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100pr00f
05-19-2007, 11:37 AM
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=461665&songID=5360151

post some feed.....

all made by hand no samples




peace

Slang_Apostle
05-19-2007, 12:51 PM
I like this one. At first..I was like...hmmm, I don't know, but then the beat kicked in and it came together. Nice shit, Proof.

GameOfDeath
05-20-2007, 02:30 AM
You should up the highs on the piano at the intro the bass is dominating. Kick drums are low. Creatively this is pretty good done by hand. I like the bass progression, but I think there is room for more here pr00f. You could easily put a higher sound in there like a violin or something- - nevermind the piano came in. The scratching was a nice touch.

100pr00f
05-20-2007, 11:42 AM
thanks for the feed ..ima see what i can do

peace

Siris
05-20-2007, 04:01 PM
You should up the highs on the piano at the intro the bass is dominating. Kick drums are low. Creatively this is pretty good done by hand. I like the bass progression, but I think there is room for more here pr00f. You could easily put a higher sound in there like a violin or something- - nevermind the piano came in. The scratching was a nice touch.


deff, i, ill sample, turn up drum n bass and its perfect. Sick vibe to it.

100pr00f
05-21-2007, 10:52 AM
thanks for the feed

i think the bass is good as i do need to turn em down or turn down the bass the way it hits cuz it takes over the whole beat to were u can hear the other things going on

when i bump it in my car

the kicks ima turn up when i get some time

off

haha

peace

Hellspawn
05-21-2007, 11:04 AM
Sick beat Proof, nice choice of instruments. the scratches are dope as well.
peace

100pr00f
05-22-2007, 04:43 PM
thanks for the feed hell

Max Munch
05-22-2007, 09:23 PM
I'm feeling this man, pretty well done. As someone who composes most of my own music I can appreciate the effort put into this -ish. The drums are fucking awesome, fit really well with the melody. Bass is smooth too, not bad at all man.

Keep doing ya thing.

RTF:
http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=37354

100pr00f
05-23-2007, 11:15 AM
thans for the feed back

ima up the fixed copy later

ERN-DAWGY
05-23-2007, 01:14 PM
i'mma peep it in a bit

Greek Gheynician Anal Tradition
05-23-2007, 02:07 PM
Dope beat pr00f..Erny what happened with the beat i send u man?

100pr00f
05-24-2007, 10:44 AM
thanks for the feedback tech

White_Mouse
05-24-2007, 11:08 AM
listening now, pretty nice intro, i like how you bring the drums in, i do think the kick is too low, and your whole procution (spelling?) section (including the scratches) could be a little lowder becasue ti's just not blending as much as i wish it would with the meleody...but overall this is a very creative piece.

100pr00f
05-25-2007, 02:04 PM
thanks for the feed back mouse i have made a new one with the kick up some
its not posted yet