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KERZO
11-22-2007, 05:09 AM
*This thread is solely for my bars and constructive feedback. Any negative or off-topic replies will be reported*

Chapter 1 - The Beginning

KERZO
11-22-2007, 06:36 AM
Verse one, I begin to immerse, observe the universe
From which these rhymes flow,
I bask in the light which shines and then glows
Thoughts from the Masta Killah, Help me conquer and strike the main pose
I'm the Inventer, I send out rhymes like an ink jet printer
People post them out for the winter....warz,
And of course i endorse the mic like a wu-tang consort
I never resort to making mistakes in my quotes
Slice the notes, magical staff
I Laugh when niggaz come up to me and i cut em in half
Your just a minor threat to the chief of staff
Mics blast, tests passed, dead hand of the past...

KERZO
11-22-2007, 06:39 AM
heres one i did earlier... :vroar:

I start to spit forth, then backtrack the rap,
My mind contracts infectious verses, now give me the silver plaque,
I enforce the verse like a gravitational force,
That appears when you change the main source,
Straight back to the point score,
Call Me the chameleon, I drop from the ceiling,
My style is so different, it almost seems unappealing,
The way that I slack, My mouth seems wack,
You get freaked out like an anxiety attack,
My epiphany is this,
I en-cite bliss over the oceanic abyss from which you fall,
Your crew is fighting like they're in the city of nepal,
I spin you round like a roulette ball, brawl, call, maul, scrawl, an enthrawl,
Here comes the curtain call, now digest,
Blessed is the higher man, self professed, your second best,
Stand up straight for the test son,
You score high but i score higher than i desire,
I acquire the rights to require the neutralization fire,
I pop up like kid glove and drop these bombs,
Like sheepish lord of chaos,all from above.

KERZO
11-23-2007, 11:08 AM
I drop off into a tangent, line of descent
Words blend together and fuse like cement
To a greater extent I cause port traumatic stress
Then i begin to blast through doors like a natural event
I'm like contortion,consider proportion
Niggaz feel distorion, and make em take an abortion
Rhymes freeze up the cords,all across the boards
Swords fly faster than wu-tang chords...peace

Hellspawn
11-23-2007, 11:34 AM
nice drop bro'

KERZO
11-23-2007, 11:58 AM
I lyrical flex, bust shit like onyx
just call me the fermex who dons specs
I'ma like a mixer between the decks
demand respect, complex imaginative brainwaves
I dig graves for wiggaz in the projects
my style is uniform, i break through the norm
lighting bolts strike forth son,they come straight from my storm
I misinform statuettes, who get upset
while you get mauled by the killah bee swarm

peace

KERZO
11-28-2007, 11:59 AM
'J.T.S spits the truth, like a suicide bomber in a new york phone booth,
He hits those lyrics like a new age babe ruth,
Cram in the plan, as I slam the mic just like a battering ram,
Call me the doctor, I watch night hawks like a police spotter
I impede on your turf like a city street squatter
Then i roll over verse's like curse's, for which you wish you'd never seen
In between my obscene routine, eat fine cuisine
The unseen never watch, like scotch, i burn your throat like a bright torch
Peace out, grab crotch, distraught mind thoughts'

KERZO
11-28-2007, 12:00 PM
Quite outpoken, my words leave you shattered and broken
You put your best rhymes forth but all you got was a token
Of my appreciation,personification of your misinterpretation
My words will confuse people all across the nation of earth
My style is holy like the virgin birth, now sit back and listen
I glisten like a crystal while you all start reminiscing about the value of self
Homies jump back on the shelf while i attack with these stealth verses
No rehearses is how i do it, i will never quit
cos my outspoken shit is always legit

KERZO
11-29-2007, 11:55 AM
My rhymes spin round like helicopter propellers
Producers dont buy into this shit cos they know better
My verses get straight to point, right to the last letter
Sonic Phonics make niggaz hit the chronic
Diatonic first harmonics digitize shit with electronics
and symphonic waves turn angels into demonic slaves
pulsating waves blast through like heatwaves
My rhymestyle is so deep it even correlates down in caves
But dont listen to me cos i talk shit all day anyways

....peace

KERZO
12-03-2007, 11:02 AM
just ma last verse from the 'kill the guy above ya' thread....

I trick homies into deeper shit
They ask for it
My Raps overstyle their licks
Then I attack them with the basic instinct ice pick
I dislodge myself from your rhymes
Then dodge ya about a hundred million times
Sometimes i cross lines, then blow up like landmines
The abstract minds catch the designs that i throw out
And without my creative thoughts, they catch the drought
Now think about the way that i build my clout
Niggaz shout out cos they dont understand what im trying to spout

KERZO
12-05-2007, 05:28 AM
I bust wicked lines on many niggaz minds
I'm spraying mad rhymes just like a garden hose
Peeps pose in their drawers, Cos they think they know
But they aint got a clue and expose their weak blows
I suppose i better come out and excite the crowd
Marauder is proud when he spits mad loud
But he aint got style which his wack lyrics shroud
And i blow him up....BOOM... like a mushroom cloud

KERZO
12-05-2007, 05:45 AM
Fermex has arrived
Wolves beat on ma mind
I outshine the rest
Now, get back in line
The abstract kind
Is what i try to find
but cats cant work out my kung fu style
But ya'll catch me later
I'm the god piece creator
the greater of good
from the pop rock hater
but your indecipherable so go and get a translator
while i bust out my flow, now listen to the narrator

KERZO
12-06-2007, 11:59 AM
Fake MC's take turns to flare up and get burned
But i earned many techniques that ya'll havent learned
It's the return of the abstract achiever
I leave ya unwell like you got congo fever
Believe me, It's a matter of fact
My rhymes impact like a Rock from space
And now i grace this forum and replace
The knowledge of a rap thats taken the place
So embrace the style and don't take it at face value :dududu:

KERZO
12-10-2007, 09:21 AM
A'yo lets battle
I light rappers up like a candle
I dangle ya ass from an obscure angle
Now bow fool, while you get surprised by my new wave
Mental state, you better work hard while you stay up late
So watch me blow these niggaz straight off of the main stage
From which they stand on, Pass the mic then i rhyme strong
I bring along the weird shit like i'm in hong kong
I look more beastly than king kong in a tight thong
But i never take this motherfucking skill for granted
I tear mic's up while ya'll slackers get disbanded
Your way off land, got lost and most stranded
You try to work me out til your mind thoughts get expanded
ya'll felt astounded, more than before
My uniqeness is the thing that you adore
It penetrates the ground straight to the earth's core
while ya'll get prepared for another years winter war

KERZO
12-12-2007, 05:56 AM
(From the freestyle thread)

A'yo check it...

