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NASTY NAK
04-09-2007, 11:27 PM
ill post spitten writtens here

NIKKUH

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noel411
04-09-2007, 11:44 PM
Nasty Nak ain't a classy act,
that bastard's wack now pass the crack,
master Facts will blast this cat,
as fast as blacks run past on tracks.

NASTY NAK
04-09-2007, 11:46 PM
Nasty Nak ain't a classy act,
that bastard's wack now pass the crack,
master Facts will blast this cat,
as fast as blacks run past on tracks.

haha NO-ll!!!

lets have manly sex

noel411
04-09-2007, 11:50 PM
Just say the word homie, just say the word.

NASTY NAK
04-10-2007, 02:06 PM
YOYOYO

Practice my craft with devotion, master of rap and i know this
Savagely snap on the acts of cowardly rats without motion
Without Lockin' a studio booth...
My projects still grew in the truth...
Of logic, still honestly crossin' dots in the field that I choose
And no matter my posistion...I'm supportin' the infantry
Glowin' holdin' the omen, the golden torches of infamy
I live in depths of hell, when I'm leadin' my movement
Treason cleanin the streets spittin' deep demonic fluids

toooooo be cont.

SID
04-10-2007, 03:06 PM
yo.... nasty nak think he savagely snap katz?
ill blast thee back, ravage your crap, with lyrical combat
dont try come back, ill manage to tap in ya mental verb map
lay the rap - trap, melt your false ego, like deep frying german swine fat
all you here is whip crack, i slash your back, an watch the blood splash
as you see your life flash, i rip you up like a cannabilistic wolf pack
i freestyle that and it beat all your nine barz of hideous rap plaque

NASTY NAK
04-10-2007, 04:45 PM
Nasty Nak is one Sexy Rapper, That's
Chilling with me, Sipping His Tea like he Has to Mack
on Bitches with me, we can Pass 'em Crack
They Stickin' to me like a Fanny Pack
My Verses'll Supply 'em Death.
Yo, how come your posts always Turn into a Cypher Thread?
With Too Many People tryna prove they the Baddest
This Crew's Very Lethal like a Group of Assassins

Spoken is too good, so he's the best of this shit
We fuckin' dumb sluts' rears like having sex with big pigs
This fuckin' thread is no good, when I'm trynna write
So we give 'em good lines like we supplyin' the white
My disciples'll fight, till they cope with rights on the mic
They'll try to entice...Even though we stifled they lives
With practice we might go far...until then...
We'll put A spark to their brain like Charger helmets

NASTY NAK
04-10-2007, 09:54 PM
We Spit Flows an Hour Later...
Too Sick Though with Wild Flavor.
Gimme a mic...It's like Givin' a Nympho a Vibrator
Hi, Haters, your Lucks Up! We spit Better Lines
make sure you Recognize (wreck on ice) like skaters who fuck up.
Get Off the Parade, like Disrespectful Queers
put a Spark to your Brain like Electric Chairs.
I'd be Jacking yer Chain...We both know
you Felt the Tracks like Murs and Slug Catching the Train
I'm Too Sicker, You Critters are Too Bitter
You're Cute Figures...You ain't Sick, you Puke Glitter.
Between you and your Hoe...You are Stu-Pidder
I'll be Doing your Hoe...giving her my Huge Finger.
Ain't Gotta Floss, to Rock the Show with Lots of Probable Love
Blow up like we Swallowed some Molotav in our Gut.

We'll Hit You So Hard, You Humans Will Puke Fluids
My Rap Is Substantial, So Consider What You Doin'
My Crew Is The Hardest, See What My Rhymes Proove
We're Sicker Than Lunch-Time Bussed Lines At High-School
Havin' The SICKER FLOW, IS THE OBJECT I WANT
THO I'M QUICKER HOE, I'LL STICK YA FO' A COCK AN A BLUNT

SID
04-11-2007, 11:21 AM
your pretentious purpose disintegrates at the surface
one of three factors you either high, drunk or nervous
you spit dirt grit, dead, dry an worthless
your wits unfit, I send all your lines to the solar furnace
iron crab nip quick, deliever all manner of striking curses
lion stab rips sick, please consider these last stifling verses
it takes two emcees to reach the heat of a winter thermos
but one emcee comes out the thread, like demon infernus, burnless
“sexy rappers” need lessons on their “on time” delivering service
lyrical sternness, so you can transgress your verbal mess in all earnest

