View Full Version : NEW TRACK:Unseen Struggles ft.Stevie G

04-11-2007, 01:12 PM
featuring Stevie G...this is basically an emotional song.dedicated...

Unseen Struggles

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5223242&q=lo

hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5223242&q=hi

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04-11-2007, 01:45 PM
there were some moments where you just had filler. You rhymed words for the sake of having a word that rhymed. That girl did alright this time.

Its good that you had a theme. It wasnt anything new though. You have to disguise daily troubles these days for the listener. You have to sneak into their house in the middle of the night and scare the shit out of them.

think about it.


04-12-2007, 10:12 AM
thanks 4 the feedback..but i think that from the shit i hear on the radio and see on tv these days,the listener doesnt have a clue what they want to hear.Someones gotta come through with somethin different,deeper etc.ya feel me

04-14-2007, 03:38 AM
any more feed?

04-17-2007, 10:54 AM

04-17-2007, 11:06 AM
decent track, I agree that the theme is tired but thats not my problem with this I think it needs more energy this is hiphop not a lullaby anyway keep at it. Maybe do like Dirty says imagine rap as your bitch and somebodys fucking your bitch, use that rage

04-18-2007, 04:08 AM
good song.
The beat is alright, even though i'm not feeling that clap/snare sound.
Chorus is not bad.


04-18-2007, 05:00 AM
nice mellow joint, the beat, the flow and the chorus are good.


04-18-2007, 08:22 AM
1st i gotta say, it seems like you have found a way to imrpove the audio sound. This sounds a lot better then some of the other tracks u made as far as audio sound is concerned. I also like the connection u and stevie g seem to have, this is the 2nd track u did with her and she makes a nice mix with u. I personally am not much into this style of rap, but its pretty damn cool that u have versatility. Overall id give this song a 8.5 out of 10, keep up the good shit man, peace

04-18-2007, 01:28 PM
peace for the feedback ay,appreciate it,keep doin my shit,tryin new shit out...^Hollywood will hook up a few songs with u soon if thats cool,just gotta get the time bro