Get up on deck,
Here comes the infamous fermex
I perplex niggaz with my complex lyrical threats
I bust ma glass specs
when i'm having raw sex...with ya mom
I bomb her ass like i was in Vietnam
Camo painted don, I creep up on ya set
These rhymes look shifty like a murder suspect
My illogical mind sets the mass distractions
The Hip-Hop faction just laughs at my shit
I submit my thesis on my close nit wit
But i gotta prove nothing cause all of it's legit
Rappers freeeeeze up when i get lit
Up...and down, i be the renown
Take a blast of the bong, then i pass it all around
Never smoke caramel brown, son, that aint down
I laugh at fake MC's cos they're just clowns
First degree rated, I tease and make you say please
My rhymes are so cold they put ya'll in a deep freeze
You cant understand my words like i was chinese
Raps over now boy so get out before i reprise :satisfy:

singodsuperior
12-12-2007, 09:01 PM
your wordplay is ill

KERZO
12-14-2007, 05:29 AM
cheers for the props :hooray:

KERZO
12-14-2007, 07:00 AM
Im the chief exonerator, For whom all of you accuse
I expess mad views which ya'll aint got clues
As to who...what...where or when
My rhymes hail from, storming straight from my pen
Rappers get battered cos they're adynamic
But my panoramic performance left them broke like ceramic
Plates that crashed and made bitches start a panic
I Burn them over like i was volcanic
But they come back for more, cos they think they're smart
And so they end up getting their shirt ripped apart
By my fermex heart, I battle MC's, then i slap their wicked smile
Right Off their face, cos they aint got no grace
In my presence, I embrace, all known forms of race
I got the patience of ghandi
Lyrical flexing is my modus operandi
My style is wild and i think ya'll agree
Tearing mics up, I be the beguiled emcee
Niggaz advocating my style which branches out like trees
Freestyle's over kid go and listen to your Jermaine Dupri CD

KERZO
12-14-2007, 11:57 AM
I make MC's go blind with my style that shines
So bright and unlined, ya'll get entwined
I define my tactics, like russian asthmatics
Starting all types of shit, all sorts of conflicts
'Whats this' you ask, it be my brownie mix
That makes ya flip, mental thoughts evil minds depicts
Johnny B way out far cos he lives in the sticks
So he'll be back soon, quick, lock up yer kids
But that subjects taboo, and i gotta pursue
To piss ya'll off and make ya say thank-you
Cos you see what i do, styles made up like new
Rhymes you aint seen before, so dont make much ado
But i come at ya like tyson, vocal charm's the tool
I'll freeze ya like an icicle while your out riding yer bicycle fool

KERZO
12-17-2007, 08:43 AM
I wait while emcees spit vile hostile shit
My spits flip quicker than yer girls french knicks
So dont, try to rip up the chart
Rappers getting jealous cos i mastered the art

To tear apart yer heart, and impart the worse craft
Big Kiff uses no math when he cuts phonies in half
I never falter with my first relative draft
My style is way much better, I'm way up the graph

99.9 is where i be
I'm never gonna drop cos i have the mentality
To say what i mean and what i mean to say
Is that I can drop these bombs on ya every day

I give up on trying to work out the nature of man
Cos i aint got the time to wake em up and understand
So you take over command, nothing goes as planned
But Im like boxing on demand, I play out like a marching band

J.T.S.
12-17-2007, 12:21 PM
Fiery red garment on, as i bury brigades in the Garden
Drunken monkmen warring, all city storming
Mornings i rise, busting berettas in bedstuy
Nooses dangle from my strange fruit fly
Birthed the truth, after i fucked reality on a project roof
85 percent want wisdom, knock out ya tooth
In the desert storming troops, peel out in a coupe
Prostitutes give me head in court
Tell em i lost the loot, walk in my shoe theory
Hard rocks fear, def jam's nightmare
Spit this, then disappear, on fire electric glare
Digging in brains, break ankles, wrists
Push spears through pricks, hit em with bricks
Rap poker with the chips, i'am what i'am spits
Hated Wutang's gravel pit
Glock holding when i travel ,trips
Tools errupt the ooze
these Benson kids shining my shoes
the victor of marvelous duels

KERZO
12-18-2007, 06:56 AM
Cheers for the added verse J.T.S... :thumbup:

Here's a rhyme i made up about 10 mins ago while listening to the 'execute them' instrumental beat at work -

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Ya'll felt hostility, by my nobel ability
I swing swords with quick ninja agility
My verse has begun, incase ya'll didnt see
I rhyme smarter than a mensa member, times 3
Throw lyrics at ya, like a rock, dust chalk
Lines around ya body, So shut up and don't talk
When i speak, ya'll freak back to last week
My unique technique confuses ya'll like ancient greek
Everytime i rap it creates an explosion in my head
Ya'll dread to write props in this wicked thread
Never tread into my zone, homegrown ganja helps mics get blown
By my words that are universally widespread but unknown
To the masses, My insights spread over the land like ashes
While your shit verse crashes and splashes
I'm blind to your threats and not because i wear glasses
---------------------------------------

KERZO
01-02-2008, 06:01 AM
I intervene in your theme like a hyped crack fiend
Smoking abstract pipes that ya'll can't clean
THC in me by brown block or green tree
Tearing rappers down to the ground like debris
Phonies raise the stakes, but could'nt behave
Thinking they own the shop, but couldnt even own a cave
so dont act like yer brave chamberslave
now watch as i bitchslap ya straight down to the grave

singodsuperior
01-02-2008, 11:28 AM
Lol

KERZO
01-03-2008, 08:58 AM
Ayo, Take a deep breath sir, Theres no need to pretend
I'll be puffing green hitting bongs, Numero ten
Collect pipes that belo smoke all accross the land
Pussy rappers never understand how i can be so grande

I'm back after new year, My head now rested
My throne's still empty cos it's ne-ver con-tested
The best form of flow is the one man show
But dumb motherfuckers can't get it cos they slow

John doe they are head made of bread dough
Their faces getting slapped like they were a dutch ho
Now although you try, you shall never bestow
Chateau flow glow, Wicked rhymes starting to grow

My absract concept moves around like chess pieces
That increases my ability to rap more vague
Insights controlled by soundwaves, that some can only brave
I'm the free spirit 'dave' and your just beatnut slave

KERZO
01-03-2008, 09:11 AM
Sych, why do i write so bright?
I launch rhymes higher than the virgin space flight
Phonies ignite up like candles in the moonlight
They'll get set alight or blown out for the night

What makes a revered MC? that ya'll try to portray
Is it the words they spit or the way they convey
The thoughts in their mind that spark then rush away
Rappers spitting out words like they got nothing to say

Why is it so hard to break the fuck through?
I don't give a shit so long as i stay true
To my artform that creates the virtue
In which I relish and then try to outdo

Wu-Tang taught me knowledge that I attest
They show it's not what we say but we digest
Poetry is art that hip-hop manifests
Blend them both together and you'll truly feel blessed

KERZO
01-04-2008, 06:00 AM
Make way for the 'Mex, Rhymes fly like jets
All threats are made, Raise the stakes, Plaise yer bets
Spice the flow, Five a bro, Never blow or tip-toe
Keep it low, Have'nt slowed since the day that I rose

My tongue installs fear on all these cats ya hear
I never stress out cos I'm always rapping which blesses
And i smoke green every single day, It never messes
With my head cos it's screwed on like lead

I attack ya with a spike and strike the mic out ya hand
Your verses are criminal, Lyrically put on remand
I offhand rhymes quicker than ya bitch sucks dicks
pre-occupied by a underated kung fu flick

Minds expands like a shingon moon
I bend styles easier than Uri Geller bends spoons
Raps finished, I've addressed all I have to son
So til next time, Sit back and spark a big one

singodsuperior
01-04-2008, 07:59 PM
hahahahahaha....I fucks wit the flow

KERZO
01-08-2008, 10:05 AM
Ayo It's the fermi paradox, I send out tectonic seismic shocks
More larger than the Mississippi River valley rocks
I switch guise then scale high rise's to the sky like spiderman
My plans are contrary to the Ku Klux Klan
They dont breed hate, they spread the message of the Fam
Which was created and nurtured by the wutang clan
In the darker days, they're who i listened to
When shit got deep, The Wu truly pulled me through

Now I'm back in the fold, verses draped in gold
They catch and stranglehold fiends who got mis-sold
Hip-hop in the state of grace and now they show face
But it aint about the brash cash, it's based on race
So dig deep and search ya heart til ya find
The affirmation of a different culture's state of mind
You can change yourself but heaven forbid
You'll work out that we're all simply human kid

