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Dr Sleepwalker
10-26-2007, 04:44 PM
Am i heartless? Or do I just not know where my heart is?/
Well regardless, these nights always seemed the hardest/
When I dreamed of darkness,.. I need weed to sleep, I seem un-conscience/
I'm under options,... ..i swear these choices are like voices../
That only I hear, these voices are just noises, more moisture for the oyster/
More torture for the author that can't even nurture his daughter/
Looked no further to bother, never loved her mother/
Met her once,.. just to fuck her,.. Now i'm the father../
Now it's harder,.. but I'll smile like romance in moonlight/
The slow dance gives the tune life,..A slow hand isn't too soon right?/

Jus a lil somethin' bout anythin'


10-30-2007, 01:54 AM
Interesting little verse. I'm not sure of the meaning of a few lines, but your shit pretty much always comes off as being more metaphorical than literal. Keep tossing those darts.

Dr Sleepwalker
10-30-2007, 02:43 PM
thanks for the feedback noel... always a good look..


10-31-2007, 02:52 PM
Man too short, but the short verse came off full of meaning! Are you really going through a situation like that? If so hold ya head man!

Dr Sleepwalker
10-31-2007, 03:06 PM
yeh man, goin' thru it..
Natalie's about 7 months now,

thanks for the feedback and concern duke


10-31-2007, 03:18 PM
Peace to you bro, you need all the encouragement, and support you can get right know!!

10-31-2007, 07:54 PM
yeah this was fire

Dr Sleepwalker
11-02-2007, 05:47 PM
much appreciated fam, feedback always recongized, foreally real..