PDA

View Full Version : Mr_Montana's Cipher


Mr_Montana
03-10-2007, 07:22 PM
Ayo, It's Time For "The Jump Off, I Bask In The "Triumph"//
"Live From New York", Get Your Ass In The Line Up//
"Tell 'Em I'm Here", Cuz They Wont Know "After The Smoke Clear"//
The God Sho, I'm The Nigga Thats "Whoa"//
So, Yo, Mothafuck Treason, It's "Duck Seazon"//
I'll Leave A Duck Wheezin In My "Gravel Pit"//
Leave His Naval Hit//
Then Place Him In The "Pit Of Snakes" And Snatch Away His "Cakes"//
All That Garbage Shit, "Whats Goin On"? "Whut Part Of The Game?"//
Fuck The "Bling, Bling", Fuck The Fame//
Nigga, "Ante Up", "Click Click", Sho Is "Baller Blockin"//
"I Aint No Joke", Lyrical 9's Cockin//
Your "Life Bid" Stoppin//
"Bring Da Ruckus", Ya Punk Mothafuckas//
You Wont Never Snatch The Mic From My Clutches//
Nigga, You Better "Wake Up", I "Keep It Thoro" Straight Up//
I'ma "Shining Star", "Dem Want War", "Winter War"//
Ya Niggas "Bizarre", I Keep It "Raw"//
And I'm "Mighty Healthy", Ya Claim Wealthy//
Well, Let's "Rumble", "100 Rounds" Leave You "Shell Shock"//
"Protect Ya Neck", My Rhymes Hell Hot//
I Speak "Slang Editiorial", So Fuck The "Country Grammer"//
My "Dart Throwing" Is An "Incredible" "Lutunza" Bammer//
You Spit And I'll Spit "Right Back At You"//
These "Young Godz" Lyrically Pipe Clap You//
So Dont "Bounce With Me"//
Your "Life Liquid", I'll Leave An Ounce Fifty//
On The Ground And Watch You "Die Slow" For Steppin To Fly Sho//
I'll Get On The Mic, "Breaker, Breaker" And Have My Crew Shake Ya, Shake Ya//
"Crash Your Crew", Blast Ya Crew, Blast At You//
Shut It Up, "Get It Up" "Move Somethin" Let It Up//
Get Off My Property, I Got An Ill "Prophecy"//
"Bang, Bang" "Bang It In Ya Whip"//
I'm Performin "The Abduction" Hangin Ya Shit//
I'm Foldin A Clown, Throwin Em Down//
Much Love To Big L Up In Heaven. Son, I'm "Holdin It Down"//
You Know Clap Lace Clowns And Put Em "Face Down"//
I "Shut Em Down", I Dont Fuck Around//
I Knuck Em Sound//
My Crew Of "Supa Ninjaz" Are Ready For "Mortal Kombat"//
Cherry Heads, We "Size Em Up" On A Vietnam Track//
"Fuck What You Think", It's My "Daily Routine" To Bomb Rap//
With "Hip Hop Fury" To "Bust A Slug" Of A "Cold Blooded" Theory//
"Bop Your Head" While I "Walk The Dogs" "4 Sho Sho" "Swinging Swords"//
"Pump Your Fist", But Ya Barely Hangin On Stringin Cords//
My "Cobra Clutch" Make Chicken Neck MC's "Run"//
You Better "Calm Down" And "Follow Instructions" When Fuckin With Shogun//
It's "The Ultimate High", I'm "Cold As Ice"//
I'll Fold Ya Nice, I'm The One Who Stole Ya Mics//
Made You My "Victim" From "High Explosives" Of Over Dosage//
I Diagnose This Rhyme With Hypenosis//
I "Milk The Cow" In Hip Hop//
"Straight Spittin" Til Your Blood Drip Drop//
Cuz "What You See Is What You Get"//
My Verse Lacin Ya Set//
I'm Spittin Darts In "Ice Water, My Trigger Freeze//
Ya Want "The Shoot Out" With My "Bad Boyz", "Nigga Please"//
We Practice "Shdowboxin" Then Beat The Meat Out Of An Oxen//
It' "Assassanation Day" With My Poison Toxin//
10 Ride The Lead, I'm "Inside Your Head"//
With "Chamber Danger", Lyrical Head Banger Anger//
I'm Robbin Your "C.R.E.A.M" So You Better "Spread Love"//
"Wanna Be Thugs", "We Aint Friends", Nigga, You Bugged//
"Watch Who You Beef Wit" Without Heat Kid//
On Bitch Niggas I "Slam" With "The Plan"//
"Everybody Hates Me" "Whateva Man"//
"Forgetaboutdid", You Better Than Me, I Doubt It//
"Between Me And You" I'm Colder, Mothafucka "It's Over"//

I'm New To This Site So Just Thought I Post This Shit Righty Quick...Uppin For Some Feed

MX1
03-10-2007, 11:53 PM
good shit

peace and 1luv

Bigot Hitman
03-11-2007, 10:20 AM
8/10

Keep your creativity high, this musta took a while to write...

You had a pretty even flow throughout this verse, an u incorpated sum smooth goin multies. Good shit.

White_Mouse
03-11-2007, 10:30 AM
nice creaitvity throughout the piece...i just wish you used more multiple syllable rhymes...their were some but not really thoughout the whole thing...but that's just a matter of preference it makes it more fun to read...other than that it's nice...how old are you?

