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UNCLE RUCKUS
02-24-2007, 05:06 PM
The yang to your yin/Strange of your kin
Trying to bring change from within
Begin to feel the pain; just staying sane
Fuck playing games and placing blame
16, threatened the deans life
For upsetting my right to expression
Led to Expulsion then forced in detention
Kid interrupted, took my punk record collection
Facing depression; a young man stressing
Surrounded by madness and constant aggression
Returning home was out of the question
So I changed my direction and made new connections
Along the way still waiting for brighter days
The light at the end only seems to reflect my pain
And Im lost again lifes got me insane
Looking back at where Ive been

A Sordid past made me move forward fast
Absorbed the trash but moving toward the last (days)
City streets filled with filth
Gritty feet blistered and scarred still
Fuck acting petty, were together
Be ready for whatever, people change like the weather
If we cant change the system Were gonna fuck it
Let some cash flow into your kids bucket
Wheres the remedy for all this iniquity
Burned effegies no one leading, dying separately
Minds in jeopardy damaged irreparably
So many living so feebely
Still theyre Inconceivably
surviving against all odds
And False gods seems like were all tired
Of the shennagins, the rich fantoms and their insanity
Minds enchanted entertained by vanity
And the gossips hypnotic
celebrities a concept with No logic
Perposterous how their subduing the populace

UNCLE RUCKUS
02-24-2007, 05:12 PM
chronicling this rapid third eye movement
tune in to the constant improvement
for your listenting pleasure
beats that fresher
plus rhymes that catch ya
senses and clenses
yr ear of its wax
so grab a beer and relax
too much tension to mention
So Im ascendin past that dimension
negativity like electricity
locking then shocking you
Complacent nation
television for mass intoxication
Upper class on a permanent vacation
too many starving were not evolving
fukk Darwen, start solving
the Earth crisis
Demons developing diabolical devices
Slimiest nazi scientists mastered unnatural disasters
A grand illusion obscures
the final sollution
manmade counter-revolution takes
the form of earthquakes and AIDS
NASA fuckin up the ionosphere
Fox Newspropaganda keeps you in fear
confuses manipulating yr emotions
Abuses of Nature like manipulating the oceans
corporate religions exploiting yr devotion
their end is approachin rapidly


the lower classes must rise up in arms
harm cant be diverted the wealtiest must be murdered

Lyrically I lacerate,
assassinate like Rae on Faster Blade
Decapatate and blood ejaculates
And saturates the track
My words a flying axe thru the backs of the wicked
Severing spines from several minds
With swords that liquid

LHX
02-24-2007, 07:21 PM
Fuck acting petty, were together
Be ready for whatever, people change like the weather
If we cant change the system Were gonna fuck it

feelin it yo

that line there is potent

Bigot Hitman
02-24-2007, 10:29 PM
The yang to your yin/Strange of your kin
Trying to bring change from within
Begin to feel the pain; just staying sane
Fuck playing games and placing blame
16, threatened the deans life
For upsetting my right to expression
Led to Expulsion then forced in detention
Kid interrupted, took my punk record collection
Facing depression; a young man stressing
Surrounded by madness and constant aggression
Returning home was out of the question
So I changed my direction and made new connections
Along the way still waiting for brighter days
The light at the end only seems to reflect my pain
And Im lost again lifes got me insane
Looking back at where Ive been

A Sordid past made me move forward fast
Absorbed the trash but moving toward the last (days)
City streets filled with filth
Gritty feet blistered and scarred still
Fuck acting petty, were together
Be ready for whatever, people change like the weather
If we cant change the system Were gonna fuck it
Let some cash flow into your kids bucket
Wheres the remedy for all this iniquity
Burned effegies no one leading, dying separately
Minds in jeopardy damaged irreparably
So many living so feebely
Still theyre Inconceivably
surviving against all odds
And False gods seems like were all tired
Of the shennagins, the rich fantoms and their insanity
Minds enchanted entertained by vanity
And the gossips hypnotic
celebrities a concept with No logic
Perposterous how their subduing the populace



This is what i don't like about this site, the best shit gets no feedback, the flow on this was unique, uneven at sum times, but had entertaining parts in it the way you wraped up lines like:

16, threatened the deans life
For upsetting my right to expression
Led to Expulsion then forced in detention
Kid interrupted, took my punk record collection

That's sumthin masta killa or cappa would do flow-wise. The lyrics were straight foward, blunt but with good vocab like nas, no confusing/deep/complex metaphors, which is ok. I like the way u ended the first verse:

The light at the end only seems to reflect my pain
And Im lost again lifes got me insane
Looking back at where Ive been

THese are the type of real flows, unstangant, live, or animated in a way that would sound different to the listener/reader. Ryhming covered or hidden words to gether that wouldn't be emphazied, which would be in this case: end, again, and been. That's good shit.

Overall: these two pieces on this page are better than 70%-80% of the writtens on this site. Keep up your style cuz its good. 8.8/10- on this piece

UNCLE RUCKUS
02-25-2007, 07:23 AM
This is what i don't like about this site, the best shit gets no feedback, the flow on this was unique, uneven at sum times, but had entertaining parts in it the way you wraped up lines like:

16, threatened the deans life
For upsetting my right to expression
Led to Expulsion then forced in detention
Kid interrupted, took my punk record collection

That's sumthin masta killa or cappa would do flow-wise. The lyrics were straight foward, blunt but with good vocab like nas, no confusing/deep/complex metaphors, which is ok. I like the way u ended the first verse:

The light at the end only seems to reflect my pain
And Im lost again lifes got me insane
Looking back at where Ive been

THese are the type of real flows, unstangant, live, or animated in a way that would sound different to the listener/reader. Ryhming covered or hidden words to gether that wouldn't be emphazied, which would be in this case: end, again, and been. That's good shit.

Overall: these two pieces on this page are better than 70%-80% of the writtens on this site. Keep up your style cuz its good. 8.8/10- on this piece


PEACE
thanks alot for reading LHX and Mister Big, I appreaciate your words alot. I have been writing for awhile and its always nice when people notice

UNCLE RUCKUS
02-25-2007, 10:13 AM
Scripts filled for a social misfit
Infinite doctors visits
Traveling circus Pains drowned
Strange now scattered remains out
Forever changed now
Embarked on this journey through the unknown
Ive Grown through tribulations
Losing relations forced to be patient
Inside Im raging
Not gracefully aging painfully fading
Tensions escalating
Debating intervention
The maddness outside theres no need to mention
Good people everywhere
just dont dare ask a penny spared
If youre scared get your eyes unglued from that tube
Buy a Rubbicks Cube and stay amused
They prey on the confused youth
With no excuse for their abuse of the truth
Keep us pacified til our passions die
Keep us pacified til our passions die

It aint vanished ,Anger managed
Banished from their Kingdom of Fear
No hoodlum steered clear of the law
Still woke on jail floors locked behind padded doors
Before Is institutionalized, dissillusioned by lies
Coudnt bruise my pride
Paranoid and sleep deprived
On the grind trying to survive
Dont rhyme just to pull dimes
Im gettin stress off my chest like removin breast cancer
Doing my best to answer all the questions of life
Enticed by the bright lights of the Night Life
Witnessed iniquities effected me directly
Poverty posesses pistol poppin
Still stagnate starvin Problems not stoppin
Now my blood pumpin
A need to crush somethin
Too much nothing lifes flushing
Down the drain still trying to drown the pain
Tears in the rain
Check the mirror face the same
Only the places change
Time can get so strange
Itd be easy to give in
Not easy, just living
Lifes an open book tired of fictions
Some cook dope rock to feed their addictions
Violent society with a variety a pills for anxiety
Feed the soul starve yourselfs
Modern Times shit for your health
Pressure stress and depression
Manufactured flesh n death obsessions
So bored with life some shooting death
Like vultures looting whats left
Of Humain Remains consuming grains
Of death in their veins
Embrace faith face the day
Dont waste rage use your hate

