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PHXorcist
10-16-2007, 04:36 AM
This is a work in progress, just wanted some feedback from y'all, thanks.


My toxic memory is fueled by kinetic apocalyptic energy/
Like the shot that killed Kennedy, clearly vacant of remedy/
In this united state of the enemy, my faith is an extremity,
Fighting off satan with holy weaponry ... all I wrote so far, started this earlier

J-Cee
10-16-2007, 05:57 AM
so far its soundin dope ..keep it up.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-17-2007, 11:13 AM
Nice Lil' Verse Keep It Up