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oDoUoSoKo
07-16-2007, 09:16 PM
open my cerebral coffin and put in a head of cabbage
a leprous fascist that wouldve probly (probably) been better average
while said actions couldnt total the amount of vocal stress
that go into screaming and scolding at your evil hopefulness
i hope you jest when you say im dead, are you upset
you can beat me with my gravestone, and scar my regret
taking you for granted's easy, doing what ive done is hard as fuck
and the flames that burn beneath me will release me from this garbage truck
take my name with you, just incase you forget yourself
the person who snuffed you out for the sake of his mental health
the rebel in my cause has ridden the top of the cliff
jammed with the devil's foot pedal, strumming monsterous riffs
you were just a vessel, i dont expect you to forgive me
betrayal's much to stressful on some levels, why not live free?
i envy you frankly, but i rather suffer the loss of life
for making you soken wet, cuz i couldnt turn the Faucet right.

Sleep Sinatra
07-17-2007, 12:55 PM
sick..deep wodplay yo

oDoUoSoKo
07-17-2007, 09:18 PM
thanks bro

J.T.S.
07-18-2007, 11:57 AM
Niceness first time checking your writtens out pretty good.

NASTY NAK
07-18-2007, 05:01 PM
its ok, a bit stressed but ok

oDoUoSoKo
07-18-2007, 05:04 PM
? stressed? how do u think i felt writing it?

NASTY NAK
07-18-2007, 05:09 PM
? stressed? how do u think i felt writing it?

i ment to wordy...my mistake

still ok imo

oDoUoSoKo
07-18-2007, 05:20 PM
ok, but i dont know what you mean. you dont need to explain.

tekunique
07-19-2007, 02:00 PM
ok, but i dont know what you mean. you dont need to explain.
lol...

oDoUoSoKo
07-21-2007, 08:17 PM
this will be made into a song...not sure how it will go yet tho.

Dr Sleepwalker
07-23-2007, 12:10 PM
deep... i liked it, thanks for the read

SHRAP
07-30-2007, 08:56 PM
intellekt returns

oDoUoSoKo
07-30-2007, 09:22 PM
how are u Intellekt? Hows life?

Locust
07-31-2007, 03:44 AM
gay

Father N Dangerous
07-31-2007, 03:55 AM
shits def. upscale in all ways, real nice structure made it flow nicely and real talk good vocabulary etc. real nice read keep doing ya thing! stay up keep blessin

oDoUoSoKo
07-31-2007, 08:54 PM
hows it goin bro...been a while...thank you.