View Full Version : The Unspeakable Hurt

Dr Sleepwalker
08-11-2007, 08:44 AM
Ayo, Imma throw this off the top..

I've had a lott on my mind passed year with some shyt that's extremely hard to talk about for me... and I'ma pour a lil out....

I loved the way she lived, ..her eyes of light and wet wings../
The lies where right, so I lied!.... She cries and it dries on her neck skin/
.. She can smile with her eyes wide shut.. the sky flies numb../
I sit and watch, the high dies, gone... I'm alive, the skyline lies stunned../
..Her 3 year suicide was a slow dance with cold hands../
The hope ends where the rope bends,.. no romance to hold hands../
A message in a bottle... I throw it at the clouds../
Please read this.... I need this,.. it breaks on the ground../

Worrrdd... can't even fuck wit this anymore... hurts too much
I'm done...


08-11-2007, 02:38 PM
Yo mozzart-

That waz str8 butter!

on the real.


Dr Sleepwalker
08-11-2007, 10:20 PM
wordd... thanks for readin' & the comment..
means a lot..
Anymore feedback?


Sleep Sinatra
08-11-2007, 11:10 PM
yo shit is mad deep son props

i felt that shit yo

Dr Sleepwalker
08-11-2007, 11:23 PM
word, thanks for takin' the time and readin' OTB and Sleep Sinatra

anymore feed?


08-11-2007, 11:57 PM
thats raw shit
i liked it
especially the message in the bottle part

Dr Sleepwalker
08-12-2007, 01:38 AM
Thanks for reading' THAT GUY, much respect