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clavikal
07-19-2005, 01:13 AM
Mind enhancer- a label concealed through the hazel appeal
As deaf eyes reveal blinded cancer, answers unable to heal
No way you are real, and it is fact that the dead are back
as I levitate on magic leather mats as aladin's better half
Random letter tags, get placed upon the face of pawns
to blow ya pigments in the same sky that I gaze at dawn
Wit' blazin' palms ive raised a spawn, just as evil as I
from every visual POINT I'll needle ya eye an leave you ta' die
A false breeding design taught to the all feeble'ist minds
an the Small people that climb to the tall an diesel'est finds
Crossed the Illegal'ing lines, an You know its he, its C the soul of me
an The pope? who's he? smh..indeed I will not need the rosary to open free!,
An hopefully what I wrote was clean, but it came from the top again
Break you an box you in.. my cock in ya lung rapes you of oxygen..

these crabs are stressed when clav is pressed to his limits
an like navy cadets I'm back on deck ina wu vest an a fitted

BlaK FuRYaN
07-19-2005, 09:11 AM
Fantastic!!!!


J/k


That Was Tight Clav....keep Dropin Em.....it Gets Dry In Here At Times....


Peace

clavikal
07-19-2005, 02:37 PM
no doubt..appreciated..I will be back with more and plan to be consistant

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-19-2005, 03:39 PM
Yeah I'm loving those multi's and the subject matter gets fatter like baseball you're the batter swinging on pitches most bitches receive stitches leaving gaping holes in their britches minds open like a peasants home as carrion is left for vultures withg mentals froze ice sculpting domes chisled time from the blind that roam the rugged terrain flames baptize those in muddied urban decay murdered and maimed rhymes schemes like torrential rain reigning this plain or plateau most dungeoness crabs just leave it at a low scavenging the floor with flows that ravage all holes....P.I.R.

Poetic Intellect Respect

GuardianOne
07-20-2005, 08:47 AM
Its a nice verse, although some areas it seemed as though you lost the depth of your lyrics.

Peace
PS: Keep posting