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iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 03:25 AM
I'm Ahead Of The Age, I'll Sustain My Place, And Your Pages Will Remian Blank Untill I've Re-Written Your Time Frame
From Then On, Every Scripture And Rhyme I Spit Will Be Laced With A Mache 5 Turbo Auqa Gauge
You Fuckface, I'll Shove Your Head Back In Place, Rewind Your Days, And Turn You Back To Your Microscopic State
For Heavens Sake Forsake Your Fate, Hang You Upside Down In Space For Hell's Bate
My Best Trait, My Thoughts Travel At A Furious Rate, Display A Mirror And Double Till It Breaks
This Shit I Create, Is Beyond Your Beef, To Good For A Plate, A Fuckin Miriacle That'll Make Your Mind Ache
A Tension To When I Speak, Makes The Air Vibrate, More Of That Then An Earthquake
Judge With Seramics, If I Catch You, Its Automatic, Strait Irratic The Verbal Killer Fanatic
A Great Flows Abstract, Like Money Im The Nasdaq, U Give Slack And I'll Snatch Your Gat
Rip The Jack The Massacre's Back, 2 Hooks And A 151 Flask, Boiling Blood Uner A Flesh Mask
Your Shits Shrap, I'll Mesh Your Trash, Paybacks A Bitch, In Fact If You Have Brains You Know Better The To Snitch
Quit Actin Like You Stack Bricks, Only Powder You've Seen Is The Kind Your Mom Smacks Your Ass Wtih
So Dont Act Up, U Think Your A Bully? You Dont Know The Meaning Even If I Showed You A Goats Head A Pentagram And Pirates Skully
7th Scorned With Horns, Born With Torns, Spit Thorns Its Like Fuckin You Over Ina Corn Field Shottin A Porno Film

- - - - - - meh thats it....peace

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 03:28 AM
My Thoughts Travel At A Inferior Rate

:lmao: dude u know what inferior means, shiiit son, thats goin in tha sig lil brotha

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 03:29 AM
i thought it meant unstoppable, i think i mean furious then

mashqauck
07-29-2005, 04:42 AM
inferior is like unwanted, not good

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 04:44 AM
inferior is like unwanted, not goodyeh..many terms, i thought Inferior was like a verb for furious, I WAS WORNG, drop it,

i wanna hear some real feed please

mashqauck
07-29-2005, 04:46 AM
lol, i was just saying, but imo the rhymes are good the first line is the best to me

Killer Falcon
07-29-2005, 07:38 AM
lyrically it was good. the first 3 lines were tightest, i could find the rhythm easily. the only problem with your verse (and i've noticed it with other ones too) is that its hard to really pick up the rhythm or flow because your lines are very long. it makes it hard to figure out where one bar finishes and the next one begins. this is especially confusing considering some of your verse structure. no diss, this is just constructive criticism. keep up the good work.

peace

TUCO
07-29-2005, 08:03 AM
i thought it meant unstoppable, i think i mean furious then
:lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: :lmao:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH CLASSIC!!!

PEACE

TUCO
07-29-2005, 08:06 AM
:lmao: dude u know what inferior means, shiiit son, thats goin in tha sig lil brotha
haha no doubt....hope u dun mind me doin tha same

PEACE

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 08:12 AM
lyrically it was good. the first 3 lines were tightest, i could find the rhythm easily. the only problem with your verse (and i've noticed it with other ones too) is that its hard to really pick up the rhythm or flow because your lines are very long. it makes it hard to figure out where one bar finishes and the next one begins. this is especially confusing considering some of your verse structure. no diss, this is just constructive criticism. keep up the good work.

peace well, my bar pattern is different the norm i guess, wehn i rap it in my head, its like my brain produces its own beat to go perfect with bar pattern, lol, i switch it up too also, yeh it hink i need to type it better, but when im freestlyin i dont pay attention how i type......

peace thanks for the feed back

Butter
07-29-2005, 08:37 AM
nice verse. reminds me of copywrite.

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 08:52 AM
LOL i was listeing to Theme Music then a Jakki track when i wrote this....:D

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-29-2005, 09:11 AM
Ha hahaahaha ...You Sonned ya self

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 09:13 AM
i know what i meant tho..! XD

Tage
07-29-2005, 09:22 AM
LOL i was listeing to Theme Music then a Jakki track when i wrote this....:D
thats a copywrite track, GET IT RIGHT!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-29-2005, 10:29 AM
Yeah I feel you man get a thesaurus though it will help you when your trying to use a different word with the same meaning

jallainINS
07-29-2005, 12:35 PM
yeah i liked it but i found it hard to read, the lines are so long. id like to hear you rap it cuz i think youd run out of breath.

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 01:39 PM
also anyone else notice how hes wrote so many verses dissin me yet he doesnt want 2 battle

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 01:42 PM
also anyone else notice how hes wrote so many verses dissin me yet he doesnt want 2 battleplease...me waiste a whole vers on you? u gotta be kidding yourself

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 01:45 PM
you done it so many times u idiot, keep my name out of your mouth and dont rhyme about me punk

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 01:47 PM
you done it so many times u idiot, keep my name out of your mouth and dont rhyme about me punkSkale, u might of as well be black but on the pale side, whatch ya gonna do? nada damn thing, i wouldnt waste a rhyme about you if you rapped abotu mobey hoes and bling...
lmao...

your not tuff skale..shut up already

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 01:54 PM
Your Shits Shrap, I'll Mesh Your Trash, Paybacks A Bitch, In Fact If You Have Brains You Know Better The To Snitch
Quit Actin Like You Stack Bricks, Only Powder You've Seen Is The Kind Your Mom Smacks Your Ass Wtih
So Dont Act Up, U Think Your A Bully? You Dont Know The Meaning Even If I Showed You A Goats Head A Pentagram And Pirates Skully


whos that about faggot?

http://myspace-499.vo.llnwd.net/00149/99/44/149994499_l.jpg

ill knock your ass out with one punch and destroy your ass with one verse dont fuck with shrap

iNtell3kT
07-29-2005, 01:55 PM
bitch boy talkin shit, thats all your are to me,...

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 02:11 PM
bitch boy?

people who look like this cant call anyone bitch boy

http://myspace-499.vo.llnwd.net/00149/99/44/149994499_l.jpg

tekunique
07-29-2005, 02:20 PM
bitch boy?

people who look like this cant call anyone bitch boy

http://myspace-499.vo.llnwd.net/00149/99/44/149994499_l.jpg LOL.....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-29-2005, 02:21 PM
Keep posting Intelleckt

jallainINS
07-29-2005, 02:36 PM
why dont you two just shut up and battle and then we wont have to listen to you guys bitchin at each other.

SHRAP
07-29-2005, 02:37 PM
why dont you two just shut up and battle and then we wont have to listen to you guys bitchin at each other.
hes scared

jallainINS
07-29-2005, 02:41 PM
well we know one of you is up for it..so how about it Intellekt? And dont say that you wouldnt waste rhymes on him because you've clearly already rapped bout him..put up or shut up.