View Full Version : Check this
04-21-2007, 08:36 PM
http://www.soundclick.com/reddrebel (http://www.soundclick.com/reddrebel) "Redd Rebel"; also check "Together Rise" and "Mass Confusion pt2" let me know what you thought, thanks
04-23-2007, 09:02 AM
04-23-2007, 11:16 AM
Redd Rebel : i'd like to hear the voice turned down a bit, and the beat a little louder. no offense, sounds like your rapping while holding your nose. also, work on some breathing. i can hear you taking breaths & even run out of breath at parts, stop & pause. kinda messes up the flow of the track. i actually like the voice effect you put later on in the song though. pretty decent track overall.
Together Rise : wow, i like the intro & the beat on this. really something to chill & vibe to. your slow flow i think is far more impressive then the shit you were spittin' on "redd rebel". i can understand you better, and it really doesn't sound like you're rappin' while holding your nose, know what i mean? This is the best track I've heard out of all three.
Mass Confusion : errrr, too slow of a beat for a fast flow on this. i couldn't really vibe with this, your flow was too fast for the track. but, your voice sounds a lot better. maybe it was just something you tried something new on "redd rebel" that made it sound bad to me? i'd also like to hear a hook for this, rather then just straight flowing through it, pausing, and then starting up another verse.
good overall man, pretty decent stuff.
the 2nd track i listened to a couple times man, good shit.
i'd say work on some breathing, and slow the flow down man.
i think that's when you start soundin' really good.
i don't know much about audio, but i was readin' the forums & peeps were talkin' about wantin' feedback from other members of the site too, reguardless if they put tracks out or not.
so i'm just givin' ya my opinion.
04-23-2007, 01:11 PM
no doubt thanks for listening Classic; the pitch was turned up on "Redd Rebel" which is why it sounds nasally, but I was just trying out something new Together Rise has a Bronze Nazareth beat (Taming the Iron) and the other beat on MC2 is from Simon Says of course
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