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bad boy T
01-17-2007, 07:25 AM
Queen takes the king, relevent to chess,
It's like shalion soilders on the battle, feild cutting up flesh,
They were sent up to the war, sent up to the reck,
In the slums, like living in a trench,
The game begins, the pawn moves first,
Look out for the queen, trechourous, she's the worst,
You sacrafice, so the king don't get hurt,
Killings, who sent the pawn in first,
Sacraficed tortured, when captured,
Different results, of consults, of matches,
Tiger claws and tiger scratches,
You take one pack it comes in a package

To be continued......................................... .............

J.T.S.
01-17-2007, 02:04 PM
Best youv'e wrote so far!

bad boy T
01-24-2007, 09:23 AM
Do you wanna hear verus 2

Tito_Para Enfrente
01-25-2007, 07:10 PM
sick pretty sick this one.

bad boy T
01-29-2007, 07:23 AM
Yo Mouser Words who are you ?

Tha Ill Shogun Lord
01-29-2007, 10:20 AM
yo that was tight you got your own style but it sounds kinda like the rza in ther but yo enough flattering

could you check out my post trying to see if it got alittle better
first time i finally let the words take note

bad boy T
02-01-2007, 11:34 AM
Thanks: but I rule and live by my own style

Peace to tha Ill Shogun Lord

Bigot Hitman
02-01-2007, 03:26 PM
Queen takes the king, relevent to chess,
It's like shalion soilders on the battle, feild cutting up flesh,
They were sent up to the war, sent up to the reck,
In the slums, like living in a trench,
The game begins, the pawn moves first,
Look out for the queen, trechourous, she's the worst,
You sacrafice, so the king don't get hurt,
Killings, who sent the pawn in first,
Sacraficed tortured, when captured,
Different results, of consults, of matches,
Tiger claws and tiger scratches,
You take one pack it comes in a package

To be continued......................................... .............

Too short, descent attempt at somethin halfway new, flows shaky, no truw wordplay, simple metaphors, some parts didn't make sense, some of it strayed off your topic. 1.8/5

bad boy T
03-05-2008, 06:23 AM
I appreciate all your comments

peace

bad boy T
03-06-2008, 06:43 AM
Showing the truth to the world in the shadow of death
Snake breath check! throw rings in your neck
Cut the flesh no stress can be brought to the stars in the constellation
Assimilate digest tightning the bars with elavation
Penetration dialation extermination perpetration all around the nation
Assassination liquidation reverlation bringing in all arond the creation
The creation of manhood and humanity
Life and peace on the world to the human familys
No death and beef stack the wheat crack your teeth
beseige stack the cheese actually re track the map of peace