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martyr
07-20-2005, 04:01 PM
women collecting garments, purpose is impressing the stars with
vests with scarves and purses that connect to arms, lets regaurd
they get this far with earthing, step or are from birth and friends with pars
to get in bars it's shirtless; purchase getting charged with debit version credit cards

protectors get in cars with Becks(c) and burning 'cess cigars
test the karma then they're friends are persons dead to scars
neglect to carve a will in walls of stone, and cough up dough
left to far bewildered thoughts of growth she bought some blow

and so she built a wall in hope, of killing all her woes
distilling loss that rose, from the skills to altar hills
and water falls and pillars off in Rome, with some pills she calls her own
from her sill she saw shalom, she spills and falls to home

and helps Satan by hanging with the shallowest kind living
so self hatred's emblazoned, in the shadows of dying kittens
asshole faggots trying sit-ins, dabble in science fiction
my unfathomable rhymes're written in tablets of time existence

the dragonfly is twitching in gravel and grime ditches
rattled with spine rickets, she shattered her mind trying 'cid hits
she has no eye witness, to actualize her final instance
she has the crying sickness and her dads in a violent prison

her mothers in a slick truck, blunted out brothers and big bucks
they're covered in a mink tux, busted out rubbers and sniff stuff
customers drink bub as she uncovered in strip clubs
the govener's dick's sucked, he fucked her with one in her tip cup

Ronin
07-20-2005, 04:57 PM
nice shit bro, havnt seen new shit from u in a minute

the flow as always is on point and the story telling is great, good imagry of the bitchs downfall

remember foxdie? lol

Father N Dangerous
07-20-2005, 05:14 PM
fo sho it was good, hope to see more stay up

JOHNNY_TICAL
07-20-2005, 05:40 PM
Good Shit.. Dog... Gave Me A Head Check And Shit...!! Nice Work...!!


Peace...!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-21-2005, 03:08 PM
women collecting garments, purpose is impressing the stars with
vests with scarves and purses that connect to arms, lets regaurd
they get this far with earthing, step or are from birth and friends with pars
to get in bars it's shirtless; purchase getting charged with debit version credit cards

protectors get in cars with Becks(c) and burning 'cess cigars
test the karma then they're friends are persons dead to scars
neglect to carve a will in walls of stone, and cough up dough
left to far bewildered thoughts of growth she bought some blow

and so she built a wall in hope, of killing all her woes
distilling loss that rose, from the skills to altar hills
and water falls and pillars off in Rome, with some pills she calls her own
from her sill she saw shalom, she spills and falls to home

and helps Satan by hanging with the shallowest kind living
so self hatred's emblazoned, in the shadows of dying kittens
asshole faggots trying sit-ins, dabble in science fiction
my unfathomable rhymes're written in tablets of time existence

the dragonfly is twitching in gravel and grime ditches
rattled with spine rickets, she shattered her mind trying 'cid hits
she has no eye witness, to actualize her final instance
she has the crying sickness and her dads in a violent prison

her mothers in a slick truck, blunted out brothers and big bucks
they're covered in a mink tux, busted out rubbers and sniff stuff
customers drink bub as she uncovered in strip clubs
the govener's dick's sucked, he fucked her with one in her tip cup


Damn Martyr this is some crazy ass story telling here I like the way the multi's just keep coming in succession PEACE!!!

martyr
07-21-2005, 10:32 PM
...thanks yawl, i appreciate it... my favourite part is the middle of the verse about taking pills to alters shit off in Rome.... if yawl want multies, i got a piece for that... it's called, 'nothing happens, who will see' -- ask Psy... i'll drop it one of these days.... again thanks, because i like to inspire lyricists...

002
07-22-2005, 03:40 AM
i like to inspire lyricists...
good job. peace

PsYkOsUs
07-22-2005, 12:52 PM
and helps Satan by hanging with the shallowest kind living
so self hatred's emblazoned, in the shadows of dying kittens
asshole faggots trying sit-ins, dabble in science fiction
my unfathomable rhymes're written in tablets of time existence

the dragonfly is twitching in gravel and grime ditches
rattled with spine rickets, she shattered her mind trying 'cid hits
she has no eye witness, to actualize her final instance
she has the crying sickness and her dads in a violent prison
those passages are priceless... very visual... especially the first two lines, worded beautifully... i don't recall the audio for this one... i'll have to go through what you've sent me again... the flow and content was on point as always, a standard you don't stray from... and no doubt, flow wise: "nothing happens, who will see" is one of your best... you should definitely drop it... if you haven't posted "ghosts in this place" i think you should, that's one of my favorites...

