View Full Version : Wake Up! Wake Up! The Pharaohz - On tha Brink

05-14-2007, 02:46 AM
what it iz fam, i been movin but just got the new lab set up. Peep this "On tha Brink" joint from the pharaohz album.......lets get some feed up in this bitch. We wanna know how you cats vibe with some of this shit. peep iot at.

www.soundclick.com/thepharaohz (http://www.soundclick.com/thepharaohz)

at www.myspace.com/pharaohsiris (http://www.myspace.com/pharaohsiris)

05-14-2007, 04:03 PM
eh yo noggaz dont sleep
the shit is hot

pharoahz album is comin up

snef & siris definetly dopest duo colabo

mad respect

05-14-2007, 04:20 PM
thats wussup

this track is niiiiiiiice ya'll both repped it hard


05-14-2007, 04:50 PM
Y'all both spit fire on this joint, already listening to it 3rd time in a row. This album deserves to get peeped!

05-15-2007, 02:14 PM
Hot track. HOT.

MaXiMus Da MaNtis
05-15-2007, 05:42 PM
shit was sick real sick only thing iz it sounded like you both recorded diffrently .....alot wont notice but i could hear it .....shit was sick thou no doubt

05-16-2007, 03:56 AM
yo, good looks on the love. But im surrprised to only see 1 "feedback" frome mantis. Cats usto give feed like what they liked about a verse, or how a MC ripped a certain section of a track, or what Emcee you were feelin the most and why, or even how the track made you feel and what it made you think about. Did it reach you, teach you, change you, or were you not feelin it and why? Everyone here knows im not a errogant mufucka but i already know my shit is hot. I wanna know how some of the great minds in this bitch "SEE" it, Not HEAR it. But if thats askin to much, maybe none of us should give "Feed" atol. "FEED back" means that you've been fed somthing, everything somones got, and now your gonna "feed" them back. Im gonna haveto start showin and provin on this matter.

P.S. I hope my tracks toutch at least one of you.

05-16-2007, 07:49 PM
wow man i'm really feeling this stuff...wow...it's just sooo doep...production rhymes...everything...flows really feeling it...i really like "Snef's" flows too...i'm really thankful for the feedback on my thread...i feel really humbled that you gave me advice...this shit is awesome...sorry if i'm sounding like a blubbering groupie...but it's DOPE!

Grimey Fruitbat
05-17-2007, 12:44 AM
peace brotherman, the beat is decent on this joint, nothing mind blowing, i feel what y'all is tryin to do here, but i really can't get into the hook, and the flows aren't doing much for me, both mc's....however, the last verse i liked...not sure which mc is which....

peeped that shadow priest jumpoff too, this track i liked better, altho the hook had a kinda awkward cadence that i couldn't get into...verses was nice...grimy sound...keep shinin sun...

05-17-2007, 01:29 AM
I'm just going to come honest, and I'd hope that is what you'd want. Like dude above said, the beat isn't all that special, yet most of the beats I've heard for this album are on some dope shit. I didn't like the way you could hear the actual loop chop in the beginning, obviously that gets masked as other chops and samples come in.

I didn't think the hook was bad, but i hear a lot of "god" this and "god" that in the flows, and as an atheist, that shit doesn't move me. :thumbdwn: "god", in what ever form (whether it be the judeao/islamic/christian one, the pagan ones, the 5%er calling himself one, thor, zeus, whatever) is about as real to me as the fucking tooth ferry, LOL!!! I realize the point though, as the kemetians worshiped many different "gods" and "godesses" so I can see why you may implement them into the rhymes, it just doesn't move me (personally). I am however moved by other aspects within the rhymes.

I thought Snef's cadence and flow were sick, sort of an in your face style. :thumbup:

05-17-2007, 05:09 AM
My bad everybody, but some cats need shit spelled out for em. And its ironic hoe closely this track is in correspondence with theses issues at hand. Heres how Godz show and prove/stay sharp/and chop the heads of the snakes around him. Watch closely to how i feed the impact to some cats emotions, leavin them feelin self doubt. you will see it through theyer replies/like a soul through big eyez/when i show and prove, ahead only truth lyes.

What we asked for:::::: FEED BACK

FEED BACK is the reaction of some results of a process; serving to alter or re-enforce the character of that product.

What Some cats did::::: hate: perverse incentive/overload of useless opinionating, and personal Information.

A “perverse incentive” is a term for an incentive (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Incentive) that has the opposite effect of that intended. Perverse incentives by definition produce negative

“overload of useless opinionating, and personal Information.”
Vegan 1. a strict vegetarian; someone who eats no animal or dairy products at all.
Actual Fact: Anything beyond that is guidelined in ACSM standards as O.C.D

Obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD) is a psychiatric (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Psychiatric) disorder (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Disorder) most commonly characterized by a subject's obsessive, distressing (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Distress), intrusive thoughts (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Intrusive_thoughts) and related compulsions (tasks or "rituals (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Rituals)") which attempt to neutralize the obsessions. Thus it is an anxiety disorder (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Anxiety_disorder). It is listed by the World Health Organization (http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/World_Health_Organization) as one of the top ten most disabling illnesses in terms of lost income and diminished quality of life.

P.E.A.C.E To The G.O.D.S

For all those who love our “Non over-produced,” self made/ audio crack, 1 love. peep the Positive message: "Each one teach one” keep the positive feed commin!! Good Looks.

If your not feelin this shit, then it aint for you. No need for no perverse incentive, or negative viben on our thread. Oh, And to the big ego cats, "Dont Play youself" on some real shit. i dont have to define or show and prove "Play Ypurself" do I?

05-17-2007, 06:18 AM
Just so cats know, Snef is like a brother to me, and I will never just co-sign off on something if I feel there is an aspect to it i wasn't feeling. Basically, I will never use that as a bias. I've been listening to hip-hop for over 20 years so I feel that I have an ear for what is dope. If I'm not feeling a beat, i will say so, and I do it out of love. I do know this album has some top notch beats that will put the production on most established artists' albums to shame. be ready cats.

*on a side note...

Yeah, ocd is no joke, i was with a girl who had that once. drove me nuts!! I am glad i do not have that because as siris quoted, quality of life and loss of income could result. right now my quality of life is superb and working as many hours as i do per week insures quite the decent income.

05-20-2007, 10:04 AM
pretty dope