View Full Version : The Butcher presents "Dark Castle"

03-20-2007, 07:44 AM
Check out the song, got the beat from a madlib cd of instrumentals.


drop some feedback ya'll, peace


03-20-2007, 08:20 AM
i Like this ay sounds fucking crazy,hectic mix of lyrics to the beat..this is a track id bump in my ipod

03-20-2007, 05:55 PM
yo thanks for the listen, im glad u feelen it, peace man

03-21-2007, 01:18 AM
This deserves more feedback,hit him up

03-21-2007, 10:23 AM
hell yea,id bump this in the whipe,this is creative ass beat,whats good about this track is the fact that your voice coincides nicely with the beat..good shit

03-21-2007, 10:48 AM
second track i hear from you and second banger

03-21-2007, 11:08 AM
UR flow has stepped up miles since a few months back. BIG UP.

"you wanna battle me? I say who..." - that shit was slick right there.

Peace B

03-21-2007, 12:16 PM
pretty cool!

03-21-2007, 12:21 PM
your voice cooperates nicely with the beat...nice flow and decent lyrics...but sometimes i find myself i little empty like i need to hear your delivery come out stronger...but i'm working on delivery too so i shouldn't bictch about it lol!

03-22-2007, 06:22 AM
yo whats good out there, thanks for droppen all this feedback. Its good to know that people are feelen the song, ya the beat did flow perfectly with the song, there are defenently still things i can improve on but it looks like i officially got a banger, thanks for the words, peace

03-23-2007, 05:53 AM
anymore feedback out there?

03-23-2007, 09:06 AM
Good track man. Really nice flow...on beat, good voice...dope.

03-26-2007, 07:28 PM
yo shitao, sorry it took so long for me to get back but thanks for the comments, lets get some more view on this, trying to reach 100 and ill be satisfied, holla back, peace

03-27-2007, 03:45 PM
are you kiddin me Sun??? Wow, you commin up hollywood! alot of improvement just in the past 3-4 months. The delivery was on point in this one, keep workin on editing and mixing the vocals on the upcommin trax. This shit iz nice.

03-28-2007, 08:02 PM
yo siris thanks for giving me that positive feedback, its a good feeling for me to see all these guys that are considered some of the best rappers on here to be giving me such good feedback, it is very flattering and makes me wana keep droppen hits, peace and thanks