View Full Version : travelling thru space

03-26-2007, 10:24 PM
jaws drop in disbelief but also lack of preparation

i never told you how good you look in that shirt
why dont you take it off?

i got something to show you

at 5 am observe to the southwest appears venus

is cold a state of mind as well?
if it is i can heat you from here

your skill is inferior
your style is inferior
i make better mistakes
proper error
when somebody takes my belt i make another one

just sit and watch
some peoples thigh and ass muscles look square and flat

i dont pass judgment but i know the guy who does

sometimes he tells me

when you are dealing with something in the wrong place
you need to erode it and re-build at the same time

call it the other side of decay
the root of decadent is decay
decay is a stage of death
when something is decayed - it is said to be spoiled
a spoiled child is a child what has been killed

me and mine come together
we exist in many forms
we grow in numbers
when the work is done - we rest

every time you hear a genuine laugh - it means we showed up

you cant try to relax
it doesnt work that way

hot springs are naturally occurring

in deep sleep you do things that are difficult to do during wake hours

like recover

03-27-2007, 11:39 PM
you on some shit x!

but that stuff was nice still.

one thing i want to say is that the reader might have difficulties understanding the individual lines, sentences and ideas but only because the understanding is not in the lines you write but the whole writing as a whole. the whole thing has a certain vibe.

it's weird to explain but there is format behind it. the words almost don't even count.


03-27-2007, 11:40 PM
there is more

a lot of shit i dont post here

03-27-2007, 11:41 PM
my restraining mechanism has been ruptured

code red

i watch from afar as anvils drop on enemy head
a chuckle from behind the door
something is up to no good

i know good
and it wont stop until its all good

in previous chapters we found the protagonist next to sisyphus
now he carries globes like atlas and laughs at your sissy fists

and hissy fits
carnivorous - 85% oblivious
stiff neck couldnt tell you how to rhyme or where the rhythm is

the only good news comes as a result of a perspective shift
as in: you need to accept things such as collapses of civilizations as natural processes in order to be able to take a look at the news and say "ahhh thats some good news"

the feeling that causes one to say "fuck it" and then leap

thats the one right there

leap - elbows out - daggers in hand - knees bent - plan on not landing - plan on taking everything with you

plan on pulling all living things out of hell as you tumble

the final plunge can take many forms and varies in duration anywhere from 1 second to 1 eternity

03-27-2007, 11:41 PM
i remember being young and destroying things and not knowing why i did it

just didnt seem right

how to symbolically represent a man

locked in steel shackles not steel - they can only hope to contain

some say impede

they throw rocks to injure that which specializes in healing

side track

they can tap the source - but never cap the source

back at the root the flow is too powerful
'pure untampered or mixed in any form'

a source

i broke my rib and it was for the best

once i start pouring it means overflow is imminent
anything that isnt extreme is only a period of transition

line-up the women and tell them it is time to make babies

the passing of time
the fleetingness of now
the calamity of static
the stability of motion

how many stories do you need to know?

i was him
i was him
i was him
i was X

stop waiting for people to give you directions

heed the signs

take what you conceptualize and see it through to fruition

mistakes are a fuel source

03-27-2007, 11:47 PM
forget about it...

you must have tapped to the other side while writing these...

... ?


a powerful mental stimulus


03-27-2007, 11:50 PM
yes i did

i am still there

being 2 places at once makes life (insert adjective)

03-27-2007, 11:59 PM

03-28-2007, 01:29 AM
more beautiful if thats possible

look at his lines like a zen koan

03-28-2007, 03:21 PM
all this from a guy who isnt conviced about chakras

03-28-2007, 03:22 PM
maybe he likes a different metaphor

03-28-2007, 03:26 PM
I know i just had to re mind him he said that.
Different Metaphore: Chakras = Planets / Chakras = glands

03-28-2007, 03:28 PM
I knew Light House X in a previous life time, so I can pick on him.

03-28-2007, 03:34 PM
I have traveled through space in my mind. And I swear. You can leave your body you know. You dont always need a spaceship.

03-28-2007, 04:36 PM
I know i just had to re mind him he said that.
Different Metaphore: Chakras = Planets / Chakras = glands

this may be true

but it is possible to have balanced chakras without believing in them

i know because i wrote the book


03-28-2007, 04:37 PM
I have traveled through my mind in space. And I swear. You can leave your spaceship you know. You dont always need a body.