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Liquid Lines
03-06-2007, 12:48 PM
Best behave cause I cut closer than Gillette blades,
Tech sprays MC's stay laid out for days,
Lead comes in waves, shave a few pounds,
From rounds and rounds who got the crown
But Iím sitting in the throne, its known I've shown
Iím here to hone the skills that'll kill + drop, cream of the crop,
Top of the stack react wit a gat, shatter backs,
Crack skulls to resolve what I've been told,
Hold chrome when away from home snap bones,
Alone I rise to the top like a glock bullet,
Pull best use cause I see through it,
Like transparent Air Forces, lyrical contortionist,
Abortionist of careers steer well clear if you hear,
The bass or my boots shoot and loot up the place,
Canít keep pace wit the race escape wit sum face,
Lace up my Tims and go to war, make sure Iím adored,
All over the land even if u donít understand my slang,
Hang u wit ur mic, entice you to battle slaughter u like cattle,
Rattle ur thoughts, short wit ur rhymes mine,
Leave u wit a blank mind, eclipsed and outshined
Resigned to defeat cause itís the return of Liquid Lines to a beat.

Sun Supreme
03-09-2007, 06:36 PM
Nigga that shit was FIYA. Im not a fan of the cliche shootem up shit because of shit like this. I don't mind the gun talk and shit as long as its impressive and the lines aren't trite material.


Hold chrome when away from home snap bones,
Alone I rise to the top like a glock bullet,
Pull best use cause I see through it,
Like transparent Air Forces, lyrical contortionist,
Abortionist of careers steer well clear if you hear,
The bass or my boots shoot and loot up the place,
Can’t keep pace wit the race escape wit sum face,
Lace up my Tims and go to war, make sure I’m adored

Those are some of the hottest lines i've read on this shit
ENCORE!!!! YES I WANT MORE!!!!!! 9/10

Liquid Lines
03-19-2007, 12:34 PM
Download my shit trying to stop me gettin rich choke ya bitch wit my dick,
Itch in the back of my throat opened my mouth and this I whole verse I wrote,
Youíre on a slippery slope I got the skills 2 kill Iím Ill but Iím keepin it real,
Feel the thrill of reading real rhymes liquid lines stayin authentic,
Say Iím the best and I meant it cant write so you rent shit,
Us rollin wit a bent clique no 4giveness though u repented,
Demented raps leave u strapped wit no cash my stacks neva endin,
Stop pretending thereís no contending sending MCís 2 graves,
Slaves 2 the job for low pay hope2 1 day break away,
Stay razor sharp gritty street tails not tailored for the charts,
Must be in the ocean cause im surrounded by sharks,
Sending deadly darts straight 4 ya heart,
Embark on a journey leavin mcs in infirmaries return of the,
Diabolical but died and forgot it all, not the quick buck in4 the long haul,
Open ya mouth and ya brain stalls, gimme da mic and the nite I rule,
RUN D.M.C then oversized Ts were cool, fallen sofar therese no rescue,
Who knew at the end of ya bars it was u, even simple words leave u confused,
Loose track of time when writin rhymes,
Puttin on paper the scriptures in my mind,
Communicate the pictures that I find...

Sun Supreme
03-21-2007, 12:56 PM
Dammit man!!!!!! you are a beast. Prolly my first favorite mc on this site. this one wasn't as stellar as the first but it is most definantly nice. 8/10

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
03-23-2007, 11:19 AM
Hang u wit ur mic, entice you to battle slaughter u like cattle,
Rattle ur thoughts, short wit ur rhymes mine,
Leave u wit a blank mind, eclipsed and outshined
Resigned to defeat cause it’s the return of Liquid Lines to a beat.

