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Ebo
07-19-2005, 12:29 PM
Can't even put words to my feelings and thoughts,
standing in the midst of the storm feeling lost.
Unforeseen conflict arises inspired by a single mistake,
Choosing between 2 roads, always the wrong decision i make
If deciding what's real or what's fake, there seems to be no guideline to take.
Though not depressed or feeling sorrow,
i know i'll still be facing the same problems tommorow.

GuardianOne
07-20-2005, 01:56 AM
Nice and simple. You seemed to have a distance to this verse. Far searching ideas contained to it. Watch out for your words ("their seems to be no guideline to take") maybe "There". But it was a decent verse. Keep posting

Peace