof, don't catch feelins when they thrown off a roof
cannibals flee police by the skin of there teeth
when were teamed man or machine deemed the beast can be seen

Killer Falcon
05-09-2006, 03:49 PM
i liked the last few verses you've posted. you've got a good flow, and i can see you have a decent idea about rhyme schemes too. its not particularly tidy tho, try and balance it out a bit, your bars are too long and you should aim have equal number of sylables in each line. you have some good punchlines, lyrically i think you have potential. keep doing your thing.

peace

Father N Dangerous
05-10-2006, 03:06 AM
indeed it is good verses throughout this whole thread. from your first drop to your most recent i see elevation. stay up and keep blessin

Luther Large
05-10-2006, 07:14 PM
shit's 4 real, i'm tryna keep outta jail question,if crime pays then why continue to steal?

jailed, if crime pays then why continue to steal?

the verbal intercourse is in affect so fuck what u say
and that proves to show

unable to bathe they dirt poor

he wasnt all there you could tell he had half a brain

i pulled his card he tried to play it off by foldin his hands

The man was stone trippin he fell off his rocker

life is nice but luxuries last longer

this persists through my birth and till i'm 1 with the earth


i walk the city streets at night recitin my verse(s)
if practice makes perfect i'd be the best in the world


(hip hop is critical filled with robotics and non visuals
spit a tight syllable to rip the mic right down the middle

we argue with uncle sam his plan unfolds in our hands

to get the best of society)



i be the voice of reason...WHY! mc's run when i break down the track
ryhmes connect like the spine of a book to send a chill down ya back





(step up to get (chin)checked)
Phonin in ya'll bounce along with your checks so hang it up
now that i'm cashin in i'm causin fake mc's to go bankrupt
(.....................................them ryhmes u milkin are wack)
serial killer smackin u up ur ryhmes are wack!
..so bring that amatuers mic back to radio shack

Luther Large
05-15-2006, 05:43 PM
Yo I'm bringin back the essence with the stroke of a pen
then I'm breakin the mold on which the present vocals depend
I rip the mic right down the middle, kick my words 2 the curb
street merchant, lay down my gun and take a puff from the herb
tryna prevent from strikin out in the 3rd, shoutin absurd shit
the verbs hit unfoldin the drama with closed fists
siezed, i trade blows in exchange for the peace
ease up, piece in my chest i feel the shake in my knees
moctezuma wants revenge kid and god got a shitlist
sweat in my palms i grip the pen quick and script what ive witnessed


Dwellin in hell i puffed L's to help my mind clear
graffitti on the bathroom walls scratched down ideas
Ive tatted plenty pages catchin cases in many places
Frowns upon the faces caused to break up the home
I got a grip and a clue to pay the dues that i owe

As i break the code of the streets, peeps decipher the peace sign




losin my mind, i catch my thoughts jack and trap'em on paper

Losin my mind, I catch my thoughts, trace and place'em on paper

Grab ahold of my thoughts

as I break the code of the streets, truth teach what it proves to show

the streets are flooded with crime and I feel under the weather



truth breaks the code of the streets and teach
speak the truth and break the code

Luther Large
05-21-2006, 04:29 PM
Born in the cold world freezin i'm forced to hold heat
gun bless my son stress run my mind til i rise on my feet
life is dull i slice the pie while i'm fallin asleep
smokin herbal then spit the verbals that apply to the streets
gainin clout shoutin absurd, our father said there's a god
be concerned when his pants burn off ya'll mouthin words to the stars
my mentality leaves my dome and roams free thru the room
grab ahold of my throne at home and patch up previous wounds
able to shit on all mc's as i eat with a silver spoon
these swords'll cease u like medieval son these people doomed
it got amigos holdin deagles for weasles who roll with goons
it's feeble what evils done sone these people are rebels
chest a bulletproof vest blessed with luck from the devil
diggin up underground mc's with my left on the shovel

yo I opened up the books in hope I'd untape the smile
it's been a while (crooks) lifestyle touched the heart of a child


Seekin freedom from these heathens and demons I walk the path chosen

i'm tryna breathe, seekin freedom from heathens i walk the path chosen
with hold the (_______) of solid gold





i fought the devil he heard the bells ring




this is a VERY ruff draft but can i still get some feed please?