UNCLE RUCKUS
02-27-2007, 04:32 PM
bump bloop

UNCLE RUCKUS
02-28-2007, 08:21 AM
It was all a nightmare
Begging to leave with the door right there
Strapped in a stretchure
Trapped feelin pressure
As city doctors filled me with whatever
Wake to hysterical laughing and screaming
And the eyes of satan
And to know I wasnt dreaming
Just the fiending for leaving
Kept me awaking to catatonic crackheads shaking
Thoughts of escaping
Head stomach and limbs were acheing
As another needle forced in my body
Fighting sleep like a hobby
vampires robbed me of more blood
Devils filled me with more drugs
Days became weeks/Still couldnt leave
Still not allowed outside to breathe
Thieves dressed as medical doctors
Fed my family bullshit
And their diagnosis preposterous

Bigot Hitman
02-28-2007, 05:18 PM
It was all a nightmare
Begging to leave with the door right there
Strapped in a stretchure
Trapped feelin pressure
As city doctors filled me with whatever
Wake to hysterical laughing and screaming
And the eyes of satan
And to know I wasnt dreaming
Just the fiending for leaving
Kept me awaking to catatonic crackheads shaking
Head stomach and limbs were acheing
As another needle forced in my body
Fighting sleep like a hobby
vampires robbed me of more blood
Devils filled me with more drugs
Days became weeks/Still couldnt leave
Still not allowed outside to breathe
Thieves dressed as medical doctors
Fed my family bullshit
And their diagnosis preposterous

Nice concepts on this verse, the flow got uneven at some times, the metaphor about the hobby was understandable and good. The creativity was good too, even though u didn't use alot of adjectives, the imagery came through good on this verse. If u fix up the flow on sum of the lines on this verse, this would be a 8.5-9 easy. I'd give this a 8/10 overall though.

UNCLE RUCKUS
03-01-2007, 08:02 AM
alright thanks Mr. Big I see what youre saying, thats from a few years ago I actually used it on an old song Maybe Ill touch it up for my next project

Peace

UNCLE RUCKUS
03-02-2007, 12:15 PM
With no interruption
Got to spit on the land of consumption
Rape and corruption, religions based on assumptions
No Justice just obstruction
Their future is more prison construction
Must have malfunctioned and escaped their seduction
A sucction that children get sucked in and
Get hooked on a substance
,To feed them gluttons that eat off our existence
With grim persistance; met with little resistance
Their still ignoring peaceful protest; at times all seems hopeless
But the righteous possesed to enlighten the rest
To reach some sort success
In a Nation where everythings messed
Well dressed execs obsessed with paper money nothin less
WHere Police can arrest ex-cons in bullet proof vests
Seems senseless at best
In our own country getting no respects
Got me vexxed wondering whats next



Fuck a possesion/ my obsession s an end to opression
Exploitations without explanations
This is a declaration of revolution
Cause expressions as old a profession as prostitution
Problems without sollutions mass confusion slash disillusion
Im a nuisance to sacred institutions
Didnt need drugs, grew up on pollution and radiation
But fuck it still abusin I stay high like aviation
A blatant statement against enslavement
Minimum payment got me constantly raging
Complacant nation, Televisions for mass intoxication
Federal domination damnin a nation
Politics of brute force/shoot first dont ask questions
Forced confessions/No remorse, only aggression
Mixed with arrogance, your amerikan embarassments

Sun Supreme
03-02-2007, 12:56 PM
Nigga I love yo shit everything in this thread is fiya. You remind meof killah priest a little. everything i read from you is like a 8/10. Do ya thing kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ANYONE WHO POSTED ABOVE ME CHECK MY SHIT WHEN I POST IT. I RESPECT YA'LL OPINIONS AND I TEND TO AGREE WIT YA'LL ALOT

UNCLE RUCKUS
03-02-2007, 01:31 PM
Nigga I love yo shit everything in this thread is fiya. You remind meof killah priest a little. everything i read from you is like a 8/10. Do ya thing kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ANYONE WHO POSTED ABOVE ME CHECK MY SHIT WHEN I POST IT. I RESPECT YA'LL OPINIONS AND I TEND TO AGREE WIT YA'LL ALOT

thanks man really Peace!

