View Full Version : Figment Of A Broken Dreamscape

Killer Falcon
07-26-2005, 06:57 AM
check out this new track. give me honest and constructive criticism.

jus a song for my EP, might record the second verse again

link is in my sig


07-26-2005, 07:35 AM
Very very nice lyrics son. A real poetic vibe.
"A lost soul wanders days lone
future spaceghosts... searching faith and hope" :yes: :yes:


07-26-2005, 12:21 PM
Nice beat, could you "sharpen" the drum-line a bit, Shitao? Would hit it in total, then! Good job as always

to Winte: incredible lyrics, you try to speak clearly, nice UK-accent ;) and constant flow; proper quality in sound
I know it's hard but I think you could put more atmosphere in your raps, you know, a bit more aggressive, a touch of transiency
but I like this track, no doubt

The other tracks on your page are decent, too!!
- Young dove: nice vibe you got there
- Way of the shadow: raw and heavy, beat's well produced - the 2nd verse's acca should be mixed again
- Video gamez: again a raw track, good MC feature (graveyard)
- Hope: crazy instrumental, aggressive rap
I think there's always a 3rd vers missing, these are too short in my feeling ;)
Saying this, I don't want to disrespect you (I'm no better) but I want you to get forward because I like your stuff!
Keep up your style, keep up your text-work, keep up your productions
Those are really underground and fresh - props

07-26-2005, 01:07 PM
Ahhhhh Word, So Ur The Killa Falcon Dat Worked W/ My Bretheren Graveyard Shifter, Nice Ass Track U Got Here Yo, Big Ups To Shitao On Da Production , Rhymes Is Bangin On Da Real, Mad Deepness In The Words, I Like Dat Shit Word Up. Keep It Comin Yo

Peace And War

07-26-2005, 03:31 PM
Very nice and somber, maybe you could distinguish a chorus in some part in the middle, i know its not the final mix probably but just a suggestion, dope tho PEACE

07-27-2005, 08:14 AM
this was one of my favourite shitao beats.
killer falcon is one of my favourite mcs from the internet.
the result is great. hehe...really good

-maybe the volume of the beat should be a bit increased. kf's flow matches verry good the measures and everything.
i really would comment more upon this song...but i like it how it is.

Killer Falcon
07-28-2005, 08:05 PM
thanks a lot for the feedback everyone. i'll learn from what you've said. thanks to all who checked it out


07-29-2005, 12:18 AM
aiyo killer falcon my man! i listen to you a lot dude

Killer Falcon
07-30-2005, 10:10 AM
thanks. uppin


Killer Falcon
07-31-2005, 02:04 PM

08-03-2005, 06:28 AM
For my man Killer Falcon.....UP

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08-03-2005, 07:32 AM
very nice job..up...

Greek Gheynician Anal Tradition
08-03-2005, 07:33 AM
very nice job..up.........

Killer Falcon
08-04-2005, 06:13 PM
thanks for feedback....