Father N Dangerous
05-21-2006, 04:49 PM
Born in the cold world freezin i'm forced to hold heat
gun bless my son stress run my mind til i rise on my feet
life is dull i slice the pie while i'm fallin asleep
smokin herbal then spit the verbals that apply to the streets
gainin clout shoutin absurd, our father said there's a god
be concerned when his pants burn off ya'll mouthin words to the stars
my mentality leaves my dome and roams free thru the room
grab ahold of my throne at home and patch up previous wounds
able to shit on all mc's as i eat with a silver spoon
these swords'll cease u like medieval son these people doomed
it got amigos holdin deagles for weasles who roll with goons
it's feeble what evils done sone these people are rebels
chest a bulletproof vest blessed with luck from the devil
diggin up underground mc's with my left on the shovel

Yeah really likeing wat i read!! the high-lighted parts are the lines that stood out ta me, the whole drop was good though no real topic but honestly you don't need one anyway keep doing you. stay up keep blessin

Luther Large
05-25-2006, 07:44 PM
^^aight thanks yo i'll hit up your thread 2morrow probly


here's sumthin else i just started last night:

Lay in the cut I claim my throne , re-open previous wounds
I bless the womb avoid disease and plant a seed in the tomb
I'm tryna breathe seekin freedom, heathens live on the run
I steal the show and sell my soul for solid gold and a gun
Sleep with the heat , until the beast'll see me deceased
Sieze the peace and reach my peek to ink the code of the streets


Rise to my feet where the evils wish to see us deceased
Told to break the mold, re-write the code of the streets

I wont be caught needin (some) stitches
rock phienin, bleedin, or cleanin dishes
siezed by heavy breathin, and dreams of sleepin with fishes
(these) premenition's insane, game'll visciously reign
best express it thru compisition on visions of who gets slained
for a while we had pholosophies, now a walkin hipocricsy
lost in the odyssey were alotta empty beer (cans and) bottles be

all yall soundin the same all the followin otta quit
we spit,to disprove prove these artist's knowledge of all of it


move with swiftness stay bottled up until part of me spit this
art affects the best part of you like ghonerea and syphilis

on an odyssey these heathens'll leav'em screamin 2 nobody

on an odyssey this philosophy leav'em screamin 2 nobody
not even devils and demons'll touch the gods body
.......................................
pict(ure)s of traps and prisons on big (mad) editions of hard copy

more than gifted whenever present


einstien couldnt teach the way that I preach this

Bombarded with foriegn objects, a german suplex
If the beat aint got "soul" (then) they neva took 2 steps
supposedly sharp, on point ,yet it seem to be dull
droppin bars with the structure of a newborns skull
pressin fastforward as i play those who perform slow
show up (surface), outta the blue wit sound waves to disrupt the flow

Da Dishonourable Don
05-26-2006, 06:32 AM
Luther you aight, I still don't think you can fuck with me in a battle, but your verses are always consistent, keep doing your thing, but anytime you wanna battle and get ate up, holla! C R E E P Y F O L L O W S

Luther Large
06-28-2006, 09:04 PM
Revealed the essence and felt the pressures through lifes presence
Destined to count but question my so-called blessins since adolesence


.....to be continued

Destined to count but question my so-called blessins since adolesence
Reveal the essence and feel the pressures through lifes present tense
for what its worth im holdin onto my dollar(s), its evident
we stand a better chance with no common sense
when I begin bleedin, it dont matter what u believe in (kid)
heart beatin, see me still breathin if i'm sleepin u dreamin (shit)

i'm
(you'll)(see me) (im) siezin (inner) demons with (vocals) (scriptures) upon the mic preachin

Luther Large
07-02-2006, 02:47 PM
destined to be the greatest designin these ryhmes on bible papers
evolve for all who desolved inpart of lost cases
graciously move makin (other) rappers improve




but switch moves if there's room 4 improvement

VernakuLa
07-02-2006, 04:47 PM
dope, u droppin audio LL? Hit me up if you do homie, i remember we was gonna lay some shit down a while back

1

Luther Large
07-04-2006, 06:58 PM
dope, u droppin audio LL? Hit me up if you do homie, i remember we was gonna lay some shit down a while back

1

good looks on the feed

but nah i aint recordin no audio truthfully im computer illiterate and dont know how the hell to record on a computer im workin on gettin a home studio though i just dont know what the hell i need i can spit and write ryhmes but i aint no producer

but anyways yeah i do remember that track we was gonna do maybe we should try somethin like that again sum day


peace..