J.T.S.
01-09-2008, 07:20 AM
What's up paradox just a little battle rap check it

on entrance I perform poetic pestilence, poison your brain each sentence
my flows show excellence diabolically designed to drain your intelligence
i was heaven sent and never hesitant to use you in my insane experiments
im the shit, you just excrement that I be breaking down to basic elements
spit raps that smack you back into relapse and collapse ya home residence
your styles about as popular as a gas price rise of twenty seven cents
i stand delivering syllable ridicules that switch your vital signs to critical
making riddles steadily killing this fool with my subliminal lyrical miracles
your in the ring with a word wizard spittin’ wisdom with surgeon precision
making an incision ripping your shit out the system cos when I listen
to the shit you spittin’ all I see is a lack of grey matter, not a rapper
cos the fact of the matter is my brain swagger stab a emcee like a dagger

KERZO
01-10-2008, 06:57 AM
What's up paradox just a little battle rap check it

on entrance I perform poetic pestilence, poison your brain each sentence
my flows show excellence diabolically designed to drain your intelligence
i was heaven sent and never hesitant to use you in my insane experiments
im the shit, you just excrement that I be breaking down to basic elements
spit raps that smack you back into relapse and collapse ya home residence
your styles about as popular as a gas price rise of twenty seven cents
i stand delivering syllable ridicules that switch your vital signs to critical
making riddles steadily killing this fool with my subliminal lyrical miracles
your in the ring with a word wizard spittin’ wisdom with surgeon precision
making an incision ripping your shit out the system cos when I listen
to the shit you spittin’ all I see is a lack of grey matter, not a rapper
cos the fact of the matter is my brain swagger stab a emcee like a dagger

good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

And from a different angle, is where i hail from
Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...

KERZO
01-10-2008, 07:45 AM
I got the mic-phone on deck, so watch my steez
Rapping like wu more every day, I aim to please
But i don't mean to do it, It's just the way that i am
Spitting true to the fam.....But on plan
Then I flip the script, maestro flows simply disturbed
I gotta adapt to any verse that my eyes incur
Paint splur, artistic hand blur
You ever see a scottish dude rap so superb

So i go local, bust like I'm a ned
I go och aye the noo, while i'm eating shortbread
Never wear tartan, i dont live in a castle
Everyone carries blades but i get no hassle
No hot spells, In these city streets i dwell
It aint bad as the states, but it got the same smell
So no matter where i'm from, were all one and the same
And i still got a story to tell

J.T.S.
01-10-2008, 09:42 AM
[quote=Fermi Paradox;1019503]good verse J.T.S...heres the reverse attack -

A'yo I Inflate then instigate ya rhymes and await the comeback
But ya never came cos ya lame but ma brain's lyrically waxed
Switchback'in cats who be messing with my flow
My persona's aglow in this dim lit show
I endevour to jump up and smash up ya set
I'll agent orange ya mind like a viet war vets
So lets inject some unpleasantness into this battle
I dismantle ya armour like a scholar's burrning candle

And from a different angle, is where i hail from
Where the norm is knife killing, the blade method son
So dont pretend, yer tougher than me
Lyrical ice torpedoes make ya vocal chords freeze
And then i bust a move thinking that i'm jet li
Blowing vault's open with my verbal mic assault
Now step apart from the art cos yer wide of the mark
This is the example, that ya follow when you embark...


Niceness!! keep crafting, and blasting!
You got some ill darts

KERZO
01-11-2008, 08:05 AM
cheers mang

KERZO
01-14-2008, 11:36 AM
Night sky, eyes bright, open wide,
Never hide, mental thoughts collide, sparks create
Death, Fear, Love all relate
Instate your true feelings or be forced out the state

Greater good of man is kicked out the gate
We all have dreams that we have to chase
But some are out of pace, and fade into space
While some get obsessed by their slow haste

Symbol of fortune, graphic torture, flowers in bloom
Took shrooms 'n' felt doom, omens backward in tunes
Radio beam fires me up when I shoot the moon
Sparks ignite from the mic when I electrify the room

Magnets attract abstract passages in my brain
Manifesting electroscope optics, intelligently insane
I'm the mad radical weed smoking beat criminal
Was meant for rap since i was cut from the umbillical

KERZO
01-15-2008, 11:48 AM
Contemplate the blood hawk, Sharp thought
Brought up to believe that my lifes' not drawn in chalk
Glimpse of death I step back and take my last breath
Never bred for this, but still I impress the rest

Sparage in the ring'll leave ya bloodage'd up
Corrupt fuck, devil's luck'll get a blade in ya gut
So watch out for the kick down style to chase
I create mad space for my rhymes to lay to waste

Any MC can phone me any day, they just say
And i'll come and overturn their turf any day
You made the mistake but never made the distinction
Everyone can see that yer words are not so convincing

Appropriate action, diabolical transactions
Installing fear in irrational notorious factions
Max traction, Darts fly like martians, over clouds
Your never allowed on the mic so get back in the crowd

singodsuperior
01-15-2008, 12:33 PM
ILL AS USUAL MY MAN THIS IS AN OLD VERSE I CAM ACROSS:

Equipped with intelligence in my mine you're irrelevant
quietly spread like pestilence givin heat to bullshit lessons
chemically unbalanced wasn't a challenge put that to silence
it's hard to see my people being suspects and victims to violence
if it ain't one thing its a fuckin nutha
my brain is like a labrinth equipped wit chambers
understand that its dangerous
my game is blameless in its age everything I say is on the page
I'm in triple-staged darkness with unformed atoms
my consciousness never escapes from me the relativity of my delivery is the shit
its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat
In my shoes you'll find dead demons hibernatin' within your kingdom
slay'em to purify the complextion of your spirit

KERZO
01-16-2008, 04:37 AM
cheers for the post singod...heres a lil verse i just wrote after reading yours -

Ill equipped with darts that emit
Ferocious verses that reinforces mic's, when i submit the shit
I was skin and bones, but now mic-phones get owned
Phonies throwing rocks at me cos they act like flintstones

So i make cats grin with my shaolin UK spin
Haters get chopped up by blades and worn like animal skins
In a min, i'll begin, then you'll see the full force
Of my verbal assault, straight back to the point source

singodsuperior
01-16-2008, 11:38 PM
ill shit, its better than mind to tell the truth.

KERZO
01-17-2008, 04:50 AM
You write some ill words aswell, i really liked this part in your last flow ...

"its always complex when i spit i hit like a thousand comets
sonic compatiblities but niggas never feel me
celestial to my galaxy divine presence involuntary
Independance is bitter sweet but is still a treat"

you like when cats switch between abstract and statemental verses..keep up the good work |)

KERZO
01-18-2008, 07:00 AM
My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock
Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop
I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
At the bottom is where the low end of the gene pool hang around
Surround sound underground but ya'll nowhere to be found

It's the renowned Fermex, so light up ya cigarettes
The ones with the weed in em, best not forget
I smoke a bong before i walk out on stage and shock
With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme
Mind god spirit duality than most cats aint never seen

KERZO
01-18-2008, 07:01 AM
Sceptics inspect my injected methods
Most prophetic style, Fermex snaps the hectics
The next hit will wreck ships and make 'em go under
When thunder strikes the heart of the butter boy wonder

I disregard your words and tear apart your verse
Reimburse yer mom a mil, cos ya must've been a curse
Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying

Abstractly led sheep with blades that their coats dread
The next wave of words that shred the thread and made the readers bled
Good stead i keep, I smoke green all week
While my girl gives me head with her unique technique

Superspeaking diatones microphones get blown up
I interrupt the speaker and make an abrupt cut
So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet

KERZO
01-22-2008, 08:24 AM
Ayo, enter the paradox, vivid visions unseen
corrupting clean minds with blind obscene routines
I'm like a mic fighting machine, ripping out phonies spleens
If you believe the hype then your mind must be keen

I reinstated the scene,That ya cats thought was dead
The absract prospect that make ya snap back ya heads
In respect of the beat, ya'll move your feet
Then i nail em to the floor with unchartered technique

The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
My style shining bright like the star city of orion

Himalayan foot stomp, the swamp world will take notice
When my rap style blooms like the flowers of a lotus
Fermex chants that grant the avid listener a ticket
To a world thick with intellect that leave dumb mc's upset

J.T.S.
01-23-2008, 10:39 AM
My sharp darts spit faster than a MK rifle
I stifle all talent and send it off the eiffel
Tower top drop, I chop up haters around the clock(niceness)
Dead ahead, stop, saved from a potential drop(like how the line above flows into this one!)
I make phonies quake when they make the mistake
Brainsick styles cured from the eternal lake
phew fiyah fam!