UNCLE RUCKUS
04-16-2007, 11:56 AM
Please God save us, were being lied to everyday
Worthless paper still enslaves us, when will we awake?
Absolute madness, blindly serving our masters
Execute the few bastards to avoid mass disasters
Get a micro-chip implanted in your babies,
For a better safer future you fucking crazy?
Fuck your land, fight for your childs life
They got a plan, but your freedoms sacrificed
You got rights? Keep your fucking hands up and shut- up!
Who got the power keeps that power corrupt
But You still scared of change want to keep things the same?
The unknown is strange, but can you live with that shame?
Theyll tell you who to blame, but stay in the shadows
Give you targets for your hatred and you swallow
All the shit they feed you without any questions
Send you to war and then spit on the veterans

SID
04-16-2007, 01:41 PM
i have a homie that spits the same kind of substance....

UNCLE RUCKUS
04-16-2007, 04:04 PM
i have a homie that spits the same kind of substance....

Good more heads are waking up then

UNCLE RUCKUS
04-21-2007, 09:59 AM
Were kept on a tight leashe
Always in their crosshairs
At anytime they might squeeze
Enforcing their unfair laws here
Get yours cause its sure they got their paws near
Manipulate your brain like a trained dog
they select the news that cause fear
The super-rich controlling you
In order to maintain power
Patrolling you
like a mad prison guard from his watchtower
Survival of the fit system designed to squash cowards
Fuck that shit, I exist to resist
Raise up if youre pissed
Unite to fight real terrorists not on the FBIs list
Excite the masses out of their passive state
To fight these bastards. turn tables backwords
ASk Government officials, "any last words"
Finally Free Mumia, and all the falsely accused
Justice will feel real good for so long powers been abused
Weve been used, working like sprokets
the ones that make the clock tick
Kept in a hypnotic state workin ourselves to death
You cant even jerk-off without a guilt complex
Living dead, and the enemy profits
From all our hardwork, how extremely obnoxious
Breathin toxic airs living nauseous
To support this bitch thats sucking all our resources
Of course its natural to oppose our oppressors
But all most of us lust is a life of leisure
Obssesed with simple pleasures
Could easily be sacrificed for real treasure, if were clever
Together rise instead of dying seperate
Then whatever lies ahead ,we can accept it
At least knowing that we tried in times thats hectic
Before septic tides rise and cut off our electric

UNCLE RUCKUS
04-21-2007, 12:37 PM
heres the last two in audio (over the Taming the Iron beat by Bronze Nazareth)
http://download.yousendit.com/3678D72503542D59 (http://download.yousendit.com/3678D72503542D59)

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-02-2007, 11:18 AM
Woke up to find you still next to me
Closest I feel to exstacy is your breath on me
My stress still testing me; but as your caressing me
I feel it less. Im blessed to be in your presence
You balance out all the tension its a blessing
Dressing for work, its like I cherish each moment and second
Fast forward to the present what have we forgotten?
Could take a lesson from when our love was fresh now seems rotten
Arguing like its a routine blaming each other for everything
Making-up only to repeat the whole thing whats happening to our dream?
Tell me Im still asleep and havent gone so deep
You cant believe its me Im acting like such a creep
Used to kiss your feet, now Im stepping on your toes
Oh lord why do I destroy everything thats close
Learning to let the little things slide; fuck my pride
Cause arguing like siblings we wont survive

AcidPhosphate69
05-02-2007, 11:29 AM
Nice drop dude. A lot of substance behind that shit. I like how at first it seemed like a love piece and then you brought it to the current state of affairs.

One of my fav lines was "Used to kiss your feet, now Im stepping on your toes
Oh lord why do I destroy everything thats close"

Yeah, I would continue but what the fuck did you do to my font? Son of a bitch...how do I fix this?

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-02-2007, 11:34 AM
Nice drop dude. A lot of substance behind that shit. I like how at first it seemed like a love piece and then you brought it to the current state of affairs.

One of my fav lines was "Used to kiss your feet, now Im stepping on your toes
Oh lord why do I destroy everything thats close"

Yeah, I would continue but what the fuck did you do to my font? Son of a bitch...how do I fix this?
I didnt change it its cause you quoted the text
haha click on the "A" icon and you can change it back thanks for checking that though Acid
Peace

AcidPhosphate69
05-02-2007, 12:03 PM
Haha, yeah. I was like, what the fuck is this? But yeah, good piece with emotion behind it. I honestly haven't read a lot of your shit but I'm gonna defnitely check for it more often now.