Luther Large
07-05-2006, 04:51 PM
Yo, wit precison lacin pages with visions about the dark ages
capers, 10's to bens we all tend to depend on paper, but fuck it
(so)where the safe is?, u seek whats sacred to take it
makin money out the ass hidin crack in ya anus
motivations the basis son legal hustles are basic but
fuck the chump change i'm out to make big bucks
insane shit'll drain away the pain but bangins still aimless
cops hatin now probation got us payin for piss

swing, its either you hit or you miss

ya can make money out the ass hidin crack in ya anus

where the safe is?, u see whats sacred to take it


dangerous its clear fear's a stranger 2 us



if u wind up doin time thats studio time wasted

profit off it

no secret, dont need xray vison to see shit
jakes a snake tryna eat us alive inside his precint

Da Dishonourable Don
07-05-2006, 07:19 PM
yo, L, get up in a studio and ryme on an industry beat just so I can hear how you sound vocally, if I dig, then maybe I'll produce some heat for you, let me know if it sounds good!

Luther Large
07-05-2006, 07:29 PM
yo, L, get up in a studio and ryme on an industry beat just so I can hear how you sound vocally, if I dig, then maybe I'll produce some heat for you, let me know if it sounds good!

yo i been tryna find somewhere to record believe me but shits hard i aint really got too much dough so i'm waitin for my boy to get a job cuz im stuck in jobcorps and they dont pay shit

but when i finally do get sumthin recorded i'll get ou you though no doubt

Luther Large
07-12-2006, 01:29 PM
New track im doin to Afu Ra's "Equality" beat

Destined to count but question my so called blessins since adolesence
reveal the essence then feel the pressure through lifes present tense
for what its worth i'm holdin onto my dollars its evident
we stand a better chance with no common sense
Legends like pegasaus spitten when written scriptures of exodus
exit us, blessed with genesis gettin us dead presidents
evidence kill my nemesis derilicten irrelevance
never droppin dime pretty pennies in every element
Ive resorted to crime, now born again through a ryhme
Ive seen man come out on top to get shut down in his prime
When I'm deceased my seed'll seek to trifle on beats
disciple of streets, go out with rifle shots to police
This knowledge im manifestin turn grammar sessions to green
I procede to lead attacks on any bastard who scheme
When i begin bleedin it dont matter what you believe in
heart beatin see me still breathin if i'm sleepin you dreamin
these peoples is seein demons slay there team without reason
and fiends phienin with treason makes a hell of a season

jallainINS
07-13-2006, 06:33 AM
nice, that was pretty dope. i like the first two lines those were hot.

This knowledge im manifestin turn grammar sessions to green
I procede to lead attacks on any bastard who scheme

that was nice too.

Luther Large
07-13-2006, 08:01 PM
Dead presidents' the goal while ya boy destroy all his foes/
deploy to cover with soil, watchin wallets unfold/


deploy destroy soil join joy toy boil joints

Luther Large
07-29-2006, 04:10 PM
Hard act to follow, (I'm) tradin places at full throttle
bottom to top, vexed, used to collect soda bottles

hard act to follow, im tradin places full throttle
prayed 2 god yo, takin dollars from winos collectin soda bottles
nervously swallow, realized are pockets were hollow
(and) when it came to riches uncertain bitches'd start to argue



hard act to follow, im tradin places at full throttle
model, takin dollars from winos collectin soda bottles
nervously swallow, realized are pockets were hollow
when it came to riches uncertain bitches'd start to argue
so i pieced the puzzle even when the weed smoke had me seein double
learned police was trouble, they'll bury me with the shovel




where strangers'll hug you
but its all a game, the same mothafuckas'll mug you


hard act to follow, im tradin places at full throttle
model, takin dollars from winos collectin coke bottles
slowly swallow, realized are pockets were hollow
when i copped sum riches uncertain bitches'd start to argue





in the name of god i smoke a page of the genesis







while tales of battles'd travel through word of mouth




collectin soda bottles



cant see 2 feet in front of they face

Luther Large
08-12-2006, 01:17 PM
I visualized catastrophes gradually causin casulties
never give into business if visions isnt for salary
these rich mentalities got me constantly breakin laws
currently dreams of currencies selfishly seekin wars
so, we chased the faces and kept in touch with the basis
as money makers take seekin wealth in pieces of papers
spittin Reminiscin on harder struggles for profits
movin slick as butter, stuffin boxcutters in small compartments
and since I wont be witnessin mental prisons and jails
the system sells decisons to let us sit in a cell
Fuck it since the womb aint no room to be trusted
it's either visit the tomb or presume to be fucked with
Ill Becomin Don take revenge on those who played me wrong
A 9 to 5 (job)s like takin shots with the saftey on