With rhymes that kill swifter than a red-tailed hawk
Paradox abstract thoughts, tie knots, bred a scotsman
I stand up and get counted as a man with no suntan
But i'm closer to the american dream, a fan of the supreme($ lines of rawness there!)

Crazy paving, lazing in grazing lands while wood engraving
Enslaving minds with my witty mouth, silver spraying
Nice!

So i heal wounds with bandages and fortune manages
To erupt and cause mass damages all across the planet
Whew good imagery there!

The weak will sneak up and speak critique every week
So i slap them bitches back to the capital of mozambique
With the full force of a lion, with dull rappers admiring
My style shining bright like the star city of orion
More ill ass imagery, and lines are tight, keep writing fam.

KERZO
01-24-2008, 07:22 AM
cheers for the feedback j.t.s, i've started freestyling over different types of beats so that should help change my rap style in future flows....but like all of ya'll, i'm always learning....

KERZO
01-31-2008, 10:02 AM
I step up to the castle, knock in the front doors
slapping monks faces raw with my golden oars
Breaking jaws in half, cuttin mic's with mad craft
No math to add, cos ya brains smashed on hash

I feel sorry for cats who think candy wraps are the bomb
Plastic bin backs and black tyres is where resin hails from
Mixed in skips for the pricks to make easy dough quick
Depth test, size stick, blinded by my card tricks

Aces swap their places while ya'll talking about races
Mixing colours together and putting haters in their places
Forming fresh styles, My mind'll keep going for miles
Inserting smiles on tiles, shipped to the british isles

Scottish born and head strong, My legacy will live on
And you'll still be reading til my threads are withdrawn
So in retrospect, i attempted to show you what im worth
I span the earth over a lifetime and resurrect myself at birth

J.T.S.
01-31-2008, 10:09 AM
I step up to the castle, knock in the front doors
slapping monks faces raw with my golden oars
Breaking jaws in half, cuttin mic's with mad craft
No math to add, cos ya brains smashed on hash
Niceness ecspecially the last 2 lines!!

Mixed in skips for the pricks to make easy dough quick
Depth test, size stick, blinded by my card tricks
Nice wordplay there..

So in retrospect, i attempted to show you what im worth
I span the earth over a lifetime and resurrect myself at birth
And these two lines are the icing on the cake.

J.T.S.
01-31-2008, 10:19 AM
Sonic beams hit regime's by any means of exile
Docile..crazy water raps running river nile
Tap heads Saviour Glover style..exceptional executions
Foundation built from enemie skulls..full cemetary solutions..
No exceptions for MMA fighters break their mid-sections
Desperado concerto..zoro slash half the masses
bloodflows in the basins fast..J.T.S. stole Jason's mask..
Brawls after card games..diamonds snatched..and aces smashed..
Dimmer the lights..as we rhyme and break night..nocturnal knights..
Village pillaging experts..blood from knecks squirt..
Show cats how this gillete works..birthed in the Garden of Eden..
Eating emcee's before i started teething..
On fire arson..burning brigade season..heavy boulder holder..
Colder soldiers stashed in freezers..immaculate rhyme writer..
Followers follow the leader..

KERZO
02-04-2008, 09:36 AM
Sonic beams hit regime's by any means of exile
Docile..crazy water raps running river nile
(killer intro as usual)

Tap heads Saviour Glover style..exceptional executions
Foundation built from enemie skulls..full cemetary solutions..
(like the imagery on that)

Show cats how this gillete works..birthed in the Garden of Eden..
Eating emcee's before i started teething..
(always injectin humour in ya lines)


Well on with a lil freestyle -

I come citing fine wicked writing with charasmatic lines
Connecting duel parallel minds in futuristic dark times
I break ya necks from ya spines then reconnect them back together
With the parts that we find when you've survived the weather
Taking out mankind with the biggest bomb ya can find
We operate a covert team, aint no-one can find
A single fault in us, It's just because
we got a special talent thats just so glorious
Under ultra violet lights, scoping victs at night
Phonies quake in their boots when we ignite on the mic
We disastrous, to stand up to us, ya gotta be brave
With massive waves that caused masses of un-named graves
To appear on stage before MC's even spray
So i say, work rest and play, every single day

KERZO
02-05-2008, 07:19 AM
I enter the zone and barrage the microphone
Holding my own, bombardin, dive-bombin homes
I roam hillsides and capitalise where vocal tribes hide
Roadsidin dead MC's cos they getting the hard shoulder

I smoulder the stage with napalm, but stay colder
Than any phony patroller, call me 'Dave the chrome phone controller'
Holding golden bombs to terrorise the lines while downin cola
I'm the scottish killa bee, the buzzin cousin over ya shoulder

With 'Ted B' schizophrenic mind guise technique
Scoop out ya eyes once i've tied up ya feet
I split ya in half when i subtract yer math, I aint got no empath
For any cats who act like brats, they getting slapped

With the toosh, always koosh with the mighy bush
Me and my main man Kiff used to down the death juice
Smoking tubes, platoonin, cos were the team that produced
Jewels that awe the school where we teach ya'll the rules

KERZO
02-13-2008, 07:58 AM
I up-funk the monk and smoke a bucket with skunk
They call me the hunk hulk drunk dunking punks in car trunks
Your styles shrunk up and ducks askin was'up with ya body strut
In my city, people feel cold steel cut gut, so mouths stay shut
Scheme girl sluts emiting gluttoned smut, watch out for head-butts
I'm set like a bolt while you turn like a greased wing nut
Launching the mic of ya head which cracks like a pistachio nut
My styles uncut, while yours ends suddenly abrubt...

KERZO
02-13-2008, 09:53 AM
Chapter 2 - Switch-Up

KERZO
02-18-2008, 07:58 AM
I bust mad rhymes like nothing ya ever seen
Smoke so much weed they call me 'glaswegian evergreen'
The mean lean DTR grown up into a mad lad combined
Shining brighter than a buddha munk drunk on red wine

You can never trust a lesser ape, i take shape, create tapes then escape
While your leaving girls claiming mandatory statutory rape
Sauvingnon grape over sexy babes which is what i simply excel
I propell shells that swell ya head and blow it off to hell

Oh well, drifting off as usual, I never straighten out
Shit is well thought out my style is beyond any single doubt
Seperatin out the fake MC's, day in and day out
Staying true to the Fam cos thats whats it's all about

I thrill before i come in for the kill, trip the fantastic light
Grip the mic tight i demonstrate fine skills that succeed to excite
I'm bloody like ted bundy on a black monday and someday ima strike
So ya better watch out cos i might switch guise and gouge out yer eyes

Returning to planet earth, landing on site, fusion rebirth, media circus
Aint not a single per i can ever trust, and not a cat can hurt us

KERZO
02-22-2008, 05:17 AM
:mexico:

I take the time to rest in between
your bitches tits, they get covered in sweet D cream
all abreast, my test is to rush the front door
and take out all haters in one quick fatal blow
I entice the mic device but the best dont know me
Cos they're rapping in clubs while i be setting minds free
by the lake, i awake next to my own body
i flip this verse like it was my favourite hobby
dont get carried away on this compound sound
I'm usually found in crowded bunkers underground
people looking like clowns looking for the ideal
but i make em squeal when they feel my cold steel
I make em stress, so they attest, but at best, I'm no less
Than the next MC on the mic sweatin and gettin blessed
There's no contesting the fact that I can rise above
So I praise wu-tang for showing me the universal love
I kill on the mic but it aint no crime
Beat slayin, mind playing, lets just pretend you can rhyme

KERZO
02-25-2008, 07:34 AM
Short Freestyle to Mef's Uh-Huh Remix Intrumental

yeah, yo...