NASTY NAK
04-11-2007, 06:53 PM
your pretentious purpose disintegrates at the surface
one of three factors you either high, drunk or nervous
you spit dirt grit, dead, dry an worthless
your wits unfit, I send all your lines to the solar furnace
iron crab nip quick, deliever all manner of striking curses
lion stab rips sick, please consider these last stifling verses
it takes two emcees to reach the heat of a winter thermos
but one emcee comes out the thread, like demon infernus, burnless
“sexy rappers” need lessons on their “on time” delivering service
lyrical sternness, so you can transgress your verbal mess in all earnest

GO AND CHECK THE HOLSTER BITCH, THERE'S A WEAPON IN THERE
I'LL LEAVE YOU LIKE A ROBBED CLOCK WITHOUT A SECOND TO SPARE
YOU QUESTION MY FAM? I'LL ATTACK YOU KID, SLOW BREATHIN'
CUZ YOU LIKE AN ESKIMO'S HOUSE IN WINTER...NO HEATERS!!!
YO' FLOW NEED THIS... BITCH CHECK MY CREW WHEN I SPIT
LIKE A HOOKER THIS'LL END UP WID YOU ON MY DICK (pussy)
YOU FOOLISH AS SHIT...LEAVE YOU DOOMED AS A BITCH
WHEN I PUT THE STRAP BETWEEN YA LEGS AND LEAVE U IN A DITCH

QUIK SHIT

Bigot Hitman
04-11-2007, 07:31 PM
your pretentious purpose disintegrates at the surface
one of three factors you either high, drunk or nervous
you spit dirt grit, dead, dry an worthless
your wits unfit, I send all your lines to the solar furnace
iron crab nip quick, deliever all manner of striking curses
lion stab rips sick, please consider these last stifling verses
it takes two emcees to reach the heat of a winter thermos
but one emcee comes out the thread, like demon infernus, burnless
“sexy rappers” need lessons on their “on time” delivering service
lyrical sternness, so you can transgress your verbal mess in all earnest

u's one lame mufucka

Bigot Hitman
04-11-2007, 08:19 PM
your pretentious purpose disintegrates at the surface
one of three factors you either high, drunk or nervous
you spit dirt grit, dead, dry an worthless
your wits unfit, I send all your lines to the solar furnace
iron crab nip quick, deliever all manner of striking curses
lion stab rips sick, please consider these last stifling verses
it takes two emcees to reach the heat of a winter thermos
but one emcee comes out the thread, like demon infernus, burnless
“sexy rappers” need lessons on their “on time” delivering service
lyrical sternness, so you can transgress your verbal mess in all earnest

Ok katana, its time lock yo fam up in a pair of sahnnas
Then cover the burin skin smell up wit marujuana
I'll "lace" yo weak "material" like a sewin machine
Yo sister's my best "fan", she's straight "blowin" my team
If yo girl said she was a virgin, she lied, i popped the cherry duke
She said i could face fuck her over the hole they burried you
Yo life's been like a innocent convict's, how u caught bad breaks
Ever since u was young, i know u was butt fucked at yo dad's lake
But for real though, yo rhyme schemes is basic, concepts is lame
Yo punches wack and go ignored like......bomb threats in spain
Look u frail kid, keep barkin an get yo tail clipped
Now that i know where u get yo nails did, u can find yo thumb in the mail bin
Come to the hills i'll go in ya pockets like wallets, yo shits fucked
If u come those dimes and quarters bitch....u get "bucked"

SID
04-12-2007, 12:07 PM
You three foolish fish act like withdrawn concubines
fuck each other in wucorp, but ignore each other outside
ill drown you with barz the size of 10 foot lantic tides
you Astound me with Your frantic rhymes, which don’t compare to mine
Originality aint in your mentality, jus cliché emcee lines
Your like a faulty coke machine, you spit loose change, pence and dimes
autistic john does in comatose have a faster reaction time
Offer your *flows to sado-masochist hoes, even they,d decline
Smoking peruvian crack selections at your secret wu tang shrines
Lickin each others ball sacs, an squeezing out the sphillis slime
Your the last homo erectus, not yet evolved to modern mankind