I visualized catastrophes gradually causin casulties
never give into business if visions isnt for salary
these rich mentalities got me constantly breakin laws
currently dreams of currencies selfishly seekin wars
so, we chased the faces and kept in touch with the basis
(as) money makers we take seekin wealth in pieces of papers
spittin Reminiscin on harder struggles for profits
movin slick as butter, stuffin boxcutters in small compartments
and since I wont be witnessin mental prisons and jails
the system sells decisons to let us sit in a cell
it's sorta sickenin how we seek profits grippin pistols in hand
now able to smell the fear causin victims to shit there pants
Phiene for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visions escape at night cuz life seems like a prison
survived the system, but suffered from tuff decisons
now a touch of wisdom gets me pretty pennies as my pockets thicken

I visualize catastrophes gradually causin casulties
,never give into business if visions isnt for salary
(these) rich mentalities got me losin touch with reality
currently dreams of currencies selfishly seeked out savagely
so, we chased the papers to visit the virgin islands
describin these thoughts of diamonds i smartened and started ryhmin
and now, im reminiscin on harder struggles for profits
movin slick as butter, stuffin boxcutters in small compartments
and since I wont be witnessin mental prisons and jails
the system sells decisons to let us sit in a cell
it's sorta sickenin how we seek profits grippin pistols in hand
now able to smell the fear causin victims to shit there pants
Phiene for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visions escape at night cuz life seems like a prison
survived the system, but suffered from tuff decisons
now a touch of wisdom gets me pretty pennies as my pockets thicken

it's quite ill

Fuck it since the womb aint no room to be trusted
it's either visit the tomb or presume to be fucked with
Ill Becomin Don take revenge on those who played me wrong
A 9 to 5 (job)s like takin shots with the saftey on

ill livin in luxury currencies seeked out savagley


1's for all my enemies always tryna see me bomb
2's for fakin bitches takin shots with the saftey on


raise your right up till ya eyes shut till the dutch light up



In the heat i stuck freaks thick cheeks and orgies
strokin, caught in the moment fuck who hit it before me

Word on the street is fuck peace i seek to hush all my critics
while dollars in double digits depart us from tuff decisions
i spit with swift precision so victims become addicted to this
no pot to piss in got us livin in shit
so pick ya fists up and ryhme when the times switch up
either that or sell dimes and wind up sittin in cuffs
Persist with vision spittin my writtens consist of wisdom
while my peers turn into bitches blowin kisses in prison
I'm escapin from the devils and demons stoppin ya breathin
If i'm livin out a dream this means i gotta be sleepin
Although I feel for those lost in Government schemes
I payed the cost to be the boss, take no losses by any means
Is it nescessary to fill up another cemetery


we all veterans ask senator kerry

I visualized these casulties gradually causin profit
but never gave into business when propositions was awkward
Phien for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visons escape at night cuz lifes a prison
I survived the system, several severed from tuff decisons
When the one your kissins the cause for dollars in ya wallet missin


I visualized these casulties gradually causin profit
but never gave into business when propositions was awkward
Phien for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visons escape at night cuz life seems like a prison
survived the battle but suffered losses so tragical



I visualized these casulties gradually causin profit
but never gave into business when propositions was awkward
Phien for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visons escape at night cuz life seems like a prison
survived the system, but suffered from tuff decisons
Cut a dime bitch if shes causin dollars in my wallet missin

I visualized these casulties gradually causin profit
but never gave into business when propositions was awkward
Phien for white linen, light skin i like to see in my women
born with tight visons escape at night cuz life seems like a prison
survived the system, but suffered from tuff decisons
now a touch of wisdom gets me pretty pennies as my pockets thicken
Reminiscin on harder struggles for profits
movin slick as butter stuffin boxcutters in small compartments
And since I wont bare witness to mental prisons and jails
the system sells decisons to let us sit in a cell

payin insane amounts to put cocaine in there nose

a world where inner hate puts dinner plates on the table


cake depends on takin revenge on those with pistols

(these) rich mentalities got us losin touch with reality
currently dreams of currencies selfishly seeked out savagely
so, we chased the papers to visit the virgin islands
describin these thoughts of diamonds i smartened and started ryhmin
and now, im reminiscin on harder struggles for profits
movin slick as butter, stuffin boxcutters in small compartments
and since I wont be witnessin mental prisons and jails
the system sells decisons to let us sit in a cell
Fuck it since the womb aint no room to be trusted
it's either visit the tomb or presume to be fucked with
Ill Becomin Don take revenge on those who played me wrong
A 9 to 5 (job)s like takin shots with the saftey on