DOG UR A MONSTER SON KEEP KILLIN' E'M HERE MY FAVORITE BARS

Liquid Lines
03-26-2007, 03:32 AM
Gifted my words leave u lifted amount of verbs that Iíve shifted,
U contradictive doesnít have2 be admitted every1 knows Iím addictive,
Conflictive wit ya thoughts Iíve taught more than can be bought,
Acts of a desperate man call it ya last resort,
Nowhere to go ya lies have been caught, U been left short on intelligence,
No1 listen ur words irrelevant, development of my flow,
Will dispose of any mcís who got issues to resolve,
Cause speakers to explode melt any mic that i hold,
Sets wrecked they already know whoís involved,
Controls been lost boss of the game, tame raps bow ya head in shame,
Would u accept death for the fame just so nobodies remember ya name,
Canít change me hip-hop coursing thru my veins,
Violent outbursts show some restrain,
Refrain from mcíing if ur that bad, no fad hip-hop a lifestyle,
All the while ur survival relies on revival of lost styles,
Years and miles have passed,
Honing my craft only da real will last,
Headin for a crash like bein in da ocean wit no raft,
Fucked lookin down the shaft of an Eagle,
Super evil illegal retrieval of cerebral,
Upheaval of thoughts brought in front of d court in shackles,
End of d battle can hear the death rattle,
Tall tales hear the death bell, tell all hell approaches,
Cockroaches and dirt, words hurt put u in a Hurst but I heard worse,
Leave this verse how I started the first by warning yall that Iím an expert.

Sun Supreme
03-30-2007, 05:22 PM
Acts of a desperate man call it ya last resort,
Nowhere to go ya lies have been caught, U been left short on intelligence,
No1 listen ur words irrelevant, development of my flow,
Will dispose of any mc’s who got issues to resolve,
Cause speakers to explode melt any mic that i hold,
Sets wrecked they already know who’s involved,
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I love these bars. My nigga, you are the hottest nigga on this site (besides me ;)) that one Ima give an 8 as well. PEACE!!!!

Liquid Lines
04-10-2007, 12:51 PM
Sticks and stones break bones but I do more with my microphone,
Beat you black blue and indigo; create something new not another clone,
Got it locked crown, sceptre and throne,
Blown outta proportion call it extortion, keeping it till thereís sum MCs to talk on,
Walk on by its not just forked tongues that lie,
Rely on others means u'll neva discover whatís in front of ur eyes but undercover,
Smothers all others cause Iím an MC crusher just a hip hop lover,
But who decides whoís top whoís in trouble whoís not,
Lost of words leave u in double knots, tied up wit shock take ur best shot,
Knock of a square block not watched times over like meltin clocks,
Hip-hop masterpiece futures bleak,
Spotlights for teeth cause I bring the light when I speak,
Neva ending winning streak treat it like threes no peak,
I walk thru the streets intellect leaks,
When I hear the beat attack indiscrete, careful who I meet colder than concrete,
Acting like a ghost u's a fool in a sheet, devour the weak like fresh meat,
Treat me with care light the flares stand and stare,
Flows to spare, jewels to spare fools I tear in half,
Slash the task exact revenge,
Then I pen what couldnít be said by a thousand men
Extend the mind bend contrasend those who pretend
Defend friends the ends always on the horizon
Devising ways to surprise them no finalising
Finding new rhyme schemes time seems to fly,
These lines are your dreams no lie.

Liquid Lines
04-23-2007, 03:40 AM
Thanks for the comments Sun and Sheepish.

But whats up wit that? 126 views and only 2 people comment?

Liquid Lines
04-24-2007, 12:22 PM
Spit rhymes like an automatic bars tight like woven fabric,
Tragic consequences leave you like a skinned rabbit no hats no magic,
Wont have this so you oppose this like thereís no risk,
These lines couldnít be parted by Moses,
He knows this divine as holy shit, no trick depict or write 4 conflict,
Omit the fact that shit was wack waste of wax,
Like mental laxative all this came out real quick,
Ridiculous with fake rhymes and fake ice,
New name biscuit cus u gone be baked twice,
The type to take ya life 4 spite not quite but best not push a man u only met 2nite,
Fright excites recite wit delite the words that I write,
Height at being at the top of the game, vast lyrical range,
U's a strange strain on society youíve been informed reliably no1 can retire me,
Can hire me as a ghost but the rhymes will boast they been written by the most,
Ferocious atrocious lyrical beating when meetin any mc with a fleetin consideration,
Or deliberation Iím rising faster than inflation,
Verbal elastration racin2 victory he sees me as a threat,
Doesnít know how to proceed or what move to make next,
Slow paced human game of chess test of skills rhymes stainless steel,
Paint doesnít peel lines donít age wont fade from centre stage,
Enrage a dragon bring more heat than u can imagine,
Not havin it ridin into the west not disappearing into the sunset,
Outa context Iím not the lone ranger, what do u expect when i attract strangers,
Complainers need2 shut they mouth bout of shadowboxing,
Locking down with padlocks and platinum chains,
No showers rain comes in torrential downpours,
What you hanging around for Iím gone.

