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Dr Sleepwalker
11-23-2007, 08:27 PM
I miss you...

Walk with me,.. like my steps seem important/
Talk with me,.. all of me, ..her breath was supportive/
Her stress tore portions, til' the rest poured fortunes../
Explored importance like her meanin' mattered../
Ignored conclusions til' her confusions gathered../
Abusive patterns had her amusement shattered../
I miss you.....
Like I need you,.. like these words I bleed threw../
Like the hurt that feeds you, ..like what's it worth,./
When the hurt, is the only thing that free'd you?../
I believe you, like trust lost meanin'../
I can feel you, even tho my heart stopped beatin'../
Fuck....


I miss you.....

noel411
11-30-2007, 09:29 PM
That was a pretty deep little drop. Quite full of impact without going into explicit detail. Just to the point. I liked it. These bars were great...

"Like I need you,.. like these words I bleed threw../
Like the hurt that feeds you, ..like what's it worth,./
When the hurt, is the only thing that free'd you?../"

Dr Sleepwalker
12-01-2007, 01:29 PM
always appreciated noel, good look fam

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