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noel411
03-19-2007, 09:04 PM
Knock the dust off the mic, let the cloud settle,
Verbally at peace with herbal tea from the kettle,
Take a calm sip as my palm grips the metal,
Words start to drop like falling flower petals,
Now I bet youíll probably think this sounds trite,
I meticulously craft everything that I write,
My pen has a moulded grip from holding it tight,
I might write all night if the lightís shining bright,
Finding sight in my mind, Iím inclined to make the most of it,
Grow stronger before Iím no longer the host of it,
Most of it comes through experience and practice,
profuse packs of new jacks clearly canít crack this,
with new tracks to rap, hear me come back with,
Bone on the beat, producing heat like a blacksmith,
I came back this time to rhyme and rep a nation,
These practice lines are final preparation,

Out the stable, unable to stop my momentum,
Held mics in my hands until they both went numb,
Vent some anger through music, soothes quicker than yoga,
Whether on a crucifix nude or wearing a toga,
Iíll forever spit the truth before declaring itís over,
Have you in field with sore knees, tearing at clovers,
Iím aware and know the limits of my comfort zone,
But susceptible to getting lost in the drums of Bone,
Thunder drones in the zone, lightning strikes on the mic,
We roll as one unit, like dykes on a bike,
Fight for your right to partake in heathen practices,
Feed on all breeds of trees and weeds, even cactuses,
Facts just missed with that line, but heíll shine on the next,
Pack a spliff with this line and get high on my text,
I returned for the yearning and burning desire,
And concern what Iíd learned might be burned in the fire.

Sun Supreme
03-20-2007, 05:52 PM
That was cool man. Actually it is one of my favs since i joined this site. You hold true to the quote in ya sig cause the line were damn strong. They weren't the most headbangin, knock u out cha seat type lines but they were strong. I understand that cause i write like that i think. Good Shit 8.5/10

J.T.S.
03-21-2007, 09:59 AM
Noel your are dope man, on some real shit!
Fuck who dosen't peep this youv'e got some simple flows
but the way you put em' together sounds complex.
Your a talented dude man! This was dope!

noel411
03-21-2007, 05:40 PM
Thanks for the comments, Sun and James. Like the title of the thread suggests, these are "just some flows". I wasn't going for much here. Just putting down some bars to a beat after quite a long break. But yeah, even if I'm just penning something plain and simple, I'm not gonna bother doing it unless I'm putting some thought into my lines.

NASTY NAK
03-21-2007, 07:48 PM
god that story sounded like a day in the life of elton john!!!!!!!

lol

but real talk...wats gud daddy, u aint been inspired to write i c yo lmao

pEaCWe

Lincoln Hawk
03-21-2007, 08:08 PM
i mean the shit was solid but the joint came off so simple it felt more like a poem than a rhyme...not a bad thing tho...you straight to the point with it and i cant argue with that...peace.

cd
03-22-2007, 05:04 AM
shit was ill. By ill I mean completely shitty and void of anything respectable or redeemable. Peace.

noel411
03-22-2007, 05:36 AM
god that story sounded like a day in the life of elton john!!!!!!!

lol

but real talk...wats gud daddy, u aint been inspired to write i c yo lmao

pEaCWe
Yeah G, I haven't been inspired to write about anything in particular since I did that Bundy shit. Until it hits again I guess I'll just keep scripting these loose flows.

Btw, "The Bug Meets The Thug"??? What the fuck? Since when are you a thug, you fucken little squeezer of hairy arse cheeks?

Cheers for the comments Lincoln and cd.

Locust
03-22-2007, 11:38 AM
god that story sounded like a day in the life of elton john!!!!!!!

lol

but real talk...wats gud daddy, u aint been inspired to write i c yo lmao

pEaCWe

YO nak wtf is up with your sig man the bug meets the thug?? haha faggit
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