View Full Version : Menace's Science

05-08-2007, 05:54 PM
niggas couldnt comprehend that their end/ was arranged when the first wave of shinobi was called/ to halt tension in ya section/ you just happened to be menacin', suspicious/ so they pick ya brain for intelligence/ findin' nothin but an empty vessel/ that was popped like stressed blood vessels/ so they basically cut em' down, kunai bloody/ river of lovely that they used to/ no effect, so they depart quickly, swiftly/ leavin no weapons or traces/

my joints like the earth, in constant rotation/ i strike the same spot everytime, flawless lyrical assassination/ my style more relaxed then a sloth on vacation/ you could meet my mind in the bahamas/ n' catch my frame sweatin' it out in the sauna/ above the drama, abide by my own code of honor/ partially misled like a defective pencil/ still won't compete wit me, too elaborate/ you weeded up nigga, i smell it in ya fabric/ infatuated wit this rap shit/ my single valentine that make me write poems in cursive/

05-10-2007, 10:45 AM
can i get some feedback pleaze?