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SurreaL
07-17-2005, 05:42 AM
* No dickriding

*1 verse, 20 - 40 line's

* explained vote's

* good luck

SurreaL
07-17-2005, 11:02 AM
Im gone for the day, so peace.

TUCO
07-17-2005, 11:47 AM
ayo....sign mah ass up
so far im 3-0 lifetime (won one battle before the crash).....i remember we actually battled once in the DOJO....no doubt homey...ima be gone most of the day too so we'll pick up on this tomorrow i guess....

PEACE

SurreaL
07-18-2005, 09:42 AM
back, oh no doubt fam, whenever you're ready to start this just tell me, peace.

TUCO
07-18-2005, 11:10 AM
aight fam....no doubt
u start off aight.....

PEACE

SurreaL
07-18-2005, 02:48 PM
No offense to this dun, you still my mother fucking dog,
I'm the leader of the dojo,you just on my mother fucking knob.
A lower class lesson, compaired to me, A true thought confession,
Viewer dicression is advised as I slay this weak mc before you're eye's,
it's no surprise, through you're lie's I'll still rise,
from this you'll demise, as lyriclly and spiritually I arise.
You couldn't touch this, I drop gem's bigger then you're jaw.
you're biggest flaw is that you over do it, You gotta cook it raw,
So in the end you're Ill, but the only person that said that is a doctor,
Im off the rocker, you were dead in the bed untill I shocked ya.
talked ya into dropping rap line's, but you dropped whack line's,
told you to pick em up, and start droppin' flat line's.
No question's asked about the lesson's I preach,
cause the dream's I teach, are to high for you're reach.
Im too nice with it, why you here, you look out of place,
I could easily erase and misplace you without a trace.
and I'll say that to you're face, you know me dun, I rain sick,
You could claim you drop sick, but once again you would be riding my dick.
I'll cut it short cause I think the damage has been done,
You havn't even dropped a verse yet and we know who already won.

JNINE
07-18-2005, 04:17 PM
Surreal, you said no dick riding. Yo rhymes are wack, pull a Saddam and go into hiding.
You rhymes are old and deteriorated, you ride so much dick your pass is laminated.
Battling fools with no experience, think you can beat me you must be delirious.
No one can save you now, not even Neo from the Matrix, I'm losing my patience.
Like superman, I see through your rhymes and your fake ass exterior, hating my skills wont make me inferior. Matter of fact, it'll make me superior.
Quit stuttering and go back to the special olympics. My rhymes are prolific.
Takes you 2 to come up with a response, sit and stare at your pencil until it rots.
Writing acid so i dont use paper, using titanium. My lyrics will fuck up your cranium.
Read my lyrics and bite and go visit yo mama at the construction site.

SurreaL
07-18-2005, 04:20 PM
Ok, don't flood the battle, fuck off untill it's done please.

TUCO
07-18-2005, 05:01 PM
*dun dun dun* that there's my footsteps comin
i hope u started runnin' cause aint no DOJO frontin'
allowed in my mental house, so crazy i rip ya blouse
tye-dye it red with blood from my emotionally scarred head
take ur woman ass to bed and proceed insane procedures
induce body seizures which then lead to deadly fevers
yellowfever cured at the sound of the bell
that means ive been killin' your Sw33t self inside ya shell
defenseless little prick referring to cooks and doctors
spiritualize and analyze this diss verse, here's ur Oscar
u won! quite a performance on that stage
but not as impressive as ur dick-ride lines u saved
overplayed joke bars, stop shittin' on me, u envy
join the fast growing club which itself contains a pub
drink away ur pains, both emotional and physical
think of how TUCO murdered you, think of how TUCO murdered you
now ur going crazy, might as well be "2 time Justin"
bustin' my jaw in ur head, now watch me serve you concussions
listen to ya GOD when its time for ur medication
spine shot for ur skull, shattered in 3 places
The Difference once again prooves he's rap's new battle sensation

PEACE

TUCO
07-18-2005, 06:48 PM
nice battle SL....now taking votes pleeeeeeeeease

peaces

hollywoodrealty
07-18-2005, 07:55 PM
i gotta say surreal took the 1st round, even though he dissed me once, i still gotta side with him, the line that said it best was