I mock all combatants at notorious armageddon events
Trailing mellifluous* grape lines that stew up and ferment
Inventing new vocal shapes for you to try to relate
To what i gotta spray, I switch poles like i'm running a relay

Crack ya dome wit the chrome batton, watch me strike ya ass home
Microphone rapping tome as i roam, holding my head as my own
Wu-Tang have shown me the unknown, spirits wrapped up in balms
Glowing in sight, testing oppresive ingenious neutralistic bombs
In futuristic qualms, we fight with the might of mecha ants enlarged
As I bombard, I leave ya scarred cos my rhymes are fully supercharged
Don't disregard my devine service or i'll catch ya mind off guard
And watch you repel cos your force is neg-a-tively charged

My main aim is to maintain my delicate state of my brain
Cos my thoughts travel faster than a japanese bullet train
Searchin terrain where i obtain the rights to conquor domains
I discover new campaigns that phonies cant seem to contain
Overshadow'in and blood damagin, breaking fools, then unraveling
Spools with tools, I break all written rules, without travelling
To any state of grace, My verses enclose my surreal magic
My life's goes from strength to steel while yours stays sad & tragic

I mock all combatants at notorious armageddon events
Trailing mellifluous grape lines that stew up and ferment
Inventing new vocal shapes for you to try to relate
To what i gotta spray, I switch poles like i'm running a relay


--------------------------------------
just for the dreds -

*mellifluous = Pleasing to the ear
--------------------------------------

J.T.S.
03-01-2008, 09:14 AM
Why fam get banned??

Divine King
03-06-2008, 07:10 AM
Yeah, Why did Ferm get banned?

He would something like this on here -

Zigga zig zag zig, I swing side from side like a clock pendulum
Rhymin more slick than that skinny cock eminem
Babtising niggaz with jaeger and makin em say amen
cause judgement day and leave ya lives condemned

Returning from the barren land, branding a grande mic stand
I intercept the light sceptre, heron mind, large wing span
Open books like stone tablets, hide props with sleight of hand
Never contrite, my shit stays tight, while yours is quite bland

:mexico:

KERZO
03-06-2008, 10:38 AM
fuck knows JTS..that divine king's got some good spits...:mexico:

KERZO
03-11-2008, 06:48 AM
poop

J.T.S.
03-12-2008, 01:46 PM
Post up in close up, below zero flow, all foes froze up
Get down duck buckshots, making the band killer Diddy popped
No pity cops faces blown with gritty glocks
Fuck a shitty watch, reps big like titties hot
Electrify avenues, anyone 3 feet of me shocked
I might hop off the scotch, and shoot a cat in his crotch
3 deep like the Lox, beat em with locks before they grab the ox

KERZO
03-13-2008, 07:30 AM
Chapter 3 - Backos

KERZO
03-17-2008, 10:44 AM
grace the stage like jimmy page then mace yer face age
I engage niggaz like streets of rage, but on page

KERZO
03-25-2008, 03:09 AM
The kid walked up and asked ya one twenty questions
You stay guessing while I reply you with the essence
Refine unclaimed power, Define golden hours
Remindin knowledge is only as fragile as a flower
Why do part time lifers and sleepy head eighty-fivers
Can never break the solid gilded god cypher
I dont know, so i stand here to prove and show
Breakin genres like munsters breakin through the doors....nigga

KERZO
04-01-2008, 07:47 AM
...Ayo, I wreck homes, roam with planes, divebombin domes
Zoning and outperformin, Reversin amatory poems
I throw 'em like datsuns, Set the thatchems stretching
Into enough sections, You could split em into fractions
With cut-throat distractions, I'm shackling up yer max men
I blow up trees with my wacky backy tax slap a packy
Niggaz are slapped happy, When I'm repping on he map as jap chappy
Get a wiff of my wam bam, Spank the funky dam grande
Monkey palm, Fuck sheep like uncle sam while slicing up lambs
On the mic-a-tola, My toxic aroma sends eighty-fivers into comas
Hold the blower cos I'm kicking bolo's out & about in roma
While sipping cola and jack dan as johnny jam, On the funky boat
I slice ho's into pieces, So their bodies won't stay afloat
Stoke the fire with a pound of weed smoke, I aint a liar
Just see my supply expire faster than yer rudimentary joke
Cos to no see is to no spoke, So blow green blunt toke
Up see my man Dan, His thin skinny ass just broke
A bone sticky out poke, With a collection of tomes that i wrote
And my parallel self raps so well that I decided to cut my own throat

KERZO
04-03-2008, 10:46 AM
Ayo, I rap so well I expel the chief exonerator
Nigga, your a masturbator translator
I dominate the state cos I'm 'Dave the Great'
Your threads disintergrate under my mental weight

AW! with so much force, I'm knocking planets off course
Antennae's recieving remote codes from the source
I hit ya with the fist of the dragon
Nigga just imagine your body that I'm dragging

Through the dirt, Interupt court conducts through air ducts
Disrupt currupt fucks with enough green to kiff em up
When i spliff up, niggaz see my chest weaze up
My head freezes when I skim the breeze

Continuing to get high on the path which my life lays
I never give a fuck what anybody says, then sprays
Cos I keep on stomping lakes with insane melovence
Brain relevance is currupted, and distinctly out to convince

...word

KERZO
04-13-2008, 12:49 PM
Yeah, I light up buckets and get Kazied like the Japs
Conquerin battle tracks on a momentary relapse
You can't smelt the vocal gold I bring, The 'Divine King'
Mathematically conjuring stings with waves I'm channeling

Wisdom & understanding, Mic cord hung, Now I'ma swing
Choke ya throat, Never seen a court date, Report a ring
They never see me cos I'm holding it tight, They stay searchin
For me all night, But i keep my white ass outta sight

So I flip the Mic and hit it off the twenty ton sound
Surrounded my ten Shaolin monks, Wu-Tang nowhere to be found
These niggas are only out there for themselves
Aint't no pussy gonna help ya when ya fighting by yourself

Ya get put on the shelf with the other weak brethren delves
So remove oneself from all external events, The five percent nation
Dumb, death and blind cats vacating the stations
Slappin many Manchu's while you can only manage a few


Wisdom & you represents the eternal Wu....peace

KERZO
04-17-2008, 07:02 AM
I split apart my counterparts, before they can steal
The ideals of a culture ruled by steel, prone to heel

Call me the divine king, Matchin earths six sixtillion tons
I wake up at the god hour, darts spittin from ma tongue

Smoke a bong and go in for a quick shower, Return to my set
I'm a gravedigga nigga flaming tha 85 Percent, of those

Who step on my toes, I blow em away, foot up rectum
I swing their mental state into another spectrum

I neck em before i deck em, Aint no protectin em
So step aside, As i grab the mic holding device

I entice interplanetary advice, I'm so concise,
Niggaz be dropping the asking price cos i make em think twice

Or they be getting their necks stretched in woodworking vice's
Ya'll should be acting polite, even tho I aint Brooklyn, N-Y

I still plan on getting just a high, So unfold yer eyes
And realise that we on the same side, Drop ya guard

Cats thinking its hard to show their cards, holding four Hearts
Bathe in the thermal spring, a natural gathering

Haters be throwing punches from the side of the boxing ring
But I'll be slaughtering buffalo wings, so watch nigga, before I swing

KERZO
04-29-2008, 06:15 AM
Breezeblockin, transporting arms set to explode
Ten ton mode built like a war tank for the road
I rose as the Fermex from a planetory being
The absract eye in the sky thats all seeing

Any sort of threat, You can never ditect
This sort of unique elaborate effect
I storm the horizon in a jet, set off an A bomb
That causes a global catastrophic event

Houses blown down to the ground, leaving yer face a frown
Why don't ya go and sell your brown ass for a pound
Global logistical immobilize dosiles
Splitting crime files with compiled exiles

Spit like tex the rex with canine sunshine smiles
I kill peadophiles, exposing nuts that drew them in
Moving knappers to homes and holdin them from within
Wordplay like swordplay on anyday, is what i say..