Mr_Montana
03-11-2007, 10:58 AM
thanks for the feed ya'll....i'm 16, been rappin since i was 6 or 7, and makin beats since i was about 8

Mr_Montana
03-12-2007, 11:52 AM
uppin for more feed, i'ma drop something later tonight if i'm on called The Shogun's Return

Mr_Montana
03-13-2007, 09:34 AM
this is a collab i did with my girl, uppin for feed...


(Chorus)
Don't want nobody else but you
All them other niggas don't compare to you
You'd think by now I'd be over you
But a bitch just can't stop thinkin' of you
There's been some things I wanted to say
For a long time, I'm lettin' it out today
Ya sincerity I really appreciate
And I love them full lips on ya face

(Tash)
Was the first nigga I opened up to emotionally
Came across a few but my feelings were temporary
At one point thought ya sweet talk was unnecessary
I ain't found a real nigga until you creeped up on me
So gangsta but you never once bragged about it
Turned on by it, come on pa and do something bout it
Cause I'm fiendin' for you boy like some crackhead
You stay on mami brain, I can't get you outta my head
And thats real talk I'm unlike ya average broad
Most these bitches is frauds you don't need them anymore
Got everything you need now it's time to get on board
And put that thing on me like never before
Whats mine is yours, whats yours is mine
I'm not impressed with material just give me your time
And I'll be satisfied tell me can you deliver that
I'm all about pleasin' you daddy you know I got yo back

(Chorus)
Don't want nobody else but you
All them other niggas don't compare to you
You'd think by now I'd be over you
But a bitch just can't stop thinkin' of you
There's been some things I wanted to say
For a long time, I'm lettin' it out today
Ya sincerity I really appreciate
And I love them full lips on ya face

(Clap)
Yo, I'm With You Forever Like Guidlines That Follow Through//
Heart, Mind and Soul, Bonafide Shines, Acknowledge You//
This Wasn't Written, It Was Meant To Be, Blessed By God//
You Was Sent To Me, Quest For Rods//
Cupids Arrow Hitting Direct//
Humming Sparrows Sitting By Sets//
Singing Carols, Spitting The Best//
Cuz I Sincerly Hope To Join You In Holy Matrimony//
Love Your Realness, Your Never Acting Phony//
Subtract The Stony//
Cuz We Always Stay Moving, Never Immoblilized//
Whistle Lines//
Stay Forever With Noble Eyes, Crystal Shine//
Even Being Far Away, I Still Keep You Close, Envision Your Sight//
Bless You With Wisdom Of Life//
And Always See Your Prism Of Light//

(Chorus)
Don't want nobody else but you
All them other niggas don't compare to you
You'd think by now I'd be over you
But a bitch just can't stop thinkin' of you
There's been some things I wanted to say
For a long time, I'm lettin' it out today
Ya sincerity I really appreciate
And I love them full lips on ya face


"The Shogun's Return" coming very soon...

murkoutz
03-13-2007, 11:25 AM
that was kinda dope, your girl got rhymes

Mr_Montana
03-14-2007, 08:05 AM
yeah she didnt want to do it at first but then i put her to it, and she came with that verse, we might do alot more, so look for that

uppin for feed.......

Mr_Montana
03-15-2007, 09:21 AM
(Hook 1)
Your My Love, My Only, I Can't Bare Without You//
Life Is A Torment Living Here Without You//
But I Know Your Still Watching, Because Your Spirits Alive//
And I'm Gon Keep You Visual Because My Lyric Will Strive//
Everything About You I Miss, Your Visual Presence//
That Basic Attraction Towards Your Physical Essence//

(Verse 1)
I Remember When We Met, You Were Already Paired//
So We Stood Friends, Just To Get Ahead Od Stair//
You Was Being Crabbed By That Lieing Cheater Who Said He Cared//
But I Was Always There With My Shoulder To Rest//
Waiting For That Time For Me And You To Hold It The Best//
Then It Sparked And We Floated As Blessed//
A Relationship That Must Have Been Giving By Gods Power//
Cuz Me And You Attracted Without A Hard Shower//
Pure Satisfaction Of Voices//
Significant Attraction With Choices//
Holy Matrimony Was The Next Step, Building Our Cipher//
Quest For Pure Reality, Feeling It Hyper//
And My Vows Were The Essence Of True Love//
Your Visual Existance, Your Presence, A Blue Dove//
Now A Pure Angel Of Heaven Because You Were Takin From Me//
Lost Your Life From Croos Gun Fire, Shaken By 3//
Popped By Heathens//
I Held You Tight Trying To Stop The Bleeding//
But All My Praying Couldnt Even Unlock My Reading//
Because You Died In My Arms//
Felt Passionate Emotion And For Hours Just Cried In The Storm//
And Still To This Day The Tears Drop On My Cheek Side In The Morn'//

(Hook 2)
I Love You And I Need You, See Your Face In Heaven//
Just Guide Me Through This Life On The Pace Of Seven//
Standing By My Side Still Even Though Your With God Up Above//

(Verse 2)
Why Did You Have To Fall Victim And Loose Your Breath//
I Cant Even See Straight Because My Veins Are Wet//
You Were My First Love, My Life, All Of The Above//
Ever Since The Beginning I Was Falling With Love//
Now It's Even Deeper, But I Cant Even Touch Your Flesh//
And Your Daughter Misses You, She's Crushed In Mess//
Your Coin Blew To Seven//
I Just Cant Wait To Join You In Heaven//
I Need To Transform My Dream Into Reality//
I Love and Miss You, My Queen And Equality//

uppin for feed...

"The Shogun's Return" coming very soon