"You couldn't touch this, I drop gem's bigger then you're jaw.
you're biggest flaw is that you over do it, You gotta cook it raw"

whatradio
07-18-2005, 08:36 PM
my vote= SurreaL

his verse was structured well.
had witty wordplay, good punches.
nice verse

iNtell3kT
07-18-2005, 08:55 PM
No offense to this dun, you still my mother fucking dog,
I'm the leader of the dojo,you just on my mother fucking knob.
A lower class lesson, compaired to me, A true thought confession,
Viewer dicression is advised as I slay this weak mc before you're eye's,
it's no surprise, through you're lie's I'll still rise,
from this you'll demise, as lyriclly and spiritually I arise.
You couldn't touch this, I drop gem's bigger then you're jaw.
you're biggest flaw is that you over do it, You gotta cook it raw,
So in the end you're Ill, but the only person that said that is a doctor,
Im off the rocker, you were dead in the bed untill I shocked ya.
talked ya into dropping rap line's, but you dropped whack line's,
told you to pick em up, and start droppin' flat line's.
No question's asked about the lesson's I preach,
cause the dream's I teach, are to high for you're reach.
Im too nice with it, why you here, you look out of place,
I could easily erase and misplace you without a trace.
and I'll say that to you're face, you know me dun, I rain sick,
You could claim you drop sick, but once again you would be riding my dick.
I'll cut it short cause I think the damage has been done,
You havn't even dropped a verse yet and we know who already won. Blue is the good stuff....the red is all the wack stuff....

imo when your battlin, u shouldnt chose words that rhyme with the same suffix, not being a hyprocrite, i do it somtimes but not all the time..

now let me quote TUCO's verse and judge his..i'll leave my vote when i quote his

iNtell3kT
07-18-2005, 09:00 PM
*dun dun dun* that there's my footsteps comin
i hope u started runnin' cause aint no DOJO frontin'
allowed in my mental house, so crazy i rip ya blouse
tye-dye it red with blood from my emotionally scarred head
take ur woman ass to bed and proceed insane procedures
induce body seizures which then lead to deadly fevers
yellowfever cured at the sound of the bell
that means ive been killin' your Sw33t self inside ya shell
defenseless little prick referring to cooks and doctors
spiritualize and analyze this diss verse, here's ur Oscar
u won! quite a performance on that stage
but not as impressive as ur dick-ride lines u saved
overplayed joke bars, stop shittin' on me, u envy
join the fast growing club which itself contains a pub
drink away ur pains, both emotional and physical
think of how TUCO murdered you, think of how TUCO murdered you
now ur going crazy, might as well be "2 time Justin"
bustin' my jaw in ur head, now watch me serve you concussions
listen to ya GOD when its time for ur medication
spine shot for ur skull, shattered in 3 places
The Difference once again prooves he's rap's new battle sensation

PEACE that opening was on some Newbie shit, wack as fuck!
green stuff is so-so but nothing solid.....
red was wack....


considering i felt Surrels verse more then yours, he gets my vote...

Vote/ Surrel

TUCO
07-18-2005, 10:26 PM
haters

peace

SurreaL
07-19-2005, 12:31 AM
Good battle fam, thank's for the vote's, peace.

TUCO
07-19-2005, 09:50 AM
ayo....u didnt put up how many votes wins....if its 3 then u won already....i dunno

PEACE

Idiom
07-19-2005, 02:08 PM
ok

you won!

great job!

claps for you!

have a miraculous day!

OmO < Idiom

SurreaL
07-19-2005, 06:04 PM
Whoop's just seen that, but I alway's put 3 vote's, you know nobody's really vote's, so I figgure, the least, the better, but if you find that unfair we could goto 5, but I figgure that would take awhile. Peace.

SurreaL
07-19-2005, 06:05 PM
P.S that's a ill banner Tuco.

TUCO
07-19-2005, 10:24 PM
lol aight well u win fam....no doubt it was a nice battle yo....fun writin all em bars bout ya ass, lol

PEACE!