Before you say nay, take word then melt your head away
Cooling minds like ocean spray, But more liquid
When I rip shit, squit hits the pan faster than my balls did
Keep ya head up kid, ain't nobody forced it down the toilet lid

Unda_Fiya
04-29-2008, 08:24 AM
WORD UP BOYO! thats seriously keeping it real for the UK, cheers for the comments man, am loving your style, boys got mad skillz, would hate to come across you on the battle scene man, RESPECT! no doubt, Peezsout.

KERZO
04-30-2008, 07:02 AM
cheers fam :thumbup:

KERZO
05-05-2008, 10:53 AM
I eject like Rza with the force of 20 'Rillaz
Ya won't ever hear how i rhyme much iller
Than any rap killer cos my mind exells
I propell magnetic bullets straight through yer shell
The Rebel D.K, Intellects switchin planes
No shame is how i spit, my verses from my brain
You can never contain this pressure poppin from my vain
I make you jump around more than the 'house of pain'
Immense contents now I hold the golden globe
Starting hunting trips to rip right out ya soul
You dig a deep hole cos yer hiding like a mole
So I spear ya head on my nine-diagram pole
I demon-strate, white noise, coming out ya T.V
Ssssshhhh nigga, ya ain't gonna see me
Theres no need to fear me, My attack's only verbal
I'd rather smoke herbal with my clan on the mental
Intercontinental, i got the heart of angel
I don't breed hate, spot lite placeable
Switched digital when these cats was analog
White dumb sprogs dodge thoughts so on ya go and jog
Descend from the land of haggis, When chins are sagging
Wiggaz are braggin, fuck them dudes, they just lose
I'm braggin rawish style that most will never see
Every line of truth til I'm outta breathe and buried deep
Under a heap switching styles, on track, you can't keep
A eye on my fly rhyme, I slam idiots all week
So check out and dust out before you cause a creative drought
Never doubt my lung capacity I'll always smoke ya out
& under, the table if yer are ever able
To smoke as much as me then you should get a decree
But yer too dumb for rhymes so stick to poetry
Im out, lines continuing in my mind permanently

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
05-06-2008, 12:22 AM
yo fermi son your lyrics have been off the hook lately keep it up man and i love the sig man shit is fucking wildin

KERZO
05-06-2008, 03:14 AM
yo fermi son your lyrics have been off the hook lately keep it up man and i love the sig man shit is fucking wildin

Thanks Fam, Keep up the eloquent Poetry...

KERZO
05-09-2008, 03:51 AM
Freestyle to 'Intellectuals'...

I'm busting off this track, I'm never looking back
My rhymes are only bullets, flying through yer cataracts
I bomb through stacks of porn mags, Don't smoke fags
You lapsed while I'm presentin my relative facts
Mister hardcore, I'm bringin it to ya raw
My verbal force will crack yer motherfuckin jaw
With my funky southpaw, There's no need to see
When I flip like the jap Jet Li on PCP

Ayo, I conquor bunks, Smoke a double dutch
Never meet a scot that rocks the game as much
I'm off the radar like vader the masquerador
Ignite light that shines bright, the zone raider
My mind swells when i propell magnetic thrusts
Scuzz the mic fuzz, buzz up the universe
The Sinner, Paint thinner, Heads instantly combust
The Genius of the planet, Apes, mockin us
The Soul control blows a hole straight through yer door
The More you ask for it the more I stick it to ya slow
The Rapid rampant master of imaginable tangent
The Freaker keeper sweeping niggas off to other planets
Dictate to migrates, then demonstrate my ill skill
Thats the way it goes, So sit back and chill
At the end of the day nobody really gives a fuck
I'll slap ya sleepy head around ya 85 percent schmuck
Head blown off, One shot with a sawn off
While Yer moms too busy sucking grown mens dicks off...

KERZO
06-28-2008, 06:46 AM
I'm the returnable parable, non-donominal
Abdominal stab pulls ya through the parallel
Imaginable land, planned stand, got the upper hand
Thoughts command life, while people strive for new heights

That they won't achieve in a hundred million years
Before they even shed a bucketfull of wasted tears
Mast extinct-shaun of the dead, heads fed
Brains bled into a blender then pleasantly served

So another blow on another doe, major poe
Digital analog switch back to basic magnetic flow
Care-bear, pulling hair outta dumb heads like ric flair
while my rhymes stay electrifying the air

Post it, note it, but never quote it
My mental-rhyme style is too hard to cope with
So go back home where your bitch buries her bone
Cos I'm done sending conscience thoughts to your dome...

singodsuperior
06-28-2008, 06:48 AM
yo, whatup.......yo got the ill wordplay a usual..

KERZO
06-28-2008, 08:58 AM
props ^O^

KERZO
07-12-2008, 02:22 PM
Super trooper cooper superconscious flow
Mega D burger hunting grunt fee fi foe
You fucking kidding me like Jon McEnroe
Switch like will before he dropped the nike air trill

Hurricane rise, I surprise, these five centre guys
Hit em right between their blind eyes
With my T.O.L pen, rise through stages of hell
Rap so well, Ya chumps can't tell

Where my body dwells or my mind hails
Might as well go back home cos ya fell
Off the wagon, ya feet be dragging
Yer hanging around with the lyrical dragon

Look back on a JTS verse, creativity It serves
Mic swerves put on reserve for your hearse
Bedridden, your only gonna get worse
Getting funky with a hunky male junky needle nurse

Grab a 40 bag, spark up the lethal weed
Every day of the week, this shit ain't for the weak
Or skinny freak niggaz shuffling by their feet
Ma bro sadiq, keeps me stoned wit no heat

Hot tomaly sauce, I'm the holy broly boss
Never engross most don't know why they lost
The page on this mighty chapter grade
If you'd just stayed, your head would'nt be so greyed

Static erratic, no apparent damage like a rabid
Demented rabbit, babbling scrabbling, tail waggling
Matter of fact, swing the bat, strike the intellectual ball
Mits fall when I maul em all

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
07-13-2008, 09:30 PM
yo fermi love the lyrics man, keep penning those ill joints man

KERZO
07-14-2008, 01:24 PM
Cheers mang, keep on spitting your abstract poetry bro..

heres some more lyrical madness for ya'll -


Tiger strike brings insight connectin dots
I'm the edinburgh rock, rocking wu joints from our blocks
No threats, no disrespect, My sensors ditect
Lazy cats who slept on the site and get wrecked
With my blunt force, I raise paws and crack jaws
Smack baws with claws, I got no remorse
For dumb phreaks, Heads malkied to next week
The bongs that I toke, will make ya lungs bleed

Instigator, Suffleur, Mic decorator
Arm leg leg arm head, say a prayer
To your god, the man with the mighty rod
Grey beard and balls like bombs that go off
In yer face, Protect ya neck when you embrace
Wu-tang slang, I'm calling out yer mans nostril vase
I here to fuck with plans, knowledge cipher designs
I duck cops that walk with thin blue shines

