View Full Version : Excuse Me Shadow..

Dr Sleepwalker
05-10-2007, 09:01 PM
I'm way too quick to drinkin', I'm exposed to fail/
Disposed the nail, sing notes composed in braille/
Sin wrote most these quotes I tell.. 'cast' your votes and 'sail'.../
At last, I laugh in hell,.. I'm vast.. I grab my staff and yell/
Calmed by the whispers that ride a cool breeze../
A find that my time is spent in smooth grief../
Tuned in the mind of a mood thief..,/
From the tomb i'll make the moon speak../
From the womb I was spooned in a good sleep/
Came out, I was doomed the room cheif../
Turned keys to unlocked these doors../
Burned tree's just to walk these floors../
Without trippin', and slippin' inside the basement/
Hands started to talk and asked 'were my face went'/
Heart murmered replies that provoked these fingers../
Til' they grabbed him, squeezed til they broke his whispers.../

05-12-2007, 11:02 PM
Another tight verse. Open to deciphering as usual. Always an interesting read. Heavy use of multies which was cool. Keep it up.