Luther Large
08-26-2006, 07:49 PM
envisioned pictures of prisons as children considered sinners
its in us from start to finish but parts of sinners is endless
get rich, considered deadly till business is shit and clips is empty
dreams of beatin systems and propasitions'll tempt me
so we'd procede wit caution to keep from sleepin in coffins
but still endorsed in thievin in order to see some profit
It's real, connect the pieces, and soon to be solvin puzzles
evolve through all the troubles, revolvers resolve ya struggles
it's sick wit all the hatred so draw ya pistols and trace it
spray shit aimless, fuck the snake shit, snitch to possums we play it
(so) as a fast learner realizin both savage bastards and cash murder
I distinguished fires and proceded to play the back burner
hard act to follow realized are pockets were hollow
when it came to riches uncertain bitches'd start to argue
So i pieced the puzzle even when the weed smoke had me seein double
Learned police was trouble they'll bury us with the shovel
if they caught the chance.....



Learnin respect through pressure to earn checks
while wars and threats got undercovers callin collect
as i hold my breath, walkin the path on where i chose to step
realizin everyday that i get closer to death




just a verse i'm workin on drop sum feed if u like

Luther Large
09-03-2006, 11:28 PM
Cash makes the world go round, the world go round (X4)


Seen through visionz, phienin, greed circulatin through systems
Seein poor people disinegrate phienin to see some business
This is poverty stricken where ritches is probly sickenin
And law enforcement officials pay pitchers to do the snitchin
It's ill, In god we trust with belief in the dollar still
So inpart with orders above, never bothered to pay bills
Got my first taste for grip when we hit up six dollar stick-ups
Never droppin a dime cuz thats just more to pick up
So keep the talk to a minimum, sinnin citizens pitchin tons
Assisted disposition verses shit in the slums
It gets real, (wheelin and) dealin in order to rock boots
Knowin time is money we proceded to clock loot
Its all a game, play ya position, or die in order to forfit
down to ya last quarter, get slaughtered and call it quits



Disposition
Livin ill as a villain steal from villas to slums

VernakuLa
09-03-2006, 11:31 PM
played message but cool

Luther Large
09-12-2006, 09:13 PM
feed??????????????

Luther Large
09-29-2006, 09:28 PM
Chasin dreams got me runnin outta breath

V for Vendetta, you better get a better baretta
Never stressin cheddar, mouth off and rock dentures
from pens to pencils it all consists in the mental
drawin pistols paintin pictures each image is very difficult

V for Vendetta, you better get a better baretta
Never stressin

Da Dishonourable Don
09-29-2006, 10:10 PM
yo LL you gonna battle in the field?, Vern set up a tagteam bout wit Concept as your partner and Vern as mines, so respond and let's do this shit!

Luther Large
10-07-2006, 02:55 PM
I roll wit a full clip and a ruthless click
the type of man to get arrested just for shootin the shit
I grew up wit a tool tucked buckin spittin them hollows
I'm not 1 to follow, take more lifes than bitches who swallow
as its all been provin, fuck bitches we just use'em
neva killin two birds wit 1 stone we just shoot'em
And, fuck a warnin i'm stormin attack wit bombs first
get stomped wit converse, if i need money i'm snatchin moms purse

You better hope you see some luck or procede to bein a sittin duck
The anti-christ (type), use bible paper to roll my (his) weed up

tha god concept
10-07-2006, 02:57 PM
nice verse fam..keep killin shit

drop sum knowledge in the vendetta battle when you get the chance homie

Luther Large
11-22-2006, 09:44 PM
????????????????

Luther Large
12-23-2006, 11:02 PM
At the lounge sellin sess, I see sirens, keep it supressed
confronted by walkin death I smell the shit (rock) on they breath

trick offered to suck my dick but "bitch dont get gassed"
she sorta laughed i jetted back to cut these 40's in half

Luther Large
12-25-2006, 12:08 AM
Dear god, if there is a god help me keep out from under the dirt
eyes glossy, narcotics killin me softly

Post traumaticaly stressed I smoke sess for the shell shock
seen some sell on the block that now rot in a cell block

Luther Large
01-04-2008, 10:27 AM
I Realized I'm sentenced to hell god through me the book wit no remorse/
So I broke some haze and smoked a page to piss'em off/
Started sinnin early while nothin seemed to concern me/
Came so close to death satans fires started to burn me/
They wanna murder me somethin seems to be happenin/
Bury me 12 feet just to keep me from comin back again/
Ironically we got locked up 4 dealin keys/
Sorta suicidal still smokin knowin it's killin me/
Hear no evil see no evil, Rob'em blind/
If jesus died for us he must be outta his fuckin mind/
Dead or alive, still the hardest to kill/
So we can settle this now or when I see u in hell/
We got some people searchin for god thinkin they'll find hope/
I'm still searchin for god to stick a knife in his throat/
Cuz yo my lifes a so I stay blitted at every minute/
Aint neva goin to hell, I'm already in it/


?????

