View Full Version : the good, the bad, the ugly

Its Big Lu baby
03-20-2007, 08:08 PM
this shits a track i wrote for 3 bitches (true stories haha)
so its 3 verses
the first the good
2nd the bad
and 3rd the ugly
tell me what yall think
i still need to fix a lota shit
the hooks gonna be like the cl smooth track "they reminise" like scratched up and shit thats why i end every verse wit reminise over you
(1st verse is the weakest)

concentratin down on the burnin stoge
as i lounge by the pool in my camo robe
the ash builds up in my zone out mode
as i think of you and how we were before
i used to be ya man and you was my girl
my life was betta ma when you were in my world
you kept me warm just being by my side
now i gota see the worm just to feel alive
remember the times we kicked back at ya pad
doin nothin really we'd just lay back and laugh
i used to get bored of boring ass hoes
you was the only bird that kept me on my toes
ya eyes hit me with the caramel surprise
complexion got me mesmorized makin me act uncivalized
but i was unwise now im with out you
the ash flows in the pool im listenin to CL Smooth
As i remenise over you

now number two she would always call me her boo
everyday outa the blue asked me if i stayed true
had a bangin waist line maybe like a 32
you know who ya are ya bad bitch ya this verse is for you
i neva creeped ya your pussy was my only food
but you was eve bitch you the hoe that ate the fruit
always watchin me askin who i was with and what did we do
while you was fucking otha doods and i had no clue
you scandelous bitch im surprised i aint catch shit
cuz the whole neighberhood was frying ya fish
and i always went raw when i ripped
its all good hoe i just flipped the script
cuz now a days it aint hard to find a scandelous bitch
your friend and ya sis i stuck my dick in both of em lips
i guess it runs in the fam and homegirls a skank too
aint nothin new i laugh when i reminise over you

betty betty big bitch big belly
buck teef frizzy hair ya kept ya breath smelly
you were my homegirl always hitin me up on the celly
always had something on ya mind you needed to tell me
i thought you was a dike i treated you like my boys
when you told me you was feelin me i said kill that noise
i gave you dap and when we was around i blew gas
when you put a move on my ass i had a good laugh
you kept tryin to grab and i kept pushin ya back
it happend again and i thought that shit was wack
i told you you was my dawg and nothin more than that
yet you kept tryin you deuce never give up
tellin all ya friends i was feelin you much
ya lyin dumb bird runin ya mouth too much
i drew the line when rumor came around that we fucked
i got my main bitch and she got her crew
left you wit a black eye and a broken rib too
ya fat bitch i always puke when i reminise over you

Lil' Ruger
03-20-2007, 08:48 PM
nice 7/10 not really down with the girlfriends and shit rap scheme but nice nonetheless

Its Big Lu baby
03-20-2007, 10:17 PM
gracias rongz

03-21-2007, 12:04 AM
ayo daddy waz good

u remmeber me duke?

VERNAKULA on yo myspace
least the phins got PORTER, we gonna go title grabbin nex year nawmean?

shits gud yo, keep it classy


Its Big Lu baby
03-21-2007, 02:41 AM
oh shit
wdup sun
yea were gonna have the illest D in the entire league
thanks for tha feedback

03-22-2007, 12:58 AM
You don't know how much i enjoy those spagetti westerns "man with no name", "for a few more dollars","the good, the bad, and the ugly"...

"angel eyes"