View Full Version : keystyle, give me hard critisim

07-22-2005, 04:45 PM
Shits so hard, I gotta put it on hold, then spit it harder
With shards of glass in my hand just to cut it on the mic
an I got punches for days so don't rush me on the mic
along with sing a longs for the kids
whose moms don't like the hard shit
knuck if you buck?
I lace a bitches food with my nuts fucker
so who's not ready, I'm with a crew that runs steady, and the kind that have no problem killing
I rap when I'm ready, cool? cuz me not ready's like Mayweather on Gatti, a picking
So if you'd prefer a slow death come at me with your flow then
So I can sew your lungs, attached to your nose, so now you can breath death

07-22-2005, 10:47 PM
hard criticism...? this was utter garbage... fuck a keystyle, take the time to write somethin' of some value... i honestly hope that doesn't ruin your day...



07-22-2005, 11:04 PM
no, it doesn't

07-23-2005, 07:07 AM
Damn // C Da Approach.. I Started Like U ..// U Will Find Ur Flow... / Practice.. ... ! Shit Will Help... Also I Mean Ur Flow From Da Top.. Look Around.. // Try 2 Rhyme It.. Then U Will C .. !


07-25-2005, 01:05 AM
You weren't that creative, but i suppose you were busting.

Keep Posting

PS: Would like to see more verse from you