Luther Large
02-20-2008, 08:01 AM
If smokin's bad 4 my health i guess i'm playin my self
but it was worth it 4 the purpose of the feelins i felt
from the chronic, ironic how the dealer was dealt
by the man who had a plan 2 draw the steel on his belt
Cash, the root of all evil's what they tellin my people
pleez my mother told me doe dont grow on trees
so ease back, shorty saw me pumpin a g pack
in fact he told his dad "i wanna be like that"
when i grow up and blow up microfones'll tear the show up
rocks on the block call the cops and sho enuff
we still livin in the struggle day by day
i try 2 keep an open mind like JFK
and aint that easy 2 be what u see on tv

Luther Large
02-20-2008, 08:07 AM
We gotta 4get today in order to live 2morrow
so yesterday i killed my braincells sippin from outta bottle
I tried 2 kick the habbit but i cant work magic
shit, crash the whip, back at it in bad traffic bitch
A ryhmesayer, young perpatrator 4 power
till trick knowledge tried 2 push me 4 pussy n big dollars
Now i get busy, like reality hasnt hit me
negative ass, look at the glass half empty
simply, rather die then try 2 b filthy

Luther Large
03-26-2008, 08:04 AM
I went from purse snatcha 2 versatile verse rapper,
cursin the 1st cracka endorsin absurd rappers,
herb attacker, and same high school slacker
tellin his teacher that'll to slaper,if she told'im 2 stay after
plus me and my brother bangin had me clouded wit anger
so i walked up to him,snuffed'im, and broke his m'f'n power rangers
but whats strange is how now he dont even know what day it is
Hallucinatin he's satan talkin 2 aliens

I GOT A CHAMBER
03-26-2008, 08:46 AM
I GOT ON A BUS NO FUUS SMOKED CRACK ON THE BAKE SEAT THEN I SAW JUST BY MY FEET A BIT OF WEED SO I GOT THat smoked sweet im a base head space head name it wot you like head i get chASED BY FEDS DREDS AND BIKES THAT LIKE A FIGHT SHIT ITS LIGHTS OUT NOW WOW

Bigot Hitman
03-26-2008, 12:41 PM
^^^ stop rapp'in

Luther Large
04-02-2008, 01:23 PM
They told me time is money and it dont make sense
to waste a couple hundred years drinkin beers on the steps
talkin that could , shoulda , woulda, got sum money and blew up
just that same stotty nose little kid that'd pick boogers,
neva grew up, or gave a fuck what they expect from me
but through each year i swear that they get the best of me
shits ugly trust me watch the hands on the clock
while surgery really worried me the next mans glock
to hurt me or try 2 murk me then swear that it wasnt purposley
or personal but personally i think

adedwutang
04-02-2008, 04:40 PM
im really feelin ur words b, but i wanna see you make some verses that are longer then wut u put out recently, cuz you have these certain bars to verses that are just fire, and i feel like if you just stick with those its crack, but then sometimes u get off of the flow and switch it up before i get a chance to really enjoy it. im check back soon and see what you got, stay up
peace

Luther Large
04-04-2008, 01:42 PM
^^ good lookin on the feed its about time sumbody commented and about the short verses i just be listenin to music and brainstormin shit whe i be on the computer so i just come in here and jot it down nah mean i'll check out your thread later peace....

now listen little boy that gun is not a toy
if i eva knew a thing it's jail u should avoid
and they paint pictures, draw guns and trace victims
with the chalk that once taught the young children
how they can be all that they can be
as far as the eye see must only be 5 feet
cuz they aint lookin past the thinnest piece of the glass
thats seperatin they ass from hash and quick cash
or there next hi try 2 decypher then ask why
why they lite it from the pipe and they neva begin 2 cry
till they sober within a few minutes it's all over
hope it's worth it 4 the work it took to cook on the stove
what? dont give a fuck, now back to the man slangin drugs
held a grudge, and always wanted 2 be a thug