*-blood

NASTY NAK
04-12-2007, 10:08 PM
You three foolish fish act like withdrawn concubines
fuck each other in wucorp, but ignore each other outside
ill drown you with barz the size of 10 foot lantic tides
you Astound me with Your frantic rhymes, which don’t compare to mine
Originality aint in your mentality, jus cliché emcee lines
Your like a faulty coke machine, you spit loose change, pence and dimes
autistic john does in comatose have a faster reaction time
Offer your *flows to sado-masochist hoes, even they,d decline
Smoking peruvian crack selections at your secret wu tang shrines
Lickin each others ball sacs, an squeezing out the sphillis slime
Your the last homo erectus, not yet evolved to modern mankind

*-blood


FAG

SID
04-13-2007, 06:53 AM
"FAG" = (i killed all your shit ryhmes and you aint got nothin else to say)

peace

SID
04-13-2007, 12:53 PM
can you not stop with the sexual imagery? (if you want some relief go dig a hole in the sand or sumthin), the only thing that got sonned is your cliche concepts

peace

SID
04-13-2007, 04:55 PM
man i know you got a "special" bond with this place....and iam sorry to have come and made you feel - uncomfortable, go have fun, meet girls, its part of growing up g


peace

Bigot Hitman
04-14-2007, 01:36 AM
You three foolish fish act like withdrawn concubines
fuck each other in wucorp, but ignore each other outside
^^lame concept, u callin niggas fishes...wtf

ill drown you with barz the size of 10 foot lantic tides
you Astound me with Your frantic rhymes, which don’t compare to mine
^^using all this vocab fucks up your flow an its useless, u can say the same things with less syllables, take your head out the dictionary and just rap what comes to you

Originality aint in your mentality, jus cliché emcee lines
Your like a faulty coke machine, you spit loose change, pence and dimes

Wtf is pence? and how is whoever this weak punch aimed at, "spit loose change"? yo metaphors is weak

autistic john does in comatose have a faster reaction time
Offer your *flows to sado-masochist hoes, even they,d decline
^^
This concept is lame, ur just sayin anonymous retards have a faster reaction time, but to what? then u follow up with another weak metaphor in "flows", an a concept that barely makes sense, an doesn't land cuz the flows off an its weak

Smoking peruvian crack selections at your secret wu tang shrines
Lickin each others ball sacs, an squeezing out the sphillis slime
^^^
There's no such thing as sphillis slime, and its not really a punchline to say somebody can smoke peruvian crack in their own shrines, so that concept is lame.

Your the last homo erectus, not yet evolved to modern mankind

And your closer is the weakest punchline in the whole song, the concept again is lame and not offensive enough.


This is real feedback, i'm not hate'in i'm just lettin u know

SID
04-14-2007, 06:17 AM
my head aint in the dictionary...this is how i speak..therfore thats how i rap, pence are the british version of dimes einstein, a faulty coke machine-all the coins come out - spit loose change get it yet?.. blood flows- sado masacist hoes still dont get it?, your diggin for weakness!, but thats kool thanks for the feedback

peace

Bigot Hitman
04-14-2007, 02:00 PM
my head aint in the dictionary...this is how i speak..therfore thats how i rap, pence are the british version of dimes einstein, a faulty coke machine-all the coins come out - spit loose change get it yet?..your diggin for weakness!, but thats kool thanks for the feedback
^^
Prolly one out 50 people know what the british version of dimes is so don't act like that's common knowlegde, and what coke machine would spit american dimes and british dimes? that's what i mean by your concepts is lame. PLus how does a writer "spit loose change" the metaphor doesn't even make sense. The weakness in your lines is on the surface, u don't need to dig for it at all.

your diggin for weakness!, but thats kool thanks for the feedback

peace

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NASTY NAK
04-17-2007, 08:39 PM
FAGNUTS

Sidious aint meant to spit

SID
04-18-2007, 07:29 AM
keep hatin nak...i aint a battle emcee..thats why iam workin on it but if it comes to REAL thought-provoking, word affair lyricism i blow you and all you katz out the water (you all spit shit i heard a million times before, hip hop is tired of wannabees, cliches and the usual shit, ill stick to meaningfull rap that gets an important message across) you stick to your shit

