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SID
04-02-2007, 02:55 AM
i know we got sum DEEP ones in da wu tang zone
rate dis PEACE

Yo Step up to the home caught focus
Be the ace be the king donít play the jokers

Cuz the jokers cant be played
Echoing a melody swift like switchblades
Switch mental lanes pulsatin blood veins
Stress anger hate shatter like glass panes
Methodical approach gains
Respect and praise
Law life religon creeds contained
Why are the righteous always blamed
globetrotting snakelords picture perfect frame
lyrics cant be deciphered by pinpoint laser rays
flowing I an out of time in a hypersonic phase
were all united by our presence in the cage
natural metamorphis flows stage to stage
supreme calculations in a maze of haze
enter the cemetary with the dust and spade
diggin a tombstone carved bearzys grave
for livin a life embossed engraved
with the law of those who make war an slaves
running sure blazin down the ebony planes
is it all a game or is it still growin pains
brother blood bond blatenly souls maintained

SID
04-02-2007, 11:37 AM
i hope man dosent need to decipher these lines in a WU forum

AcidPhosphate69
04-03-2007, 10:13 AM
Nah, dude...chill with the trying to talk down to cats here. There are plenty of people here who get deep as you would say. It's prolly just your bullshit coming in here with that stupid battle thread calling out people that makes them sorta want to not even reply to this.

Either way, I don't give a fuck. It was a decent verse. Wordplay was kinda good. No multi's and the rhyme scheme was a lil' generic but overall an above average verse. 7/10

SID
04-03-2007, 11:15 AM
iam cool g i dont know what was so bullshit about the battle thread if it affected everyone so bad? what can i say

Mattlocka
04-09-2007, 04:30 PM
ha ha what can you say that some funny method.
good drop

Peace Mattlocka damege oppenents