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d fresh
02-09-2007, 07:29 PM
We got it locked like a crowd of dreads
The music is loud to shred
Thru the black cloud over my head
My heart is proud but if bled
Cause its broken covered in bloodshed
I think like Malcolm X on point with lead
Act like Detroit Red out for joints and bread
And speak like El-Hajj Malik Shabazz
Bring heat to last to beat the crass
Standing on my feet till the last
Days cause these cats are weak and ass acting brand new
I stand true cause a Stan I might knew
Would force my hand to do what I have to do
Listening to the Who sober or bent the God sent
With the hunger and mental strength
To sustain from hate for freedom and estates
Like Harriet Tubman so I can escape
From the belly of the beast grim fate
Just wait man to lead hand in hand
The mentally enslaved to the promise land real bold
Thru the Underground Railroad
To get the major fold on the right train of thought
That canít be bought but is always sought for to uplift the will
Prophecy fulfilled to pay my bills
I must say Iím skilled
My life I lay on the line for dollar bills


Thank you for absorbing light I shine. Peace

Bigot Hitman
02-15-2007, 10:52 PM
The best thing i can say is the flow was consistent for alot of the lines, metaphors were simple, no true wordplay, and played out concepts. 5/10

d fresh
02-19-2007, 09:35 PM
lol, yeah alright, I appreciate the feedback. I could learn a lot from "cops think Im like a empty starch can, an i wont "spray." Genius. Peace