View Full Version : Preview of my new banger, produced by Devamps

Sleep Sinatra
11-07-2007, 10:58 PM
Slaughtering Fields

still got another verse 2 go

gon b on my upcoming album ''Cousin Of Death..."

which'll b droppin soon

peep dis ruggedness

11-07-2007, 11:22 PM
Definitely feelin the rhymes beat is dope on point so far. The vocals sound off though I can't say why someone with more experience should check this and let you know how to improve that.

Sleep Sinatra
11-07-2007, 11:24 PM
good looks on the feed G.O.D yea the mixdown isnt all that great me and vamps both tried improving that, b4 the album's out tho ima have all my tracks professionally mixed tho
appreciate the feed just wait till ya hear the whole thang !!!


11-08-2007, 12:15 AM
Not that I have any real experience, but I'd say you need to drop high range on the vocals a tad. Otherwise, that was ill yo

Sleep Sinatra
11-08-2007, 09:29 PM
peace for the feedback homie, UPPIN

Sleep Sinatra
11-10-2007, 01:16 AM
so i cant get no love on here huh? uppin.....

Sleep Sinatra
11-11-2007, 12:54 AM
guess it aint "shaolin" enuff....uppin

11-11-2007, 08:33 AM
lol, I feel you, alot of dudes out here ain't checkin' for nobody no more, how the fuck they gonna git love if they ain't showin' none back? go figure, yo Sleep you know what it is, track is bangin' and soon these dudes gonna know what it is, collabo gonna be fire!!! UPPIN for FEED fuckers!!!

11-11-2007, 11:48 AM
this has nice rhyme schemes, and the flow is on point throughout...you out of Lincoln right?..dude we need to collaborate for real in a REAL studio get @ me really...
also check out my first demotape and give me feed @
allright..? peace for now...

11-11-2007, 12:56 PM
Shit is tight. PEace

Sleep Sinatra
11-12-2007, 11:08 AM
props chek, and word mouse hit me wit a pm on some details and shit, lets do sum serious recording yo

Sleep Sinatra
11-13-2007, 11:14 AM

Sleep Sinatra
11-13-2007, 11:12 PM
man i cant get NO love/hate any feed back on this? i kno its my name but please STOP "SLEEPING" fureal .fuck

11-13-2007, 11:41 PM
hahaha dont worry dog wait til they hear the full song