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-02-2007, 12:11 PM
Haha, yeah. I was like, what the fuck is this? But yeah, good piece with emotion behind it. I honestly haven't read a lot of your shit but I'm gonna defnitely check for it more often now.

thanks man I wasnt even going to post this here but Im glad I did now
Peace

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-23-2007, 11:10 AM
Spark minds in these dark times
Mark my rhymes
In permanent ink or on clear wax
Immortalizing the skillz of dominent raps
Turntables quickly replacing the axe
How many pricks are there fakin jax?
Stenciled or re-tracing their acts
Penalizers shall be knee-capped
Half-steppin the boombap
With artificial raps-
Over hand-claps n fingersnaps
Cracker-jack weak tracks
Smashed not broken in halves
No need to even blast
Pissed yourself, sobering fast
Stinking so bad no deodarant mask...
That stench/ catch that shit like Johnny Bench
Played your wench Dame Judy Dench
Brits that layed in the trench
Still got sprayed with the French
Broken faces, hope is baseless
Trust is ignorant, history erases-
Faceless foot soldiers that die in vein
Nobody knows like when we cry in the rain
Unfortunately I sigh again, as it all repeats itself
Silent majority, while a few obese with wealth
Fat fuckin vultures still feed off our corpses
Blood soaking in the earth, lets just hope she absorbs it
So our kids can move forward on this morbid planet
Change our minds before our orbits damned with
The diabolical madness of these illogical bastards
Tricknology mastered- kids learning backwords (no).

OTB
05-23-2007, 01:25 PM
nice darts kwu. REAL nice.

peace-

OTB - live and uncut

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-23-2007, 02:35 PM
nice darts kwu. REAL nice.

peace-

OTB - live and uncut

thank you OTB Respect man

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-27-2007, 11:30 AM
check this out I finished the other piece I was writing, any love is appreciated
.Peace
Woke up to find you still next to me
Closest I feel to exstacy is your breath on me
My stress still testing me; but as your caressing me
I feel it less. Im blessed to be in your presence
You balance out all the tension its a blessing
Dressing for work, its like I cherish each moment and second
Fast forward to the present what have we forgotten?
Could take a lesson from when our love was fresh now seems rotten
Arguing like its a routine blaming each other for everything
Making-up only to repeat the whole thing whats happening to our dream?
Tell me Im still asleep and havent gone so deep
You cant believe its me Im acting like such a creep
Used to kiss your feet, now Im stepping on your toes
Oh lord why do I destroy everything thats close
Learning to let the little things slide; fuck my pride
Cause arguing like siblings we wont survive

Just a foolish drunk,
dont deserve you my love
Such a blessing truly sent from up above
How did we get here?
- now Im tasting my tears
Facing my fears,
getting past a real nightmare
Cant believe that your still right here
Its real what we have thats why people get jealous
See the love that we share that feeling is zealousness
Im naturally rebellious but I must be gentle with you
Keep the devil in my mental no point in hurting you
I got to control my anger and its going to be hard
But its worth it your my purpose, my heart
The light that I follow
alone Im hollow
An empty vessel its true,
still Im guzzling booze
Fumbling too, trying to destroy myself slow I know
Im cursed with the drink,the poison stunts our growth
To you I scribe this Oath, I must be stronger for us
Before theres no longer an us cause your the only soul I can trust
In this wicked world of winos and sluts thats corrupt
Before I give up Ill pick myself up one last time
Design this gift in the form of a simple rhyme
Cause I owe it to you I wont blow this oppuntinity
On some bullshit alcohol that is lunacy
Im a fool for you even drool for you
But I was cruel to you, broke the rules thats true
Just hope you can see in my eyes or hear in this verse
Im not my father so fuck him Im breaking the curse