Table length coke lines, niggaz snortin up their nose
I compose my thoughts while phony MC's pose
I rose from your wack ashes and crap raps kid
Splashes of abstract poetry to ya grid
This shit ain't on demand, But on point
Five percenters, rucking L's to this killa bee joint
A morman in the morning, this shit is dawning
Kiffter kits up like kiff the knightrider horning

Sing a rap, bust a nut, say no to mugs
Fucking with drugs will get ya head fucked up
Apart from weed cos it comes from the seed
Of the tree of life, I smoke flourescent bongs with ice
KP dropping BTSG,
We rockin this joint from here to NY City
I switch back like a switchsknife and ya lost the page
You fucking with johhny cage on the streets of rage
Montage cave design with ochre pens aid te mind

Motoshita kanamara photo taker pishy
Cushy mushy shushi, slicing faces like ishi
The killer busting iller than mecha tech frogs
Terraforming Germans, Photon remote clogs
Up ya T.V, Ya never see me on yer screens
Cos I'm hidden like a ninja, Up a tree
My cannabi induced third eye, Opens up
Then you see why I rhyme easily without a single drop

Of stress, I have this blessed gift to spit with finesse
Taking apart ya verse like taking pawns in Chess
Rocky Rover King, five moves and game over
Left yer face whiter than the white cliffs of dover
Fuck around, the border surround your compound
I compound niggaz skulls with verbal hitting sound
Jew threw a Uey, taking money from the brewery
She threw me like ghost throwing on his jewelry

J.T.S.
07-15-2008, 10:34 AM
All of the above was terrific, and horrific..

THE MASON
07-17-2008, 10:28 PM
Ill joints, keep droppin knowledge on this site, gives me the want to keep writin

KERZO
07-23-2008, 02:06 PM
Yeah..same with the other threads on here exhibiting finesse..

Flippin waffles, davie hassel hoff, pants horrid
Jet set outta orbit I absorb morbid turtured
Souls who stroll on death tolls death digging dirt
Bodies can't keep up, corrupt the whole fucked church

On stage and on page, on point with born rage
Head splayed, uppercut like Johnny cage
With John rambo, Johhny blaze tearing ya face
Tempremental Mental oriental all up in ya place

How the fuck I do it, I simply don't know
Most MC's ain't messin wit my spectacular flow
So fuck it, I sound american when i rap
It's so you dumb yanks can understand my lyrical wax

I lyrically tax wack brats wit clear facts
Listen back and retract the darts stacking fat blacks
Up like pawns, Cover every piece on the chessboard
You could'nt decipher my code cos ya head'll explode

J.T.S.
07-23-2008, 02:33 PM
You crazy with it, and that sig's fire!

Brutally basic, way sick, entering wastelands wasted
Withered, and washed up, dehydrated writing well creations
concepts classified like government created spacestations

Jamming in the name of the lord with Jamacians
my fast cars blazing through freeways, run through tolls ancient
Trolls tasting bacon, worms in the blood aging
Patient hospital hospitality, sexing nurses asian
Facing the mirrior reflection broken, in the newport smoking
Dimes giving me backrubs with baby lotion made me potent
Violent volunteer drowning lifeguards in the ocean
Water country flows wet ya'll in slow motion
six flag gang banging, and rollercoasting
Mail your body to the postman, stab wounds perculiar poking
frosted wheat snatcher, supermarket robbery Ronan

singodsuperior
07-26-2008, 11:10 PM
ill wordplay Fermi and JTS
...Keep it up

KERZO
07-31-2008, 04:30 PM
Cool verses and cheers for the props..quick wordplay shiz -

Ayo..

I freeflight on a single point of light
Plight of man is dug in sand, heads recite
Terrible imaginable poems, running over toes
Cos we don't know em but i strike an inciteful pose
I rose above crows on death rows leavin exposed
Decomposed dukes of haz who have imposed their weak flows
I smoke a blunt, grunt like a cunt, the popular front
Acrobatic stunts, pyromatic jumps up yer gums
The humdrum mud gun, spud dug and jog on
Up the stairs, in pairs, where's the reserves kept
Freeze on the hip, switch willy ducking rich bitches in my wip
Keep on dreaming of skiing out my scheme, lyrically equipped
Fuck where I'm from cos I'm sticking out my neck
Never respect phony ego motherfuckers polishing the deck
Outset, spec wreck, carswept for 2 tets
Swing out in clear tennis full love and all sets, next

KERZO
08-20-2008, 11:10 AM
Ayo i be flippin it, trippin it hopping and a skipping it
Missing links like chinks missing sinks, they dripping it
I cop jewels like i drop fools on stools
Break rules in schools of thought, Geeh Ohh Deez accruals

I sever heads whenever evil thoughts deploy
The scottish rapper with a stronger hearted voice
Artistic mystic ballistic armoured tanks
Tearing up yer cities and folding up yer ranks

Carry on like cabbie cappa don, make a song
Blast on and on wit freestyles that come strong
Slap a bitch with my thick ass dong
Ayo this wack MC style is kinda catching on

I breeze through blocks and freeze at no cops
props goes out to all my hip hop jocks
Coppin heavy leaded verbs corner kerbs smoking herbs
My head has been around the world and it hurts

Individual residual partially medicated
Head inflated then deflated lead balloon thats unstated
Conjugated and desecrated, It's non-related
Position's reinstated, I'm always underrated

J.T.S.
08-20-2008, 03:16 PM
I attack cats with tacks, verses tackle tracks, akward flying axe through acts
Brand new verbal views melt the wack, wax off the wall smack
Belts black, status master, 3rd degree grappling grappler
degrees damage emcee's steez to debris, they suck while i succeed
give me space, as i rob homebase, with unmatched speed
Simmity Sam slam your fam, they fall in graves deep
still digging for diamonds, and artifacts, while theyr'e imprisoned
Tunnel vison, pistol whip whifey like pun if guns are missing
Crimsom wounds, goons living catch everlasting whippings
Strippers i'm stripping but never tipping, slim pimping
slim thug killer, on the realer spitting
Tree trimming, dutch splitting splitter
Backslapping bull shitters rocking bandanas decorated with glitter
Highway enemy sniper, Dodge the shots flying out the Viper
Entice a chicken head on my cock religon, nut on the curtain wiper
close cipher, open tiger style subliminal striker
Verses get in em like a con dropping the soap at Rikers

KERZO
08-22-2008, 03:54 AM
Ayo, i come with the sharp darts, targetting yer heart
Split apart micrological non-logical counterparts
Into divisions, I enliven the metaphorical guise
I surprise ya'll and make you think twice, open yer eyes
Bring the steel, choppin gaps of air straight through yer frame
It's hard to maintain this exquisette superior rap game
Switch names, flip grains, talk in code, melt brains
Empty ego's and it's your empty shell that remains

KERZO
01-13-2009, 09:43 AM
Freestyle to - Mobb Deep & Big Noyd - Give Up The Goods Instrumental


Ayo, It's my first verse after the new sun year
With a few new gears and my full head clear
But my minds clouded from the sunny honey dust
Weed smoke gusts up my lungs til they 'bout to bust

Ayo I been gone a while, Hiding out like 'Style'
International espionage, profile versatile
Soak up the Hip-Hop funk, perform a uber-dunk
While ya light weights are drunk, try'na grab my junk

I debunk ya scollz and roll ya flat out
Honoury field marksmen, thats what I'm about
Taking pot shots and yer spot dawg, You lost on
The first step, Thinking your awake on the game but ya slept