PEACE

PSY

Nexodus the Nth Entity
07-24-2005, 05:13 PM
and helps Satan by hanging with the shallowest kind living
so self hatred's emblazoned, in the shadows of dying kittens
asshole faggots trying sit-ins, dabble in science fiction
my unfathomable rhymes're written in tablets of time existence


the dragonfly is twitching in gravel and grime ditches
rattled with spine rickets, she shattered her mind trying 'cid hits
she has no eye witness, to actualize her final instance
she has the crying sickness and her dads in a violent prison


her mothers in a slick truck, blunted out brothers and big bucks
they're covered in a mink tux, busted out rubbers and sniff stuff
customers drink bub as she uncovered in strip clubs
the govener's dick's sucked, he fucked her with one in her tip cup


story telling and multis at its finest, both terms synonymous with the name Martyr
enough said

u-turn
07-24-2005, 08:12 PM
nice verse

Cappah
07-24-2005, 08:18 PM
Ill what more can I say. Just graphic and meanin somethin very poetic a good style nice work Dog

PsYkOsUs
07-25-2005, 02:15 AM
Uppin'!

martyr
07-25-2005, 09:51 AM
...word, thanks to all.... psy, i havent sent you this one, though the beat is bananas... i just moved all my computer studio shit to the girl's house so i'ma redo this and others there in a calmer atmosphere... i appreciate all the feedback, again, good to see nex... i'll have to get on MSN one of these days to hollar at you cause i got a question about your radio show and my audio... again, thanks to all who replied... peace....

Killer Falcon
07-25-2005, 05:09 PM
good to see you back on here. your flow is crazy, i'm loving your imagery and choice of words. i felt the piece actually got better as i read it, probably because your storytelling is sublime and absorbing. very good work.

what happened with your album? have you done much audio yet?

peace

martyr
07-25-2005, 06:30 PM
...thanks for the props and feedback, i appreciate it much man... yea, i finished my last album... it's on audio... you can peep it on the internet... but i warn you it is wack... i like all of three songs or so on it... i don't like my flow really and i mean i like them all but i'm upset by the way the turned out the first second, and third time minus tracks 3, 7 and 10... so i left it to the past... that album is called 'alphabet of angels' (music under the alias of a supposed savior)... i'm now working on a new album... this is a verse from that album, that is yet untitled and the song it is culled from is called 'i'm nothing'... other songs that will be on the album are:

- i'm nothing
- glare of the moon
- helping me up
- forth all of this harder
- blueprint from atlantis
- party in hotels (commercial)
- take a step (commercial)
- all i have is music
- it isn't a revelation in the slightest
- breaking bread and blessings on a makeshift dinner table
- no world can save me

....probably some of those won't be on it, some new ones probably will... that's the only update i can give as of now winte... again, thank for wondering how the LP was coming along... i appreciate it...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/jesushchrist_music.htm

....that's the link to the site... peep if you will... make cds if you want... if you do give 'em to your friends and have your friends give 'em to their friends and their friends as well... any lyric questions PM me on here and i'll get at you with them promptly on soundclick... peace and again, i appreciate it...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-25-2005, 06:53 PM
Nice I'll spread it around PEACE!!

martyr
07-25-2005, 06:54 PM
...hey word man, ben... do you have audio?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-25-2005, 06:58 PM
Yeah but I have it on this Digital recorder i bought from Radio shack the microphone on it is'nt the best

martyr
07-25-2005, 07:02 PM
...i feel you... download acid from sony's website and then get a cracker from some nerd on this site and grab you the computer mic i got, its not bad, i gotta by a new one i think i've spit in it a few times... they're like $15, and plug in and it's fucking cake dude... i'll get you the link of the mic ... peace....

martyr
07-25-2005, 07:04 PM
http://www.logitech.com/index.cfm/products/details/US/EN,CRID=103,CONTENTID=8556


...that's the one that's $20 and the site now has one for $30, i'ma have to cop that in a minute... just download the beats that you want and spit on em'... its simple...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-26-2005, 12:04 PM
cool thanks martyr!! PEACE