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Colin C.
11-12-2007, 08:31 PM
Yo,

What's good everybody?

I'm always looking for feedback on my music. If you want to check out my song "Sixteen Candles" and let me know what you think that would be nice.

I'm the first MC, the other guy is my boy Burbs.

www.myspace.com/colincmusic

Wu Tang is a big influence for me so I hope you like it!

Peace,

C

Colin C.
11-16-2007, 05:42 PM
what up what up

12weLvE
11-18-2007, 07:54 PM
The beat is real good... Ummm the lyrics are also good, but the flow is a little iffy. Good Job though.

mashqauck
11-19-2007, 12:05 AM
i agree wif chek, tight shit though

$inista
11-19-2007, 03:20 AM
I agree with chek too

When you said “Maybe I was born with it maybe they made me gleam/ I got a crazy team we focus like laser beams” & on to when you said “I got birds behind me” your flow was the best if you flow like that through out the whole song your flow would be tight

Good shit though

FunkDoctorSpock
11-19-2007, 05:31 AM
Dope, thats a good beat too. I agree Chek and Sinista, and with sinista and those lyrics

When you said “Maybe I was born with it maybe they made me gleam/ I got a crazy team we focus like laser beams” & on to when you said “I got birds behind me” your flow was the best if you flow like that through out the whole song your flow would be tight

I agree 100 percent, the laser beams was a good verse.

Colin C.
11-19-2007, 11:45 AM
Good looking out everyone.

I should have new stuff up in the not too distant future.