When I delay yer mental train and state and make ya lose yer place
Your detrimental to the black race, your histories erased
But don't fear, I'm always near, so you queers can always cheer
Cos i might not see ya niggaz for another year




peace gawds

KERZO
01-13-2009, 10:36 AM
Fuck this, lets get more ridiculously raw:

Freestyle to Big Shug - Official

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Ayo I blabber and jab a nigga, for a minor matter
Bugz scatters when the blood splatters, you get fried & battered
This is notorious interwebz area son, You get done
Digitally shot directly from my motherboard gun

Fuck shit and duck shit when shit begins to fly quick
Snookerball socks, heads cracked with pool sticks
Meth told me to stick em to it raw
So i stick my dick in a frozen chicken before it thaws

I slugged & bugged out before I took the plug out
Jumping about with clout while you rub one out
Ayo the humdrum listen for the drum with numb heads
But i listen to yer girls pussy farts when she spreads her legs

Listen squire, You possibly could'nt aspire
To acquire the kinda rhymes I send down the wire
And while my style flourishes and grows higher
I leave yer tinder-rhymes looking like a burnt out Aussie fire

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KERZO
02-18-2009, 07:31 AM
RAWER THAN FIRMHANDSHAKAH's BURGER PILE -


Freestyle to 'BIG - Kick In The Door' -

Ayo, I smoke a blunt, before my mind begins to fly
Aspire to get high on the daily, I can't deny
Your plight is held together by my light forces
Sliding humanely through your brain like osmosis

My style is only to reinforce commotion
devotion to the scene exposes your under-emotion
Blow up like an explosion, leave ya in bandages
Pathogens mass affluent, math passages

Add em up before you read the text son
I flex one with specs on, I get wrecked on
Absinthe & Jager, Microphone slayer, degrader
Parading more gayer, than a baseball player

My words are more important, although they imported
Musically distorted, You can't box this kid, I thworted
Yer plan and now ya left with ya weak rhymes unsupported
Your a waste of life and ya shoulda been aborted

Take the time, To express yer mind
Line for line, I bust more iller
Come rain or shine, I crack yer spine
When i combine words they become divine

Ayo I define, the grand design
Ya pigs are refined as swine, ya'll maligned
Passing as mine, Intertwine these rhymes
so finely they can be classed as wine

But now the scripts over and I ripped up this shit
Only you made the best of it, but you aint legit
Your more phoney than Balloon pants on rich kids
With quick fixes, You might as well left the biz

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Rhyme verse 2 vesion 3.9
Upgrade your design complex fine crime shine online
Style might find a line to say all the time
So try not to smile when he's put into exile

Textile glitterati making penile dysfunction while
I Defile secretary's trials, Cummin on mug file's
This shit is worthwhile, you may as well attempt
To hold back & vent cos when i arrive, I torment

Turture Treacherous Bandechos messed with Scottish Metal
Guitar smashed over their heads foot stomp the distortion pedal
You aint fuckin wit my flow, cos your heads are too slow
While minds races off like A F1 car in the snow

Ayo, Ayo, A, A, Ayo, A Yo Blow all the dough
Cos Brock stole the whole fuckin show
Fee-Fi-Foe, chumps gnawing at my toes
I gave so many cold stares, penguins thought they'd froze

KERZO
08-26-2009, 02:17 PM
aint updated this in a min..will lay down some lines in a ''coupla coupla'...

J.T.S.
08-26-2009, 02:29 PM
Glad to see your back!!

KERZO
08-26-2009, 02:48 PM
I'm terribly tormented to texterous battles
Lyrically slaughter lambs, heads shot like cattle
Make a jaw rattle, dismantle ya teeth enamel
I skywalk over ya like that nigga mark hamill

Pull the trigga out, ya get the hump like a camel
Wit a lump in ya throat, ya think ya swallowed an apple
I grapple wimps to the floor like Ken Shamrock
Rockin with my cock out on the block, clocks stop

So stare with bare feet out and nothin to declare
Land a dump in ya hair yer thinkin I'm a bear
Who crapped in yer woods and came through with the goods
Ya think you could stop me but you would get robbed like robin hood

end of...

SID
08-26-2009, 03:02 PM
PURE SCOTTISH FIRE!!!!!!!!


Could you record a video of you spitting them fire barz fermz?

KERZO
08-27-2009, 08:52 AM
PURE SCOTTISH FIRE!!!!!!!!


Could you record a video of you spitting them fire barz fermz?

maybe, depends if i can get ahold of a decent mic cos my current one is shit..

but anyway...

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freestyle to 9th prince - burn bridges...

I'm too militant, If ya'll ain't feelin it
I'll grab ma bat, grip it, rip it then split ya wig
You can't handle this vibe cos It's too hard to hide
Lil snide wannabe's think ima let it slide

But I won't, I'll commit a felony
Then light a candle in your memory
Lets pretend to be friends til the end ya see
That I'm too evil it must be the devil in me

Kinevil canyon jumps sunset til dawn
Keep my rhyme game strong spawn majestic pawns
Take ya queen straight under yer nose son it's gone
Now these morons are droolin out the same song....*bong*

But I don't care cos i adorn my bioware
Armour you can't conjour up how ya gonna fare
In a fight at night you rats be lying in wait
Setting up my snare and wait for ya to grab bait

then they come outta the wood like unforseen bugz
gettin shot for sprayin water pistols at my cuz
Just because someone say they're blood
doesnt mean shit cos they'll quickly stick ya in the mud..


aint finished but it's a start...:b

J.T.S.
08-27-2009, 01:21 PM
'm terribly tormented to texterous battles
Lyrically slaughter lambs, heads shot like cattle
Make a jaw rattle, dismantle ya teeth enamel
I skywalk over ya like that nigga mark hamill

dope

KERZO
08-27-2009, 04:10 PM
just a lil freestyle over some random inst's



Ayo..

I spray bullets on track, slayin black outta fake cats
Remove the bubble wrap, then put them back on the rack
Unpackin expensive rhymes, you're simply a literary hack
I'll smoke ya out til ya take an asthma attack

No fear, No fortune, austere monsoon
I left you strewn across the room
while I wile out and go out like platoon
You stay like a drama goon duke buffoon

Words roll off my tongue like im the pillsbury man
No pre thought plan ayo this is who I am
Take it at face value, if you do your fam
If you don't your just a hip-hop stan

so I leave ya damned with my game, set and match plan





DAMN!

KERZO
08-28-2009, 11:16 AM
This kinetic beat rock left ya for dead
Rise up like bread, They call me zed
Zebedi zipping about like a flourescent banshee
To a degree, theres no one iller than me

I make ya girl go WEE! spray her face with pee
I'm the dirtiest emcee from across the sea
Who would sneak up on ya and slash yer neck with a ski
The deliberating ninja commiting a thrilling spree

Wu-corp's most corniest but complicated killah bee
Jus' pass the key to me for the lambo g
I'll smash it into a tree, jump out and smile with glee
Yeah motherfucka.....thats me

KERZO
07-02-2012, 04:02 AM
Chapter 4 - Revitalized

KERZO
07-02-2012, 04:09 AM
Shhhheeeiiiiiiit
I hit back and flay chumps who snigger like Senator Clay,
Head stays tuned like a satellite array, match play,
Lords make way, having a field day with vigor,
Clotting ya'll minds up like vitamin K,

I disbanded the Paradox, like hot rocks,
Once I dropped back in on the block,
Traded in the stocks after I was finished,
By out-foxing every poxy ox,

My mental vengeance is on point like a poets sentence,
Peoples incompetence in based on their previous repentance,
Humble commonsense is lost when dudes go on the defense,
Which I use against them at their own expense,

This verse is about to end, let's make it abrupt,
My words are like atomic bombs about to erupt,
When I step in to interrupt and deconstruct,
With an aim to disrupt with my disorderly conduct.