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-30-2007, 10:23 AM
Peace
thank you to everyone reading this
"bury my heart at central park"

brains too sharp
When we craft these darts
pierce thieves hearts
retards wont react, my actions true
Like a Lakota Sioux
The Most Dangerous Game
Dont test my aim
Im hillarious, fools delirious
still like a child, curious
My mental wild, furious
Pure Paddy
Youre like my caddy
Gladly carrying my bags
Poor humble man, Wearing rags
DJ drags the fucking needle, scratchin
Peace to all my enemies laughin
Youve created a madman
I know Im the same as an Afghan
Take your catscans
Still never know what Im thinking
But Ill tell you what Im drinking
Pint-a-Guinness thanks
Peace, love and happiness
Created your planet
will your nuclear power damn it?
No amnesty for the wicked
Burn in hell like a wick kid
Sick with this rhyme and flow
my mind glow and its times that you know

UNCLE RUCKUS
05-30-2007, 04:50 PM
bumpedy bump bump bumpedy bump

UNCLE RUCKUS
06-01-2007, 08:51 PM
From a New Rome
With a putrid dome
Spit dogshit into rusted chrome
Will til my dusted people come home
Hard for u lames to exist
Scratch names off my list Like Beatrice
watching Sean of the Dead
red rooting for the zombie heads
Strapped with time bombs
Calmly scribed this tween palm trees
Diabolically
Who gave us disease?
Kept us in the dark for ages
MY mind unlocks cages
At Peace like Assata
The Godess,
Your disturbed by my oddness?
At least I am honest
And at most a deadly threat
Scheming? You sweat the redd?
Demons will bleed fire from the head

UNCLE RUCKUS
06-09-2007, 12:09 PM
bumpedy bumpedy bump bump

OTB
06-09-2007, 03:20 PM
first 6 linez of that new rome dart are pretty much impeccable-
whole dart iz mad dope, but the first 6 linez are str8 up top notch sunn!

OTB - live and uncut

UNCLE RUCKUS
06-09-2007, 09:12 PM
first 6 linez of that new rome dart are pretty much impeccable-
whole dart iz mad dope, but the first 6 linez are str8 up top notch sunn!

OTB - live and uncut

yeah hell yeah Peace for helping me edit peace

UNCLE RUCKUS
06-27-2008, 08:25 PM
The backdrop a bodega and a sex shop
A black Cadillac stopped by some vexxed cops
What happened next makes my breath stop
Images we watched from a desktop
As a young man was ripped from his whip
One pig flipped was on a power trip
he held the nightstick with a tight grip
Proceded to beat the man lifeless
Lord, how does shit get like this?
Christ its all too familiar
This misconduct, the pigs corrupt, systems a failure
NYPD hated like Katrinas victims hate FEMA
People chant, "Free Mumia" but forget Abner Luima
NYPD are racist rapists created Larry Davis
These fucking sadists even beat Miles Davis
Outrageous! C-Cipher-Punks always walk
The streets the real CopWatch in New York
Of course we watch like hawks
As bodies outlined in chalk
In reality, most too freightened too talk
Of the brutality dont know the legality
So another unkown fatality
Fuck an analogy no justice, no liberty
Just turn on yr TV and see in New York City
41 shots turn to 50 turn to 50

UNCLE RUCKUS
12-07-2008, 02:11 PM
Relievin stress thru sex
and fresh words I sketch
Verbal architects on deck
Ill dialect my skillz I perfect
United Soul Alliance got it down to a science
(We're) Rhyme giants
Spittin organized defiance
Slangs iller/Bang like a deranged Killer
Or trained guerilla/No vein-filler
Swallow this dope like painkillers
A shame in this game
(these) lames spit the same filler
Pissin quarts of Dewars in city sewers
Fakes get skewered when they taste the pure
The magnificent indifferent to weak competition
The eloquent heaven-sent will carry-on tradition
Throwin darts for the love of the art
Start to feel the passion
(You) know its from the heart
Yo fuck the eye in the sky
Why they got spy?
Got cameras on coners
The beast is always on us
They're trackin our movements
Man what a nuisance!
Freedoms we're losing
When we choose to be snoozin
But you're in the club boozing
Tryin to drink thru confusion
Bein watched non-stop
By cyclops got stopped 5 cops
Driving to IHOP
Popped in yr high-tops
Bleeding thru yr cheap kneesocks
And those red n green Reebox
Mad jaws dropped
The whole street shocked!