Liquid Lines
05-09-2007, 07:26 AM
Just freestyled this in the finish with the word thread but I like it so much for a freestyle I'm putting it here:

My vactation turned into an invasion
racin to leave my mark on any spot thats vacant,
under the constallations I was spacin,
sizin up the wall for my master makin,
peice that all will have a fascination,
wit any1 passing or rushing late and,
they have with my piece a brief infatuation.

Liquid Lines
05-11-2007, 03:38 AM
You as hot as matches I'm more like the sun you can't match this,
Blowin up like nuclear reactors,
Showin up these fake actors shake rappers 2 the core,
My repator wit the mic is unbelievable inconceivable how u still breath at all,
All hear the crackle of ur fat so hot i burn with my raps,
Attack with no gats match hollowtips with the shit I spit,
A requisite of this temple to be strong in the mental,
Essential cus I'm a beat terrorist,
Inconspicuous as Everest, forever sick no cure for this,
Risk like the lottery ur numbers up thunder struck fucked up on the nite,
Under the spotlite I handle the mic like a ninth dan black belt,
So deadly I make u attack urself leave welts,
tongues like a leather belt beyond help have ur name spelt wit RIP,
Every MC know who I be so leave this cipher,
Before I ignite ya witout petrol and lighters,
I'm a writer of every sort, report on the sport lead to it bein bought,
My thoughts turn ink into art knock ya out the park,
Iím spittin bars of the chart,
Afta dark u best stay in I'm slayin` any who playin`,
I fade in and lay pens to rest, I must confess to gettin stressed,
by peeps tryin 2 make my supremacy a contest in arrest ur heart freezes,
Mouth teases deceives with words not ur own,
Shown ur a ventriloquist men are optimists,
Ten shots to miss and u took em all, knowledge like a book stall,
An expert knows the rite tools and how to use them,
As we come to the end Iíma lend u some advice,
Keep ya rhymes right and donít drop em less they tight.

Liquid Lines
08-04-2007, 01:17 PM
Don’t mean to gloat but I got a mic in my coat,
Which I tote sharp darts,
With holltips that rip flesh from ya bone,
I postpone the post-mortem,
Life shorten cus they forget what I taught em,
Exercise caution when u confront me u best be able,
I'd rather staple my hand to a table than red ur gangsta fables,
No labels hanging, banging beats,
Speak the truth but its no gospel.
You defeating me that’s impossible,
May slow me down but I’m unstoppable
Like Juggernaught but I'm not comical,
Detail anatomical got skills so I’m abominable,
Sink deep in your abdominal slice 2 the top of yall.
To tap it all I be the spark 4 the brain electricity,
Specifically skilled explicitly drill pictures in ur head form my 3rd eye,
Nerves neva lie ur inert its no surprise,
You can’t deny you despise my wide vocabulary,
Ur no adversary that requires talent,
Its apparent u don’t have any many have tried,
Lyrical homicide reply the lines that reside,
In my mind I contrive genocide,
Against MC's who can’t deny they lack the skill 2 survive.

Liquid Lines
08-29-2007, 06:58 AM
Follow Liquid Lines as I intertwine verses wit sublime,
Craftin I'm draftin the beset rhymes so quit asking,
Outlasting all who acting tracking any competition,
It's a given any MC's who are under my jurisdiction
need 2 consult a mortician,
Combating my spitting emissions is a dangerous expedition,
Bars leave you have visions got your mind under submission,
MC's wishing not to raise suspicion wit they rendition,
But don’t need no repetition I'm giving u ur mental nutrition,
Not making bars crafting ammunition,
Like a dietician shaving pounds of these MC’s who keep bitching,
Bout to be a confliction of interests as I inspect,
And check what steps to me but success will not be found,
Profound development with Liquids eloquent command of linguistics,
Check the ballistics minds evicted from images depicted,
Permitted to spit it afflicted and addicted,
Committed to the hip hop till my souls shifted.