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brokenpoet718
10-28-2007, 06:28 AM
Sup ya'll, this Sin...I havent been on a music forum in YEARS, but I figure the Wu-Tang forum gotta have that true real shit going on ya know? Just droppin a line saying wats good to everyone, and just finished typin up old poetry cuz Imma get into the Def Poetry Jam and start doin madd spoken words/open mics while I do this music shit 2...heres some shit, tell me wat ya'll think n you def see me killin it on other parts

July 25th 1986, gift from the heavenly skies
my mother shakin inside, doc said i wouldnt make it alive
couldnt see shit, but i feel the tears in her eyes
I sense the fears n the vibes, got this feelin inside
that i'm healin its aight, now i'm feelin the lighht
3 days undecided, survived, doc said i'm divine
to fight it, N now my parents excited
cuz i'm breathin n livin
priest preachin religion
told my parents that I
had the freedom of vision
That i would choose my destiny, nothin would step in my path
That i'm the best, always first neva 2nd to last
I was givin a 2nd chance, caught a rep in advance
Cept i'm only old enough to be wettin my pants
beat death with my hands, no mo sweatin da plan
trampled my first struggle, ev one clappin they hands
New york new york, yo it made my heart
Got raw, hard, ill, chill, it made me smart
the struggle aint a movie, but I played my part
very well, our fairy tales aint for the faint at heart
I've been thru it all, seen shit ya couldnt believe
Been thru the wall, felt like i couldnt acheive
It was either murder, theivin, bleedin, ball or sellin weed
Thats why in my eyes, I tried actin so differently
Violence, wildin, cryin its part of the air i breathed
Queens baby, its crazy, it made a man of me
my energy would rapidly drain the craziest thangs
Lucy jumped in front of a train, n splattered her brains
It ripped my heart n soul it made me think of my life
How a wrong move, can change it in a blink of an eye
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I've seen twisted fate, I've seen twisted ends
I've seen twisted hate, I've seen twisted friends
I've twisted my soul, twisted my heart
twisted my brain baby till it broke apart
twisted rhymes and lines to provoke ya thoughts
twisted dimes wit minds and broken they hearts
i'm hopin i can open my spark
but i ain't jokin my throat be chokin alot
but now i'm a betta man, wit a better plan
want a lovely life, flooded wit ice
n take my wife to a betta land
i want this forever man
but usually the greatest things in life are neva planned
life comes life goes ya can be off it in
its past its fast like a new york minute
leave a legacy don't fade to black
no regrets, even god can't change the past
I've seen twisted lies, thru some twisted minds
I've seen twisted lives, thru my twisted eyes
I twisted my sight, I twisted my life
But I was gifted right?, so I'm twistin da mic
One mic, one dream, one pipe one fiend
one life, one king, one man wondering
Whats i like to fail, will the light prevail
To live is to suffer, so life is hell
Reach for the clouds, reach for the stars
Reach for that clout, don't reach for the bars
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blood drips from my pen, yet again, from the light high in the sky i descend
First time...I inhaled the smoke, i started coughin
Started to choke, saw a vision, swimmin in a coffin
Dead zombies, the dead want me, feelin haunt me
Demonic whispers taunt me, angels tried to warn me
I feel it, I mean it, blood i need it, steps repeated
Go long, go strong, like strands on a double helix
Damn son..wtf is going on, too much smoke
Mental overdose, ayo i'm gone
I'm lost in a twisted place, a man wit a cryptic grace
Woman wit a vivid face, i come from a gifted race
River flows, I love the sound, shiver foes, i'm above the clouds
Spit that real shit, even numb minds can feel this
Till when, shit is timeless, cats is mindless, snakes n fakes is spineless
My ink spills when I think ill, leave you twitchin
Words blurr obsurd then you see a vision
Lyrics reflect me perfectly correctly thoughts especially
My journals inferno is eternal internal, even if it fades
n greys on the external
you heard tho, my presence brings a spiritual miracle essence
Only see a part like da moon in the dark showin its crescent
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Mattlocka
10-29-2007, 07:43 PM
That's was ok it not killaarmy type shit but it good.One thing snice you a rapper that been in the game so long how fuck I can get..........the rhythm with biger barz you wirting in.


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brokenpoet718
10-29-2007, 08:52 PM
That's was ok it not killaarmy type shit but it good.One thing snice you a rapper that been in the game so long how fuck I can get..........the rhythm with biger barz you wirting in.


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thanks bro...man its cuz i speed up/slow down wit my flow constantly...and i write the whole bar as one even if its split into 2/3...no worries always on beat, but when ppl read they alwasy ask me that q haha