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PLO-Stylez
02-07-2007, 01:04 PM
Some new shit I 've been working on. Any input at all would be great.

I hope ya'll like the intro

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=9A4866DB0AB7128B

Memory Man
02-07-2007, 02:57 PM
i like the elements alot. the drums hit hard, synth works, strings sound cool. the programming is a little all over the place for my taste, but i appreciate the avant-garde bent. overall a good effort.

pablobaluba
02-07-2007, 04:06 PM
hmmm...i don't like it :)...it's well worked but too simple. it's not my taste
peace

PLO-Stylez
02-07-2007, 08:05 PM
i like the elements alot. the drums hit hard, synth works, strings sound cool. the programming is a little all over the place for my taste, but i appreciate the avant-garde bent. overall a good effort.

yeah i really should have taken more time on making it flow a little better. I just wanted to see if some1 else would see it. Thx

Sun Tzu, Tha Soul Controllah
02-07-2007, 08:25 PM
if u upload it on soundclick or myspace i'll check it, i just dont feel like downloading it

GameOfDeath
02-07-2007, 09:49 PM
All the sounds are right, but sometimes the drumloop is starting and stopping abruptly and I think you should make the sequences longer before each time that higher pitched sound comes in. I'd just work on the sequencing here I like the sounds a lot.