PEACE

NASTY NAK
04-18-2007, 12:29 PM
keep hatin nak...i aint a battle emcee..thats why iam workin on it but if it comes to REAL thought-provoking, word affair lyricism i blow you and all you katz out the water (you all spit shit i heard a million times before, hip hop is tired of wannabees, cliches and the usual shit, ill stick to meaningfull rap that gets an important message across) you stick to your shit

PEACE

HAHAHA you're the biggest wannabe WU TANG CLAN dickrider here. UR lyricals have no flow or substance, bet you cant hold a beat, if you want to talk real thought provoking shit, check out Spoken Mr. BIG or Me you fucking jerk ass hoe you get sonned and keep complaining

SID
04-18-2007, 01:39 PM
you call me a wannabe wu dickrider...when you been on this site since 2006
how can man call me a dickrider i dont big up wu or spit about them...your jus a deluded wannabee punk ass bitch, you havens seen my "lyricals" only my freestyle battles, stop dickridin big an spoken, if you think they spit meaningfull substance...your more of a rap imposter then i thought you were


peace

Bigot Hitman
04-18-2007, 01:42 PM
What is your lyrical substance? what the fuck do you be talkin bout, where's your story verses an shit? cuz all i've seen from your a whole bunch of big words put into lines that have no value at all.

Just if u wanna get better then read all these verses from "creative criminal" to "close call",
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25482&page=31
I read bout 5 of your verses an i still ain't really read anything yet.

SID
04-18-2007, 01:48 PM
you havent even seen my verses, so what have you seen...my battle rhymes(with big words that all make sense if you understand what iam talkin about)
which i admitted many times before were not fully formed..i have no idea why katz be jumpin at my battle ryhmes with such ferocity...

Bigot Hitman
04-18-2007, 01:55 PM
you havent even seen my verses, so what have you seen...my battle rhymes(with big words that all make sense if you understand what iam talkin about)
which i admitted many times before were not fully formed..i have no idea why katz be jumpin at my battle ryhmes with such ferocity...

We'll make yo own thread an post'em

An people be jumpin on yo lines like this cuz u be claim'in shit you aint doin, u claim you rippin everybody, an u step to everbody wit all these shitty ass stretched out lines, that might make sense after u look in the dictionary, but afterall that, the punches/concepts/substance is weak.

It don't really matter if u use all these 3+ syllable words if the concept of the line you are usin them in is not strong. WHich like i keep on sayin, your concepts is trash.

SID
04-18-2007, 02:01 PM
"no arrogance or anything.
but my written stuff here puts your shit at the bottom of the fishtank.
know why people dislike you?
because you swear you're the best...when you're just another amateur who thinks he sick because he looks up words in the dictionary and throws em together to form a verse, which hopefully will grab someone's attention.
you can claim shit, but you have to back it up.

i rarely post anymore.
i'm out doing music. actual music.
if you judge my shxt by the stuff you see here, then lol @ you.
quit thinking you're better than everyone.
and try to elevate in your flow/ concept matter/ lyricism/ etc.
cause the way you are right now, no one's gonna dig you at the expense of your attitude."




iam happy your doin "music" i respect that if thats the case...i dont take wordz out the dictionary, this is my vocab believe it or not, no bother to me...i dont throw barz together they all make perfect sense if you read them properly and understand the meaning of the wordz..an dude there only freestyles an battle verses nothing special....if "people" dislike me i couldent give a flying fuck, i care what "real" people think about me..iam jus on the corp to get better at battles.....



PEACE

SID
04-18-2007, 02:03 PM
aight big....

Bigot Hitman
04-18-2007, 02:04 PM
Hell yea its aight bitch, ain't shit wrong wit shit, everythings cool wit me ya mean, but i'ma quit floodin Nak's thread

SID
04-18-2007, 02:08 PM
dont be callin me a bitch, you faggot, flood this dumb-ass thread if you want i dont give a fuck...stop buggin me please



peace

Bigot Hitman
04-18-2007, 02:10 PM
lol, lame

SID
04-18-2007, 02:12 PM
lame.....you one sad dude homie......stop floddin like you said

Bigot Hitman
04-18-2007, 04:31 PM
"one sad dude", not at all, get off my banana sauce