View Full Version : Quest to become a Killer Bee

Undead Ninja
07-27-2005, 09:13 PM
You can call me the undead ninja this song is also called the undead ninja I wish to become a Killer Bee and I don't know where to start so I started here and I got this rhyme I like so I wrote it down well here it is.

Intro: (From the Wutang Liquid Sword Collection the movie Flaming Swords)

"Huh, Who are you? Well Comeon lets see just who you are, unless your scared of getting your precious skin sunburned."

Beat starts (indian/asain beat)

"The Undead Ninja, mmmmmm... The Undead Ninja mmmmmm.... The Undead Ninja striaght slash ure crew the analects he wrote only masked a few. He used Wutang attacks that only masters knew. Everyday hidin in the shadows of life and death but he still cluched towards the cross on his neck. He was a roughed neck coward thought he ran the streets until they put a hit on him and busted his teeth. So came to the Wu seeking supreme refudge, they taught him the ways of a hustla and a warrior. They sai d" Don't go out lookin like Tom Sawyer". So he went back to his hood and showed the homies what he learned they turned on him said " nigga your dead"! They pulled out glocks and started to blast but the lil' ninja nigga was way too fast. He said "MWAHHAAHA whose bad"! After all the rounds poped off one nigga was left he said " Hey ninja nigga you got an S on ure chest". He shot one time hit the ninja between the eyes. The ninja screamed out "I'm gonna mothafuckin die"!!!. He looked at his blood and saw golden "W's". He said " Wait a fuckin minute I was just shot in the head". The lil' ninja nigga realized his punk ass shoulda been dead. He ran back to the Wu and he said " Help me G I been shot in tha face"! They all set back and laughed hard and said " Young nigga protect your neck and you won't get scared".
This is the story of the Undead Ninja it can be found under the records of Wu written by the RZA.

(Original indian/asain beat plays while "Undead Ninja" is heard in background until it fades away).

What do you think honest opions thanks!

Father N Dangerous
07-27-2005, 11:51 PM
got sum shit to learn, like expand the vocab a lil bit, make it sound smooth peace

the messiah
07-28-2005, 12:42 AM
good for 14 years old, keep elevatin and u could be fuckin deadly wit a ball point kid, peace and 1

07-28-2005, 04:29 AM
Nice theme, and quite inventive to put it in such an effect. Keep posting