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Shadow Pirate
07-25-2005, 08:23 PM
shadow pirate

u turn ima make u make a u turn so i can finish the circle and leave you burned
dawg i'm unconcerned i sit wit niggas @ the round table, you're just
a clowned fable i aint king Arthur but my lancelot swords left you under
the sheet wit ya toe labeled from the slow cut right through yo navel
your death is not a mystery but the second you got murdered the shit was already
history like the battle was told before it's time and you really writing lyrics
that should be make a true crime (be like arrest this nigga because he Sucks)
you fucked wit the pirate now your lyrics turned to blue lines i somehow feel like
this is a thank you rhyme cause you added to my murders and now it's brew time

had to fix the end cause it got all fucked up...........it said "it's br" when it's suppose to say what it does now. :)

u-turn
07-25-2005, 08:48 PM
I'm bout make shadow pirate go poof
Up in smoke, his goofy shit don't even exist in the mirror, you know he can't handle the truth//
Make him pop up like spam like he's been doing then go kick his ass
Tricking his ass, this ain't chess but he's kicking his own ass//
Stupid, you want to know, how I got my flow
The answer is, you ain't ever touching me so why bother wanting to know?//
Saw a king join this forum, now he's jumpin like MJ
This rat ain't even big enough, sounding like a mouse like Em on flav//
You a fake artist, no credibility, you ain't even got a pen or pad
With dream or pad you still couldn't be my nightmare no matter how bad//
Show this kid how I do, got something on your chess
I show the silver bitch like a gorillaz chest//
Blow the battery out your frame
The operation mans ready for this lame//
Can't even find a replacement
Hell his mom n his name aren't even adjacent//

Sicka than aidZ
07-25-2005, 08:56 PM
its alright, too close tho,...u both kinda lost me.....i vote for u turn.....he played around with the verse more and i think he put more effort in.....yo, ghost pirate...the shit was close. staycool man peace

vote-u turn

Shadow Pirate
07-25-2005, 09:17 PM
<shadow.......i get you cousin......you stay true too....

u turn 1

me 0

1

Cappah
07-25-2005, 09:20 PM
same thing. U-turn just got on dat time. I made more sense and I felt him betta than shadow pirate his sounded more like mf doom just squeezin words in that fittin the rhyme betta. but it was a good battle

vote=u-turn

u-turn
07-25-2005, 09:22 PM
2 = me

0 = shadow

1 more vote

Idiom
07-25-2005, 09:42 PM
weLL i'm going to have dissagree with you folks, i think shadow's verse was more affective..
he spit punches almost the whole way (which both of theirs was pretty nice) but his word usage and metaphore and wordplay just got to me more...

things i liked most from the fellers

Shadow Pirate
" u turn ima make u make a u turn so i can finish the circle and leave you burned
dawg i'm unconcerned i sit wit niggas @ the round table, you're just
a clowned fable"

U-Turn
" Make him pop up like spam like he's been doing then go kick his ass
Tricking his ass, this ain't chess but he's kicking his own ass//"

I think other should agree...

I could be wrong!

but hey, it's all fun so good luck to you good fellers.

as they say, have a good day

OmO < Idiom

Undead Ninja
07-29-2005, 06:37 AM
IMO, Shadow destroyed you.